18. “Farm” is more general than ”plant”. “Farm” means if you farm an area of land, you grow crops or keep animals on it. ”plant” means: when you plant a seed, plant or tree, you put it into the ground so it will grow there.
19. “Kohlrabi” it is a kind of vegetables looks like cabbage but it is different kind.
22. After a while a group of elephants, who were thirsty, came dancing in their way to the lake; thus they destroyed the farm and killed a number of rabbits.
31. You saw what the elephants had done to our kids and our farm, so what do you think?
32. [Grammar]: the use of the tense >>> “see” should be in the past tense not present.
33. [Grammar]: noun and verb agreement + the use of the tense >>> “the elephants has done” >>>”elephants” is plural noun cannot take “has”; also the verb should be in the past tense not the present tense.
35. [Punctuation]: ?!. >>> It is a question, so it is only needs a question mark, no need for period after it.
36. Every rabbit started to tell what happened to him and wondered what rabbits can do for strong and huge animals like elephants.
37. [Word choice]: not the best choice >>> “complaining”>>> they were not complaining to someone, they all were on the same ship. Each one recounts with pain what happened to him.
38. [Word choice]: incorrect word >>> “asking” means as if they were waiting for an answer. “Wondering” describes their situation better.
40. [Style]: “elephants were strong and huge animals.” This sentence is a part of the previous sentence; they wondered what rabbits can do for strong and huge animals like elephants, so the idea cannot be divided into two sentences.
41. [Punctuation]: !! >>>> No reason to use it, period is what the sentence needs.
43. [Word choice]: ambiguity >>>> “enthusiastically”, it is a children story and this word is not easy to understand by children, so using simple words is better.
44. “We should complain to the lion, he is the king of animals, and he should protect the weak from the strong."
45. [Style]: Exclude this word “because”, no need for it, to make the sentence more smoothly.
62. And he said loudly: ya elephants, the moon --- he is angry with you.
63. [style]: it is one sentence why it is divided into two sentences.”The old rabbit went to the elephants land and climbed over a tree branch, so elephants could not step on him with their heavy feet. He called on them and said: "The Moon send me to you to tell you that he is angry because of you”.
64. [word choice]: not the best choice>>> called on means if you call on someone, you say publicly that you want them to do something or it means you pay them a short visit, so “said loudly” is better.
65. [word choice]: incorrect word >>>”he is angry because of you” >>”angry with you” is the correct word.
66. The elephants looked at the Moon and saw the clouds covering the Moon so they got scared and believed the old rabbit.
72. [meaning]: to clarify the meaning to whom they should apologize is better to write ”to him” than only “there”.
73. The elephants went to the lake and saw the reflection of the moon moving in the water because of the weaves, so that made them more scared than before.
74. [Word choice]: not the best word >>> they “went” somewhere, not “arrived”.
75. [word choice]: incorrect word >>> it is not the moon’ picture, it is the moon’s reflection on the lake.
76. [word choice]: not the best word >>>”moving” is more suitable here than “shaking”.
77. [word choice]: incorrect word >>> The elephants arrived to the lake and saw the picture of the Moon shaking in the water because of waves, and that made them more scared than before. The conjunct or “and” doesn’t give the sense of a result, when they saw the reflection of the moon moving on the water, the y got scared.”So” is the correct word.