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                                                                                                               Titles are
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                                                                                                               centered
written in                   Toward a Recovery of Nineteenth Century Farming Handbooks
                                                                                                               and written
this order:
                                                                                                               in 12-point,
day, month,
and year.
                      While researching texts written about nineteenth century farming, I found a few          Times New
                                                                                                               Roman
                                                                                                               font. The
               authors who published books about the literature of nineteenth century farming,                 title is not
                                                                                                               bolded,
               particularly agricultural journals, newspapers, pamphlets, and brochures. These authors         underlined,
                                                                                                               or
The                                                                                                            italicized.
introduc-      often placed the farming literature they were studying into an historical context by
tory
paragraph,     discussing the important events in agriculture of the year in which the literature was
or introduc-                                                                                                   The thesis
tion, should                                                                                                   statement
set the        published (see Demaree, for example). However, while these authors discuss journals,            usually is
context for                                                                                                    the last
the rest of                                                                                                    sentence of
the paper.
               newspapers, pamphlets, and brochures, I could not find much discussion about another
                                                                                                               the
Tell your                                                                                                      introduc-
readers        important source of farming knowledge: farming handbooks. My goal in this paper is to           tion.
why you
are writing
and why        bring this source into the agricultural literature discussion by connecting three               The thesis
                                                                                                               is a clear
your topic
                                                                                                               position
is             agricultural handbooks from the nineteenth century with nineteenth century agricultural         that you
important.
                                                                                                               will support
                                                                                                               and
               history.
                                                                                                               develop
                                                                                                               throughout
                      To achieve this goal, I have organized my paper into four main sections, two of          your paper.
                                                                                                               This
If your                                                                                                        sentence
               which have sub-sections. In the first section, I provide an account of three important          guides or
paper is
long, you                                                                                                      controls
may want       events in nineteenth century agricultural history: population and technological changes,        your paper.
to write
about how
your paper
               the distribution of scientific new knowledge, and farming’s influence on education. In the
is
organized.     second section, I discuss three nineteenth century farming handbooks in connection with
This will
help your
readers        the important events described in the first section. I end my paper with a third section that
follow your
ideas.                                                                                                   MLA requires
               offers research questions that could be answered in future versions of this paper and     double-spacing
                                                                                                         throughout the
                                                                                                         document; do
                                                                                                         not single-space
                                                                                                         any part of the
                                                                                                         document.
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               conclude with a fourth section that discusses the importance of expanding this particular            Use
                                                                                                                    personal
               project. I also include an appendix after the Works Cited that contains images of the three          pronouns (I,
                                                                                                                    we, us,
                                                                                                                    etc.) at
               handbooks I examined. Before I can begin the examination of the three handbooks,                     your
                                                                                                                    instructor’s
                                                                                                                    discretion.
               however, I need to provide an historical context in which the books were written, and it is
                                          When using headings in     The headings used here follow an A-, B-, C-
               to this that I now turn.   MLA, title the main        level system to break the text into smaller
                                          sections (B-level          sections. The different levels help organize
                                                                                                                    Headers,
                                          headers) in a different    the paper and maintain consistency in the
                                                                                                                    though not
                                          style font than the        paper’s organization. You may come up with
                                                                                                                    required by
               HISTORICAL CONTEXT         paper’s title, e.g., in    your own headings as long as they are
                                                                                                                    MLA style,
                                          small caps.                consistent.
The                                                                                                                 help the
paragraph                                                                                                           overall
after the B-
               The nineteenth century saw many changes to daily American life with an increase in                   structure
level                                                                                                               and
                                                                                                                    organiza-
headers        population, improved methods of transportation, developments in technology, and the
start flush                                                                                                         tion of a
left after                                                                                                          paper. Use
the            rise in the importance of science. These events impacted all aspects of nineteenth century           them at
headings.                                                                                                           your
                                                                                                                    instructor’s
               American life, most significantly those involved in slavery and the Civil War, but a large           discretion
                                                                                                                    to help
               part of American life was affected, a part that is quite often taken for granted: the life of        your reader
                                                                                                                    follow your
                                                                                                                    ideas.
               the American farmer.


