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Class 16
EWRT 1A

2. AGENDA
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Review: Essay #4:
 Counterargument
 Alternative Solutions
Outline
Integrating and Citing Sources
Works Cited Page

3. + The Counterargument
 You
anticipated objections for your homework. Now choose
the two or three most important ones to
acknowledge, accommodate, or refute. If you have written
these out in paragraph form, take this opportunity to revise
them.
 Write
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Acknowledge, accommodate, or refute the objection.
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down objection 1
down objection 2
Acknowledge, accommodate, or refute the objection.
 And
so on.

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Consideration of alternative
solutions and their disadvantages
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You identified alternative solutions for your homework. Now choose those
you will discuss in your essay. Write out each alternative solution and
discuss the disadvantages of it compared to your solution. If you have
written these out in paragraph form, take this opportunity to revise them.
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Write out alternative solution 1
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Write out alternative solution 2
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What are the disadvantages of this solution?
What are the disadvantages of this solution?
Write out alternative solution 3
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What are the disadvantages of this solution?

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Putting it together: The Outline
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Your outline will of course reflect your own writing situation.
Once you have a working outline, you should not hesitate to
change it as necessary while drafting and revising. For
instance, you might find it more effective to hold back on
presenting your own solution until you have discussed
alternative but unacceptable solutions. Or you might find a
better way to order the reasons for adopting your proposal. The
purpose of an outline is to identify the basic features of your
proposal and to help you organize them effectively, not to lock
you into a particular structure.

6. +With your purpose and goals in
mind, organize an outline that includes
the following:
a
clear statement of the problem
 your
thesis statement, announcing the proposed solution
and forecasting your reasons for it
 your
argument for the solution, giving reasons and support
 anticipation
of counterarguments and a response to
objections readers might have about the proposed solution
 your
evaluation of alternative solutions

7. a proposal
+ Here is a possible outline for the problemwhere
readers may not understand
fully:

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Integrating Quotations
Using your library research

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Using Sources
Statistics can be helpful in establishing that the problem exists and
is serious. For example, Patrick O’Malley cites research to
support his assertion that students prefer frequent exams to
fewer high-stakes exams: “A Harvard study notes students‟
„strong preference for frequent evaluation in a course‟ ” (par. 4).
But his argument would have been stronger and possibly more
convincing if he had cited statistics to support the study‟s
conclusion. All of the other writers in this chapter cite statistics in
their proposals. Let us look at some of the ways Karen Kornbluh
uses statistics to define the problem.
Today fully 70 percent of families with children are headed
by two working parents or by an unmarried working parent.
The “traditional family” of the breadwinner and homemaker
has been replaced by the “juggler family,” in which no one
is home fulltime. (par. 1)

10. Kornbluh also compares different time periods to show that the
problem has worsened over the last thirty years. Here are several
examples from paragraph 7. Note that Kornbluh presents statistics
in three different ways: percentages, numbers, and proportion.
Between 1970 and 2000, the percentage of mothers in
the workforce rose from 38 to 67 percent (Smolensky
and Gootman). Moreover, the number of hours worked
by dual-income families has increased dramatically.
Couples with children worked a full 60 hours a week in
1979. By 2000 they were working 70 hours a week
(Bernstein and Kornbluh). And more parents than ever
are working long hours. In 2000, nearly 1 out of every 8
couples with children was putting in 100 hours a week
or more on the job, compared to only 1 out of 12
families in 1970 (Jacobs and Gerson).

11. For statistics to be persuasive, they must be from sources that
readers consider reliable. Researchers‟ trustworthiness, in
turn, depends on their credentials as experts in the field they are
investigating and also on the degree to which they are
disinterested, or free from bias.
Kornbluh provides a Works Cited list of sources that readers
can follow up on to check whether the sources are indeed reliable.
The fact that some of her sources are books published by major
publishers (Harvard University Press and Basic Books, for example)
helps establish their credibility. Other sources she cites are research
institutes (such as New America Foundation, Economic Policy
Institute, and Families and Work Institute) that readers can easily
check out. Another factor that adds to the appearance of reliability is
that Kornbluh cites statistics from a range of sources instead of
relying on only one or two. Moreover, the statistics are current and
clearly relevant to her argument.

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Ask Yourself:
Are
my sources reliable?
Do
they support my assertions
with facts, statistics, or credible
opinions?
Do
I need more support?
Where
will I find it?

13. In-Text Citations
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14. In-Text Quotations
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At the Beginning
“Kitten season is overwhelming, crowded, and very hectic. I can be examining one cat and
there will be 10 or more waiting for me with more coming in one after the other on the other
side of the exam room door. It's never-ending and it affects the cats. They pick up on the
stress we feel," says Christa Raymond, a lead veterinary technician in the Animal Humane
Society (“Cats in Crisis”).
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In the Middle
In any given shelter, they are supposed to hold “strays up to only 5 days” according to
animal shelter specialist Stephanie Watson (6).
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At the End
According to Green Eco Services, “75% of Americans admit to littering within the past five
years.”
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Divided by Your Own Words
“We are always telling people about spay/neuter,” says Kit Belcher, the executive director
of Beltrami Humane Society, and “[t]he responsibility starts the day the animal is born, but
many don’t accept the responsibility” (“Spaying/Neutering” 14).

