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levels marking
                               its not that tough, lah!
Thursday, April 26, 12
lesson objectives
                         •   By the end of the lesson, you will
                             learn:

                         •   The parts of a levels marking
                             paragraph

                         •   The different command words

                         •   How to write introduction and
                             conclusion




Thursday, April 26, 12
DEEP-C
                         • In each paragraph, you should use DEEP-C
                           as a check list to ensure that your content is
                           complete.




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D                      escription/
                          definition
  • At the beginning of the paragraph, define/
          describe the measure.

          For Example

                         Reforestation is the meth  od whereby trees are
                         replanted in areas th at used to be forests but
                         have been cleared.
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E                 xplanation/
                         elaboration
  • Continue by explaining the method further,
          or elaborate on relevant points.

          For Example
                         The Ministry of Fo  restry of Kalimantan has
                         implemented a Fore    st and Land Reclamation
                         Initiative Project whe reby local people and
                         companies come togeth     er to replant trees.
Thursday, April 26, 12
E                 xample
  • This is one of the most important
          components! You need to give named
          examples               Directive   Explain/State the
                                                             example
          For Example

                         For example, logging c  ompanies are required
                         to replant 25 comme  rcially valuable trees for
                         every hectare they log.
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P                 ros (benefits/
                           success)
• State/explain the PROS of this method
                                                                   be very
                                            Directive              specific
   For Example

                         This metho d is effective as forests are
                         regenerated quickly as tea   k trees are planted. Teak
                         trees take 5 years to  mature, as compared to 25
                         years for other species  . Therefore, it has helped to
                         restore 90 000km2 of fo     rests in the year 2000.
Thursday, April 26, 12
C                     ons (limitations)
   • State/explain the CONS of this method
   • Because Cambridge values a balanced answer
                                                Directive
        For Example

                        However, this   method is not effective as
              deforestation still takes p lace and it is taking place
   Give evidence of   faster than refores   tation. In the same year,
   limitations & be           250 000km2 o     f trees were cleared.
   specific
Thursday, April 26, 12
remem ber to have a
       Balanced Argument



Thursday, April 26, 12
Introduction
 A typical layout for Levels Marking




                                       Conclusion



Thursday, April 26, 12
qn word:

                          Evaluate,
                           assess,
                           discuss
        Evaluate the strategies taken by the Kalimantan government to manage their
                                           forests.
                    Assess the management strategies used in Kalimantan.
        Discuss the ways forests are managed in Kalimantan, using named examples.
Thursday, April 26, 12
Introduction
 A typical layout for Levels Marking
                                                                Write the point
                                       Paragraph 1: Measure 1   that you are the
                                                                 most confident
                                                                      first.
                                                                   DEEP-C
                                       Paragraph 2: Measure 2
                                                                   DEEP-C

                                       Paragraph 3: Measure 3
                                                                   DEEP-C

                                            Conclusion



Thursday, April 26, 12
now that we have learnt how to write
                            the different paragraphs,

        its time to tackle the
                           Introduction
                                  and
                                          Conclusion




Thursday, April 26, 12
Introduction

                         • The purpose of the “Introduction” is to
                           create the setting for your essay, as with all of
                           your EL Compos.
                         • You would like to introduce the:
                              • Reason why these management
                                  strategies are needed
                               • Give background information about the
                                  scenario
Thursday, April 26, 12
• Reason why these management strategies are needed
 • Give background information about the scenario
       Forests are very important resources as they regulate
        the Earth’s temperature and water cycle. They also
          provide us with valuable resources like timber.
       Therefore it is very important to manage our forests
                              carefully.




Thursday, April 26, 12
• Reason why these management strategies are needed
 • Give background information about the scenario
          Forests have been exploited by Man for food and
      resources in the past. However, this exploitation is now
        taking place at such alarming rates we are losing our
       forests. Therefore, it is important that we manage our
      forests carefully. In this essay, I will be discussing 3 such
                        management strategies.

                                Making the link to my content
                                 in the following paragraphs.


Thursday, April 26, 12
Conclusion

                         •   The purpose of the “Conclusion” is to sum up your
                             essay. This is also one of the factors that will “build an
                             impression” on your marker.

                         •   You can conclude by:

                                 •   Summary of methods

                                 •   Giving judgement statement / Comparison

                                 •   Establishing new insight



Thursday, April 26, 12
•       Summary of methods

  •       Giving judgement statement / Comparison

  •       Establishing new insight



           In conclusion, there are several ways to manage our
          forests. They are reforestation, controlled logging and
                               conservation.



                                                easy peasy, yea?


Thursday, April 26, 12
•       Summary of methods

  •       Giving judgement statement / Comparison

  •       Establishing new insight             Judgement statement

          In conclusion, I feel that reforestation is the best
            method out of the 3 mentioned in the essay.
     This is because reforestation is a good balance between
       allowing logging to take place as well as ensuring that
     trees are being restored as a sustainable way to manage
                              our forests.

