Here is a draft introduction for the research proposal on using RFID to monitor elephants in Kelantan's forests:
The Asian elephant (Elephas maximus) population in Malaysia has declined significantly over the past decades due to habitat loss and human-elephant conflict. The state of Kelantan contains one of the last remaining elephant habitats in Peninsular Malaysia, yet little is known about the elephants' movements and behaviors within the forests. This research proposes using radio frequency identification (RFID) technology to monitor the elephant population in Kelantan non-invasively. RFID tags will be attached to collars fitted on 20 elephants in Taman Negara National Park, one of the largest protected areas for elephants in Kelantan. The tags
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nonnormative elucidation of what is legally significant in legal practicenonnormative elucidation of what is legally significant in legal practice
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view” we notice that the practice assigns to some of aspects ofview” we notice that the practice assigns to some of aspects of
Itself – institutional directives – a certain kind of binding force. TheItself – institutional directives – a certain kind of binding force. The
unqualified normative question of why those parts of the practice shouldunqualified normative question of why those parts of the practice should
have the contemplated role comes last, and concerns whether the law inhave the contemplated role comes last, and concerns whether the law in
fact has the force it claims for itself – whether the law so understoodfact has the force it claims for itself – whether the law so understood
ought to be obeyed. Interpretivism, by contrast, begins by rejecting theought to be obeyed. Interpretivism, by contrast, begins by rejecting the
claim that nonnormative elucidation of the point of view of the practiceclaim that nonnormative elucidation of the point of view of the practice
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disastrous as the deprivation of medicinal marijuana todisastrous as the deprivation of medicinal marijuana to
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and balanced review of the pertinentand balanced review of the pertinent
published literature that is available onpublished literature that is available on
the subjectthe subject
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12. TaskTask
Write an introduction to a scientificWrite an introduction to a scientific
research proposal:research proposal:
Radio Frequency Identification (RFID) inRadio Frequency Identification (RFID) in
monitoring Elephas Maximus in the statemonitoring Elephas Maximus in the state
of Kelantan’s forests.of Kelantan’s forests.
13. What is the problem?What is the problem?
How are you going to set up the procedure ofHow are you going to set up the procedure of
tagging all Elephas maximus? Where?tagging all Elephas maximus? Where?
How many Elephas will be tagged?How many Elephas will be tagged?
What are the method that can possibly be usedWhat are the method that can possibly be used
to monitor the tag?to monitor the tag?
What are the advantages or limitation of the tag?What are the advantages or limitation of the tag?
Why the research / the studies is very importantWhy the research / the studies is very important