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Write four sentences that integrate your textual evidence into
your essay: Put one quotation at the beginning, one in the
middle, one at the end, and one broken by your own words.
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Remembering just a few simple rules can help you use the correct
punctuation as you introduce quotations.
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Rule 1: Complete sentence: "quotation." (If you use a complete sentence to
introduce a quotation, use a colon (:) just before the quotation.)
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Rule 2: Someone says, "quotation." (If the word just before the quotation is a
verb indicating someone uttering the quoted words, use a comma. Examples
include the words "says," "said," "states," "asks," and "yells."
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Rule 3: Ending with that “quotation.” (There is no punctuation if the word
"that" comes just before the quotation, as in "the narrator says that.")
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And remember that a semicolon (;) never is used to introduce quotations.

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Block Quotations
 In
the MLA style, use the block form for prose quotations of more than
four typed lines. Indent the quotation an inch (ten character spaces)
from the left margin, as shown in the following example. Double
space, just as you do in your paper.
US Surgeon General Regina Benjamin has, in essence, supported this
position:
Americans will be more likely to change their behavior if they have a
meaningful reward--something more than just reaching a certain
weight or dress size. The real reward is
invigorating, energizing, joyous health. It is a level of health that
allows people to embrace each day and live their lives to the fullest
without disease or disability.

17. + Practice integrating one long quotation
(four or more lines) into your essay.
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Indent the quotation an inch (ten character spaces) from the left
margin, as shown in the following example. Double space, just as you
do in your paper.
Remember these rules:
• Rule 1: Complete sentence: "quotation." (If you use a complete sentence
to introduce a quotation, use a colon (:) just before the quotation.)
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Rule 2: Someone says, "quotation." (If the word just before the quotation
is a verb indicating someone uttering the quoted words, use a comma.
Examples include the words "says," "said," "states," "asks," and "yells."
• Rule 3: Ending with that “quotation.” (There is no punctuation if the word
"that" comes just before the quotation, as in "the narrator says that.")

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Citing Summarized Material
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Currently, the law states that the speed limit in a residential area is 25
miles per hour unless posted otherwise (California Driver Handbook).
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According to the Environmental Protection Agency, it takes six earths
to support an average meat-eating American compared to three earths
for the average vegetarian.
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Since Generation X, major food corporations have peddled addicting
junk food to children from their birth. This has helped to create the
worst obesity epidemic in human history (Fox).
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Despite euthanasia being the very last method to make room in the
shelter, 70 percent of the 3 to 4 million pets euthanized nationwide are
cats (“Pet Statistics”).

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Integrate information from your
sources into your essay using
summarized material.
Summarizing involves putting an idea into your own words.
Summaries are significantly shorter than an original text. It
is a good idea to summarize material when you want to
briefly discuss the main idea(s) of a longer piece.
Summarizing allows you to discuss central points without
reproducing multiple quotation from a single source.
Remember, it is necessary to attribute summarized ideas to
the original source; that is, you must cite even summarized
material.

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Punctuating within Quotations
Although punctuation within a quotation should reproduce the original, some
adaptations may be necessary. Use single quotation marks for quotations within
the quotation:
Original from David Guterson‟s Family Matters (pages 16 – 17)
 E. D. Hirsch also recognizes the connection between family and
learning, suggesting in his discussion of family background and academic
achievement “that the significant part of our children‟s education has been
going on outside rather than inside the schools.”
Quoted Version
 Guterson claims that E. D. Hirsch “also recognizes the connection between
family and learning, suggesting in his discussion of family background and
academic achievement „that the significant part of our children‟s education
has been going on outside rather than inside the schools‟ ” (16-17).

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Punctuation
 If
the quotation ends with a question mark or an
exclamation point, retain the original punctuation:
 “Did you think I loved you?” Edith later asks Dombey
(566).
 If
a quotation ending with a question mark or an
exclamation point concludes your sentence, retain the
question mark or exclamation point, and put the
parenthetical reference and sentence period outside the
quotation marks:
 Edith later asks Dombey, “Did you think I loved
you?” (566).

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Avoiding Grammatical Tangles
When
you incorporate quotations into
your writing, and especially when you
omit words from quotations, you run the
risk of creating ungrammatical
sentences. Two common errors you
should try to avoid are verb
incompatibility, and ungrammatical
omissions.

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Verb Incompatibility.
 When
this error occurs, the verb form in the introductory
statement is grammatically incompatible with the verb form in
the quotation. When your quotation has a verb form that does
not fit in with your text, it is usually possible to use just part of
the quotation, thus avoiding verb incompatibility.
As this sentence illustrates, use the present tense when you refer to
events in a literary work.

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Ungrammatical Omission.
Sometimes omitting text from a quotation leaves you with an ungrammatical
sentence. Two ways of correcting the grammar are (1) adapting the quotation
(with brackets) so that its parts fit together grammatically and (2) using only
one part of the quotation.

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Check your integrated
quotations for grammatical
tangles
Look
 verb
for these problems
incompatibility
 ungrammatical omissions
 sentence fragments.

26. All of the information on the next
slides can be found in your St.
Martin’s Guide.
Alternatively, you can click on the
“MLA Help” link on the homepage of
our website. This will take you to
Purdue Owl, which also offers great
help.
Works Cited
How to make your page

27. Title Centered
Alphabetical Order
Five
spaces

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HOMEWORK
 Put
all of the parts of your essay into the outline we
wrote today. Read your essay aloud to make sure it
is in a logical order. Integrate your research into
your essay. Begin your works cited page.
 Post
#18: your working draft.
 Study
all vocabulary words.
 Bring
a copy of post #18