             Explaining my judgement briefly.
                                                       kinda like SS?
Thursday, April 26, 12
                                                    still manageable lah!
•       Summary of methods

  •       Giving judgement statement / Comparison
                                                         New insight;
  •       Establishing new insight                     something out of the
                                                              norm
        In conclusion, I feel that there is no single best method
         to manage forests as each of the methods have their
          own pros and cons. Different methods can be more
            effective in different places, so it is important to
        analyse the situation in a particular place before using a
        specific method. Sometimes, a combination of methods
                could be used to maximize their benefits.

                         Explanation and elaboration

                                                           oh YEA!
Thursday, April 26, 12
well,




Thursday, April 26, 12
                         HANG IN THERE

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Levels marking Natural Vegetation

  • 1. levels marking its not that tough, lah! Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 2. lesson objectives • By the end of the lesson, you will learn: • The parts of a levels marking paragraph • The different command words • How to write introduction and conclusion Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 3. DEEP-C • In each paragraph, you should use DEEP-C as a check list to ensure that your content is complete. Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 4. D escription/ definition • At the beginning of the paragraph, define/ describe the measure. For Example Reforestation is the meth od whereby trees are replanted in areas th at used to be forests but have been cleared. Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 5. E xplanation/ elaboration • Continue by explaining the method further, or elaborate on relevant points. For Example The Ministry of Fo restry of Kalimantan has implemented a Fore st and Land Reclamation Initiative Project whe reby local people and companies come togeth er to replant trees. Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 6. E xample • This is one of the most important components! You need to give named examples Directive Explain/State the example For Example For example, logging c ompanies are required to replant 25 comme rcially valuable trees for every hectare they log. Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 7. P ros (benefits/ success) • State/explain the PROS of this method be very Directive specific For Example This metho d is effective as forests are regenerated quickly as tea k trees are planted. Teak trees take 5 years to mature, as compared to 25 years for other species . Therefore, it has helped to restore 90 000km2 of fo rests in the year 2000. Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 8. C ons (limitations) • State/explain the CONS of this method • Because Cambridge values a balanced answer Directive For Example However, this method is not effective as deforestation still takes p lace and it is taking place Give evidence of faster than refores tation. In the same year, limitations & be 250 000km2 o f trees were cleared. specific Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 9. remem ber to have a Balanced Argument Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 10. Introduction A typical layout for Levels Marking Conclusion Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 11. qn word: Evaluate, assess, discuss Evaluate the strategies taken by the Kalimantan government to manage their forests. Assess the management strategies used in Kalimantan. Discuss the ways forests are managed in Kalimantan, using named examples. Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 12. Introduction A typical layout for Levels Marking Write the point Paragraph 1: Measure 1 that you are the most confident first. DEEP-C Paragraph 2: Measure 2 DEEP-C Paragraph 3: Measure 3 DEEP-C Conclusion Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 13. now that we have learnt how to write the different paragraphs, its time to tackle the Introduction and Conclusion Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 14. Introduction • The purpose of the “Introduction” is to create the setting for your essay, as with all of your EL Compos. • You would like to introduce the: • Reason why these management strategies are needed • Give background information about the scenario Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 15. • Reason why these management strategies are needed • Give background information about the scenario Forests are very important resources as they regulate the Earth’s temperature and water cycle. They also provide us with valuable resources like timber. Therefore it is very important to manage our forests carefully. Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 16. • Reason why these management strategies are needed • Give background information about the scenario Forests have been exploited by Man for food and resources in the past. However, this exploitation is now taking place at such alarming rates we are losing our forests. Therefore, it is important that we manage our forests carefully. In this essay, I will be discussing 3 such management strategies. Making the link to my content in the following paragraphs. Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 17. Conclusion • The purpose of the “Conclusion” is to sum up your essay. This is also one of the factors that will “build an impression” on your marker. • You can conclude by: • Summary of methods • Giving judgement statement / Comparison • Establishing new insight Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 18. Summary of methods • Giving judgement statement / Comparison • Establishing new insight In conclusion, there are several ways to manage our forests. They are reforestation, controlled logging and conservation. easy peasy, yea? Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 19. Summary of methods • Giving judgement statement / Comparison • Establishing new insight Judgement statement In conclusion, I feel that reforestation is the best method out of the 3 mentioned in the essay. This is because reforestation is a good balance between allowing logging to take place as well as ensuring that trees are being restored as a sustainable way to manage our forests. Explaining my judgement briefly. kinda like SS? Thursday, April 26, 12 still manageable lah!
  • 20. Summary of methods • Giving judgement statement / Comparison New insight; • Establishing new insight something out of the norm In conclusion, I feel that there is no single best method to manage forests as each of the methods have their own pros and cons. Different methods can be more effective in different places, so it is important to analyse the situation in a particular place before using a specific method. Sometimes, a combination of methods could be used to maximize their benefits. Explanation and elaboration oh YEA! Thursday, April 26, 12
  • 21. well, Thursday, April 26, 12 HANG IN THERE