1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Emma,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 22nd October. It was a
very good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can
help get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you made strong, clear
references to the brief we set and some good evidence of awareness of
audience. You had some very good analysis of existing campaigns and methods
of promotion.
I did, however feel that you could develop your comment on audience, showing
how feedback and surveys will impact on your project. At the next stage you
need to be ready to discuss your audience and campaign ideas in much more
detail.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was good and something we are interested
in hearing more about in the future.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com