1. Title progression

2. At first I decided to have my
Original
title in just black and white
because I felt that black and
white are two very bold
colours which would
represent my genre very
well.
I knew black and white
would not be very enticing
so I decided to add the read Progressed title
which would add colour
also decided to add crowns
which would help enhance
the title effect on my
audience.

3. From my results I can also
Today 9 of my peers rated
see that me technical skill
my work from 0-5 in 5
and creativeness was my
different category's in order
strongest points there for Feed pack from peer to help me improve my
I know what I really need assessment . title.
to work on to improve
my title.
After getting
feedback from my
peers I have
This was a very identified that my
useful exercise title needs to
because I now portray a clearer
know what I need representation of
to improve on my genre.
therefore the Although it is good feedback, it is not entirely
finish product will reliable because my peers wont necessarily be
be better. interested in my genre therefore my title would
not appeal to them.