Use
               Population and Technological Changes. One of the biggest changes, as seen in
another
style, e.g.,   nineteenth century America’s census reports, is the dramatic increase in population. The
italics, to
differen-                                                                                                           If there is a
tiate the C-   1820 census reported that over 10 million people were living in America; of those 10
                                                                                                                    gramma-
level                                                                                                               tical,
headers        million, over 2 million were engaged in agriculture. Ten years prior to that, the 1810               mechanical,
from the B-                                                                                                         or spelling
level                                                                                                               error in the
headers.       census reported over 7 million people were living in the states; there was no category for           text you
The                                                                                                                 are citing,
paragraph
continues
               people engaged in agriculture. In this ten-year time span, then, agriculture experienced             type the
                                                                                                                    quote as it
directly                                                                                                            appears.
after the      significant improvements and changes that enhanced its importance in American life.                  Follow the
header.                                                                                                             quote with
                       One of these improvements was the developments of canals and steamboats,                     “[sic].”


               which allowed farmers to “sell what has previously been unsalable [sic]” and resulted in a

               “substantial increase in [a farmer’s] ability to earn income” (Danhof 5). This
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              improvement allowed the relations between the rural and urban populations to strengthen,
                                                                                                             Use
              resulting in an increase in trade. The urban population (defined as having over 2,500          footnotes
                                                                                                             to explain a
              inhabitants) in the northern states increased rapidly after 1820.1 This increase               point in
                                                                                                             your paper
                                                                                                             that does
              accompanied the decrease in rural populations, as farmers who “preferred trade,                not quite
                                                                                                             fit in with
              transportation, or ‘tinkering’” to the tasks of tending to crops and animals found great       the rest of
                                                                                                             the
                                                                                                             paragraph.
              opportunities in the city (Danhof 7). Trade and transportation thus began to influence
                                                                                                             Insert the
In-text       farming life significantly. Before 1820, the rural community accounted for eighty percent      footnote
citations                                                                                                    directly
occur after                                                                                                  after the
the quote     of consumption of farmers’ goods (Hurt 127). With the improvements in transportation,          phrase or
but before                                                                                                   clause to
the period.   twenty-five percent of farmers’ products were sold for commercial gain, and by 1825,           which it
The                                                                                                          refers.
author’s/
authors’      farming “became a business rather than a way of life” (Hurt 128). This business required
name/s go
before the
              farmers to specialize their production and caused most farmers to give “less attention to
page
number
with no       the production of surplus commodities like wheat, tobacco, pork, or beef” (Hurt 128).
comma in
between.
              The increase in specialization encouraged some farmers to turn to technology to increase

              their production and capitalize on commercial markets (Hurt 172).

                     The technology farmers used around 1820 was developed from three main

              sources: Europe, coastal Indian tribes in America, and domestic modifications made from

              the first two sources’ technologies. Through time, technology improved, and while some

              farmers clung to their time-tested technologies, others were eager to find alternatives to

              these technologies. These farmers often turned to current developments in Great Britain

Footnotes     and received word of their technological improvements through firsthand knowledge by
should be
double-
spaced, in
              talking with immigrants and travelers. Farmers also began planning and conducting
12-point
Times New
Roman
font, and
indented             1. Danhof includes “Delaware, Maryland, all states north of the Potomac and
0.5” from
the margin.   Ohio rivers, Missouri, and states to its north” when referring to the northern states (11).
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                experiments, and although they lacked a truly scientific approach, these farmers engaged

                in experiments to obtain results and learn from the results.2 Agricultural organizations

                were then formed to “encourage . . . experimentation, hear reports, observe results, and

