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WRITING 2
HW: I WILL COLLECT YOUR PICTURE DESCRIPTIONS (ALL
STUDENTS) AND
RESTAURANT PARAGRAPHS (GROUP 2).

PLEASE KEEP YOUR TOEFL OUTLINES FOR PEER REVIEWING.




     IECP, Fall 2012, Nikki Mattson
Agenda
   Peer editing (TOEFL)
   Introduction to process writing
   Introduction to blogging
   Blog set up
Warm up
TOEFL Peer Editing
   Complete the checklist for your partner.
   Re-write any of your own sentences that need
    to be improved (I will collect your sentences
    today.)
   Choose the group’s best thesis + 3 topic
    sentences to share with the class.
   Read + Discuss
   1) How many steps are there in this excerpt (part)?
   2) Which transitions are used?
Model Process Paragraph
   Read the example on pg. 95
   Discussion – answer the questions about the
    model with your partner
Process Writing
   Process paragraph topic sentences (pg. 96)
   Practice 1 ( one a piece of paper to be
    displayed with the document reader)
Blogging
   What is a blog?   Example

 Why blog in writing class?
-share ideas (posting and commenting)
-have a real audience in mind
-create an electronic portfolio of your writing
Class Blog Website:
http://fall12wr2a.blogspot.com/ (Writing 2A)
http://fall12wr2c.blogspot.com/ (Writing 2C)
 
Creating your own blog:
1) Go to www.blogger.com
 
2) Sign in with your Google account (if you already have one) OR create a blog without
a Google account by clicking “get started”.
 
3) Make the title of your blog your firs t na m e ’s (o r wha t y o u p re fe r to be c a lle d ) Blo g
Examples: Nikki’s Blog or Sultan’s Blog
 
4) Make your blog’s address your firs t na m e + fa ll1 2 wr2 a (2 As tud e nts ) o r firs t na m e +
fa ll1 2 wr2 c (2 C s tud e nts )
Examples: nikkifall12wr2a OR nikkifall12wr2c
 
5) W     RITE DOW your username, password, and blog address so you do not forget
                       N
them.
 
 
6) Email me your blog address after you have set up your blog. My
email address is nla12@psu.edu
Example: If I were sending myself my blog address, I would email
http://nikkifall12wr2a.blogspot.com
  to nla12@psu.edu.
 
7) Choose a template (design) for your blog.
 
8) Your first assignment is to complete the "Try it Out" writing on pg. 6 of
your textbook and post it to your blog. This should be completed and
published by 12:00 (2A students) or 3:45 (2C students).
 
9) Make sure to click “publish” after you create a post.
2A Computer Labs
   Polluck 201 (131 computers)
   Thomas 424 (11 computers)
   Boucke 103 (37 computers)

   Take a buddy who is good with technology!
2C Lab
   007 Life Sciences
HW
   8) Your first assignment is to complete the
    "Try it Out" writing on pg. 6 of your textbook
    and post it to your blog. This should be
    completed and published by 12:00 (2A
    students) or 3:45 (2C students).

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Day 11

  • 1. WRITING 2 HW: I WILL COLLECT YOUR PICTURE DESCRIPTIONS (ALL STUDENTS) AND RESTAURANT PARAGRAPHS (GROUP 2). PLEASE KEEP YOUR TOEFL OUTLINES FOR PEER REVIEWING. IECP, Fall 2012, Nikki Mattson
  • 2. Agenda  Peer editing (TOEFL)  Introduction to process writing  Introduction to blogging  Blog set up
  • 4. TOEFL Peer Editing  Complete the checklist for your partner.  Re-write any of your own sentences that need to be improved (I will collect your sentences today.)  Choose the group’s best thesis + 3 topic sentences to share with the class.
  • 5.
  • 6. Read + Discuss  1) How many steps are there in this excerpt (part)?  2) Which transitions are used?
  • 7. Model Process Paragraph  Read the example on pg. 95  Discussion – answer the questions about the model with your partner
  • 8.
  • 9.
  • 10. Process Writing  Process paragraph topic sentences (pg. 96)  Practice 1 ( one a piece of paper to be displayed with the document reader)
  • 11. Blogging  What is a blog? Example  Why blog in writing class? -share ideas (posting and commenting) -have a real audience in mind -create an electronic portfolio of your writing
  • 12. Class Blog Website: http://fall12wr2a.blogspot.com/ (Writing 2A) http://fall12wr2c.blogspot.com/ (Writing 2C)   Creating your own blog: 1) Go to www.blogger.com   2) Sign in with your Google account (if you already have one) OR create a blog without a Google account by clicking “get started”.   3) Make the title of your blog your firs t na m e ’s (o r wha t y o u p re fe r to be c a lle d ) Blo g Examples: Nikki’s Blog or Sultan’s Blog   4) Make your blog’s address your firs t na m e + fa ll1 2 wr2 a (2 As tud e nts ) o r firs t na m e + fa ll1 2 wr2 c (2 C s tud e nts ) Examples: nikkifall12wr2a OR nikkifall12wr2c   5) W RITE DOW your username, password, and blog address so you do not forget N them.    
  • 13. 6) Email me your blog address after you have set up your blog. My email address is nla12@psu.edu Example: If I were sending myself my blog address, I would email http://nikkifall12wr2a.blogspot.com to nla12@psu.edu.   7) Choose a template (design) for your blog.   8) Your first assignment is to complete the "Try it Out" writing on pg. 6 of your textbook and post it to your blog. This should be completed and published by 12:00 (2A students) or 3:45 (2C students).   9) Make sure to click “publish” after you create a post.
  • 14. 2A Computer Labs  Polluck 201 (131 computers)  Thomas 424 (11 computers)  Boucke 103 (37 computers)  Take a buddy who is good with technology!
  • 15. 2C Lab  007 Life Sciences
  • 16. HW  8) Your first assignment is to complete the "Try it Out" writing on pg. 6 of your textbook and post it to your blog. This should be completed and published by 12:00 (2A students) or 3:45 (2C students).