letter

1. ©opyright Heroes
Film house
Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ
Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk
14th October 2014
Dear Shai, Max and George,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your
progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual
property.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had a good understanding of the task, with some
interesting ideas and a well planned presentation, which utilized many persuasive devices. There were
frequent, clear links to the brief throughout the presentation, which was pleasing to see our aims being
considered and they clearly understood their target audience.
To be successful, continue with what you are doing and ensure all choices carefully consider the demands of
the brief. More detail on ideas, especially how it will suit the target audience would make the group’s ideas
more successful.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good, with some good links to the task and brief.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the
feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and
some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Sincerely,
ESim
On behalf of Copyright Heroes.