If you          exchange critical comments” (Danhof 53). Thus, new knowledge was transmitted orally
delete                                                                                                             Transitions
words from                                                                                                         connect
the original
                from farmer to farmer, immigrant to farmer, and traveler to farmer, which could result in          paragraphs
quote,                                                                                                             and unify
insert three    the miscommunication of this new scientific knowledge. Therefore, developments were                writing.
ellipses
with a                                                                                                             Notice how
space           made for knowledge to be transmitted and recorded in a more permanent, credible way:               this
between                                                                                                            paragraph
                                                                                                                   ends with a
and after       by print.                                                                                          brief
each one.
                                                                                                                   mention of
                                                                                                                   print
                The Distribution of New Knowledge. Before 1820 and prior to the new knowledge                      sources and
                                                                                                                   the next
                                                                                                                   paragraph
                farmers were creating, farmers who wanted print information about agriculture had their            begins with
                                                                                                                   a
Body            choice of agricultural almanacs and even local newspapers to receive information                   discussion
paragraphs                                                                                                         of print
have these                                                                                                         informa-
four            (Danhof 54). After 1820, however, agricultural writing took more forms than almanacs               tion.
elements: a
transition, a
topic
                and newspapers. From 1820 to 1870, agricultural periodicals were responsible for
sentence,
evidence,       spreading new knowledge among farmers. In his published dissertation The American
and a brief
wrap-up                                                                                                          Titles of
sentence.       Agricultural Press 1819-1860, Albert Lowther Demaree presents a “description of the              published
                                                                                                                 works
Notice how      general content of [agricultural journals]” (xi). These journals began in 1819 and were          (books,
                                                                                                                 journals,
this
                                                                                                                 films, etc.)
paragraph
                written for farmers, with topics devoted to “farming, stock raising, [and] horticulture”         are now
begins with
a transition.                                                                                                    italicized
                (12). The suggested “birthdate” of American agricultural journalism is April 2, 1819             instead of
The topic
                                                                                                                 underlined.
sentence
follows the
transition,
                when John S. Skinner published his periodical American Farmer in Baltimore. Demaree
and it tells
readers         writes that Skinner’s periodical was the “first continuous, successful agricultural
what the
paragraph
is about.       periodical in the United States” and “served as a model for hundreds of journals that
Direct
quotes are
used to                2. For the purposes of this paper, “science” is defined as it was in nineteenth
support
this topic
sentence.       century agriculture: conducting experiments and engaging in research.
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The            succeeded it” (19). In the midst of the development of the journal, farmers began writing
paragraph
ends with a    handbooks. Not much has been written on the handbooks’ history, aside from the fact that
wrap-up
sentence,
“Despite       C.M. Saxton & Co. in New York was the major handbook publisher. Despite the lack of
the
lack . . .”,
while
               information about handbooks, and as can be seen in my discussion below, these
transi-
tioning to     handbooks played a significant role in distributing knowledge among farmers and in
the next
paragraph.
               educating young farmers, as I now discuss.

               Farming’s Influence on Education. One result of the newly circulating print information

               was the “need for acquiring scientific information upon which could be based a rational

               technology” that could “be substituted for the current diverse, empirical practices”

               (Danhof 69). In his 1825 book Nature and Reason Harmonized in the Practice of

               Husbandry, John Lorain begins his first chapter by stating that “[v]ery erroneous theories

               have been propagated” resulting in faulty farming methods (1). His words here create a

               framework for the rest of his book, as he offers his readers narratives of his own trials and

               errors and even dismisses foreign, time-tested techniques farmers had held on to: “The

               knowledge we have of that very ancient and numerous nation the Chinese, as well as the

               very located habits and costumes of this very singular people, is in itself insufficient to

               teach us . . .” (75). His book captures the call and need for scientific experiments to

               develop new knowledge meant to be used in/on/with American soil, which reflects some

               farmers’ thinking of the day.

                      By the 1860s, the need for this knowledge was strong enough to affect education.

               John Nicholson anticipated this effect in 1820 in the “Experiments” section of his book

               The Farmer’s Assistant; Being a Digest of All That Relates to Agriculture and the

               Conducting of Rural Affairs; Alphabetically Arranged and Adapted for the United States:
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Use block
quotes
                              Perhaps it would be well, if some institution were devised, and supported
when
quotations                    at the expense of the State, which would be so organized as would tend
are longer
than four-
typed lines.                  most effectually to produce a due degree of emulation among Farmers, by

Block                         rewards and honorary distinctions conferred by those who, by their
quotes
begin on a
new line,
                              successful experimental efforts and improvements, should render
are double-
spaced, and                   themselves duly entitled to them.3 (92)
are
indented 1”
from the       Part of Nicholson’s hope was realized in 1837 when Michigan established their state
margin. Do
not use        university, specifying that “agriculture was to be an integral part of the curriculum”
quotation
marks. The
citation       (Danhof 71). Not much was accomplished, however, much to the dissatisfaction of
information
(author
name and
               farmers, and in 1855, the state authorized a new college to be “devoted to agriculture and
page
number)        to be independent of the university” (Danhof 71). The government became more involved
follows the
quote’s end
punctua-
               in the creation of agricultural universities in 1862 when President Lincoln passed the
tion.
               Morrill Land Grant College Act, which begins with this phrase: “AN ACT Donating

               Public Lands to the several States and Territories which may provide Colleges for the

               Benefit of Agriculture and Mechanic Arts [sic].” The first agricultural colleges formed

Periods        under the act suffered from a lack of trained teachers and “an insufficient base of
occur
before the     knowledge,” and critics claimed that the new colleges did not meet the needs of farmers
end
quotation
mark if the    (Hurt 193).
citation
information
is given
                      3. Please note that any direct quotes from the nineteenth century texts are written
already in
the            in their original form, which may contain grammar mistakes according to twenty-first
sentence.

               century grammar rules.
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        Congress addressed these problems with the then newly formed United States

Department of Agriculture (USDA). The USDA and Morrill Act worked together to form

“. . . State experiment stations and extension services . . . [that] added [to]

. . . localized research and education . . .” (Baker et al. 415). The USDA added to the
                                                                                               If a source
scientific and educational areas of the agricultural field in other ways by including          has more
                                                                                               than two
                                                                                               authors,
research as one of the organization’s “foundation stone” (367) and by including these
                                                                                               use the
                                                                                               first
seven objectives:                                                                              author’s
                                                                                               last name
                                                                                               followed by
                (1) [C]ollecting, arranging, and publishing statistical and other useful       “et al.”

                agricultural information; (2) introducing valuable plants and animals; (3)

                answering inquiries of farmers regarding agriculture; (4) testing

                agricultural implements; (5) conducting chemical analyses of soils, grains,

                fruits, plants, vegetables, and manures; (6) establishing a professorship of

                botany and entomology; and (7) establishing an agricultural library and

                museum. (Baker et al. 14)

These objectives were a response to farmers’ needs at the time, mainly to the need for

experiments, printed distribution of new farming knowledge, and education. Isaac

Newton, the first Commissioner of Agriculture, ensured these objectives would be

realized by stressing research and education with the ultimate goal of helping farmers

improve their operations (Hurt 190).

        Before the USDA assisted in the circulation of knowledge, however, farmers

wrote about their own farming methods. This brings me to my next section in which I

examine three handbooks written by farmers and connect my observations of the texts
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               with the discussion of agricultural history I have presented above.

               Note: Sections of this paper have been deleted to shorten the length of the paper
                               The conclusion
                               “wraps up” what you
               CONCLUSION      have been discussing
                               in your paper.

Because        From examining Drown’s, Allen’s, and Crozier and Henderson’s handbooks in light of
this is a B-
level
header, the    nineteenth century agricultural history, I can say that science and education seem to have
paragraph
is not
               had a strong influence on how and why these handbooks were written. The authors’ ethos
intended.

               is created by how they align themselves as farmers with science and education either by
The
conclusion
               supporting or by criticizing them. Regardless of their stance, the authors needed to create
should
restate the
following:     an ethos to gain an audience, and they did this by including tables of information,
your topic,
your topic’s
importance,
               illustrations of animals and buildings, reasons for educational reform, and pieces of
your thesis,
and your       advice to young farmers in their texts. It would be interesting to see if other farming
supporting
points.
               handbooks of the same century also convey a similar ethos concerning science and

               education in agriculture. Recovering more handbooks in this way could lead to a better,

               more complete understanding of farming education, science’s role in farming and

               education, and perhaps even an understanding of the rhetoric of farming handbooks in the

               nineteenth century.                                                                       You may end
                                                                                                         your
                                                                                                         conclusion
                                                                                                         with a call for
                                                                                                         action or
                                                                                                         future
                                                                                                         research
                                                                                                         possibilities.
                                                                                                         You might
                                                                                                         also include
                                                                                                         what this
                                                                                                         would add to
                                                                                                         your topic’s
                                                                                                         field.
The Works Cited
                    page is a list of
                                                                                                   Angeli 9
The Works           all the sources
Cited page          cited in your
begins on a         paper.                               Works Cited
new page.
Center the                                                                                                      MLA now
title “Works      Allen, R.L. The American Farm Book; or Compend of American Agriculture; Being a               requires all
Cited”                                                                                                          sources to
without
underlining,
                          Practical Treatise on Soils, Manures, Draining, Irrigation, Grasses, Grain,           have a
                                                                                                                publication
bolding, or                                                                                                     marker. For
italicizing it.           Roots, Fruits, Cotton, Tobacco, Sugar Cane, Rice, and Every Staple Product of         example,
If there is                                                                                                     books
only one                                                                                                        receive the
entry, title              the United States with the Best Methods of Planting, Cultivating, and Preparation
                                                                                                                marker
this page                                                                                                       “Print”
“Work                     for Market. New York: Saxton, 1849. Print.                                            after the
Cited.”                                                                                                         citation.

                  Baker, Gladys L., Wayne D. Rasmussen, Vivian Wiser, and Jane M. Porter. Century of

                          Service: The First 100 Years of the United States Department of Agriculture.
                                                                                                              If a print
                          [Federal Government], 1996. Print.                                                  source
                                                                                                              does not
                                                                                                              list a
MLA no            Danhof, Clarence H. Change in Agriculture: The Northern United States, 1820-1870.           publisher
longer
                                                                                                              and you
requires
URLs in the               Cambridge, MA: Harvard UP, 1969. Print.                                             can infer
                                                                                                              who the
Works
Cited.                                                                                                        publisher is,
Instead,
                  Demaree, Albert Lowther. The American Agricultural Press 1819-1860. New York:               place the
you must                                                                                                      publisher’s
                                                                                                              name in
write                     Columbia UP, 1941. Print.
                                                                                                              brackets.
“Web”
before the
date of
                  Drown, William and Solomon Drown. Compendium of Agriculture or the Farmer’s
access in
the entry.                Guide, in the Most Essential Parts of Husbandry and Gardening; Compiled from
This serves
as the
entry’s                   the Best American and European Publications, and the Unwritten Opinions of
publication
marker.
                          Experienced Cultivators. Providence, RI: Field, 1824. Print.

                  “Historical Census Browser.” University of Virginia Library. 2007. Web. 6 Dec. 2008.

                  Hurt, R. Douglas. American Agriculture: A Brief History. Ames, IA: Iowa State UP,

                          1994. Print.

                  Lorain, John. Nature and Reason Harmonized in the Practice of Husbandry.

                          Philadelphia: Carey, 1825. Print.

                  Morrill Land Grant Act of 1862. Prairie View A&M. 2003. Web. 6 Dec. 2008.
Angeli 10

Nicholson, John. The Farmer’s Assistant; Being a Digest of All That Relates to

       Agriculture and the Conducting of Rural Affairs; Alphabetically Arranged and

       Adapted for the United States. [Philadelphia]: Warner, 1820. Print.
Your name,                                                                                         Angeli 1
the course
number,                                                                                            Page numbers
                                                      Green text boxes                             begin on and
the            Elizabeth L. Angeli                    contain explanations                         with page 1.
professor’s
                                                      of MLA style                                 Type your
name, and
the date of    Professor Patricia Sullivan            guidelines.                                  name next to
the paper                                                                                          the page
are double-                                                                                        number so
               English 624                            Blue boxes contain                           that it
spaced in
                                                      directions for writing                       appears on
12-point,
                                                      and citing in MLA
Times New      14 December 2008                       style.
                                                                                                   every page.
Roman
font. Dates
                                                                                                               Titles are
in MLA are
                                                                                                               centered
written in                   Toward a Recovery of Nineteenth Century Farming Handbooks
                                                                                                               and written
this order:
                                                                                                               in 12-point,
day, month,
and year.
                      While researching texts written about nineteenth century farming, I found a few          Times New
                                                                                                               Roman
                                                                                                               font. The
               authors who published books about the literature of nineteenth century farming,                 title is not
                                                                                                               bolded,
               particularly agricultural journals, newspapers, pamphlets, and brochures. These authors         underlined,
                                                                                                               or
The                                                                                                            italicized.
introduc-      often placed the farming literature they were studying into an historical context by
tory
paragraph,     discussing the important events in agriculture of the year in which the literature was
or introduc-                                                                                                   The thesis
tion, should                                                                                                   statement
set the        published (see Demaree, for example). However, while these authors discuss journals,            usually is
context for                                                                                                    the last
the rest of                                                                                                    sentence of
the paper.
               newspapers, pamphlets, and brochures, I could not find much discussion about another
                                                                                                               the
Tell your                                                                                                      introduc-
readers        important source of farming knowledge: farming handbooks. My goal in this paper is to           tion.
why you
are writing
and why        bring this source into the agricultural literature discussion by connecting three               The thesis
                                                                                                               is a clear
your topic
                                                                                                               position
is             agricultural handbooks from the nineteenth century with nineteenth century agricultural         that you
important.
                                                                                                               will support
                                                                                                               and
               history.
                                                                                                               develop
                                                                                                               throughout
                      To achieve this goal, I have organized my paper into four main sections, two of          your paper.
                                                                                                               This
If your                                                                                                        sentence
               which have sub-sections. In the first section, I provide an account of three important          guides or
paper is
long, you                                                                                                      controls
may want       events in nineteenth century agricultural history: population and technological changes,        your paper.
to write
about how
your paper
               the distribution of scientific new knowledge, and farming’s influence on education. In the
is
organized.     second section, I discuss three nineteenth century farming handbooks in connection with
This will
help your
readers        the important events described in the first section. I end my paper with a third section that
follow your
ideas.                                                                                                   MLA requires
               offers research questions that could be answered in future versions of this paper and     double-spacing
                                                                                                         throughout a
                                                                                                         document; do
                                                                                                         not single-space
                                                                                                         any part of the
                                                                                                         document.
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               conclude with a fourth section that discusses the importance of expanding this particular            Use
                                                                                                                    personal
               project. I also include an appendix after the Works Cited that contains images of the three          pronouns (I,
                                                                                                                    we, us,
                                                                                                                    etc.) at
               handbooks I examined. Before I can begin the examination of the three handbooks,                     your
                                                                                                                    instructor’s
                                                                                                                    discretion.
               however, I need to provide an historical context in which the books were written, and it is
                                          When using headings in     The headings used here follow an A-, B-, C-
               to this that I now turn.   MLA, title the main        level system to break the text into smaller
                                          sections (B-level          sections. The different levels help organize
                                                                                                                    Headers,
                                          headers) in a different    the paper and maintain consistency in the
                                                                                                                    though not
                                          style font than the        paper’s organization. You may come up with
                                                                                                                    required by
               HISTORICAL CONTEXT         paper’s title, e.g., in    your own headings as long as they are
                                                                                                                    MLA style,
                                          small caps.                consistent.
The                                                                                                                 help the
paragraph                                                                                                           overall
after the B-
               The nineteenth century saw many changes to daily American life with an increase in                   structure
level                                                                                                               and
                                                                                                                    organiza-
headers        population, improved methods of transportation, developments in technology, and the
start flush                                                                                                         tion of a
left after                                                                                                          paper. Use
the            rise in the importance of science. These events impacted all aspects of nineteenth century           them at
headings.                                                                                                           your
                                                                                                                    instructor’s
               American life, most significantly those involved in slavery and the Civil War, but a large           discretion
                                                                                                                    to help
               part of American life was affected, a part that is quite often taken for granted: the life of        your reader
                                                                                                                    follow your
                                                                                                                    ideas.
               the American farmer.


Use
               Population and Technological Changes. One of the biggest changes, as seen in
another
style, e.g.,   nineteenth century America’s census reports, is the dramatic increase in population. The
italics, to
differen-                                                                                                           If there is a
tiate the C-   1820 census reported that over 10 million people were living in America; of those 10
                                                                                                                    gramma-
level                                                                                                               tical,
headers        million, over 2 million were engaged in agriculture. Ten years prior to that, the 1810               mechanical,
from the B-                                                                                                         or spelling
level                                                                                                               error in the
headers.       census reported over 7 million people were living in the states; there was no category for           text you
The                                                                                                                 are citing,
paragraph
continues
               people engaged in agriculture. In this ten-year time span, then, agriculture experienced             type the
                                                                                                                    quote as it
directly                                                                                                            appears.
after the      significant improvements and changes that enhanced its importance in American life.                  Follow the
header.                                                                                                             quote with
                       One of these improvements was the developments of canals and steamboats,                     “[sic].”


               which allowed farmers to “sell what has previously been unsalable [sic]” and resulted in a

               “substantial increase in [a farmer’s] ability to earn income” (Danhof 5). This
Angeli 3

              improvement allowed the relations between the rural and urban populations to strengthen,
                                                                                                            Use
              resulting in an increase in trade. The urban population (defined as having over 2,500         footnotes
                                                                                                            to explain a
              inhabitants) in the northern states increased rapidly after 1820.1 This increase              point in
                                                                                                            your paper
                                                                                                            that does
              accompanied the decrease in rural populations, as farmers who “preferred trade,               not quite
                                                                                                            fit in with
              transportation, or ‘tinkering’” to the tasks of tending to crops and animals found great      the rest of
                                                                                                            the
                                                                                                            paragraph.
              opportunities in the city (Danhof 7). Trade and transportation thus began to influence
                                                                                                            Insert the
In-text       farming life significantly. Before 1820, the rural community accounted for eighty percent     footnote
citations                                                                                                   directly
occur after                                                                                                 after the
the quote     of consumption of farmers’ goods (Hurt 127). With the improvements in transportation,         phrase or
but before                                                                                                  clause to
the period.   twenty-five percent of farmers’ products were sold for commercial gain, and by 1825,          which it
The                                                                                                         refers.
author’s/
authors’      farming “became a business rather than a way of life” (Hurt 128). This business required
name/s go
before the
              farmers to specialize their production and caused most farmers to give “less attention to
page
number
with no       the production of surplus commodities like wheat, tobacco, pork, or beef” (Hurt 128).
comma in
between.
              The increase in specialization encouraged some farmers to turn to technology to increase

              their production and capitalize on commercial markets (Hurt 172).

                     The technology farmers used around 1820 was developed from three main

              sources: Europe, coastal Indian tribes in America, and domestic modifications made from

              the first two sources’ technologies. Through time, technology improved, and while some

              farmers clung to their time-tested technologies, others were eager to find alternatives to

              these technologies. These farmers often turned to current developments in Great Britain

              and received word of their technological improvements through firsthand knowledge by
Footnotes
should be     talking with immigrants and travelers. Farmers also began planning and conducting
double-
spaced and
in size 12
              experiments, and although they lacked a truly scientific approach, these farmers engaged
Times New
Roman         in experiments to obtain results and learn from the results.2 Agricultural organizations
font.
Angeli 4

                were then formed to “encourage . . . experimentation, hear reports, observe results, and

If you          exchange critical comments” (Danhof 53). Thus, new knowledge was transmitted orally
delete                                                                                                             Transitions
words from                                                                                                         connect
the original
                from farmer to farmer, immigrant to farmer, and traveler to farmer, which could result in          paragraphs
quote,                                                                                                             and unify
insert three    the miscommunication of this new scientific knowledge. Therefore, developments were                writing.
ellipses
with a                                                                                                             Notice how
space           made for knowledge to be transmitted and recorded in a more permanent, credible way:               this
between                                                                                                            paragraph
                                                                                                                   ends with a
and after       by print.                                                                                          brief
each one.
                                                                                                                   mention of
                                                                                                                   print
                The Distribution of New Knowledge. Before 1820 and prior to the new knowledge                      sources and
                                                                                                                   the next
                                                                                                                   paragraph
                farmers were creating, farmers who wanted print information about agriculture had their            begins with
                                                                                                                   a
Body            choice of agricultural almanacs and even local newspapers to receive information                   discussion
paragraphs                                                                                                         of print
have these                                                                                                         informa-
four            (Danhof 54). After 1820, however, agricultural writing took more forms than almanacs               tion.
elements: a
transition, a
topic
                and newspapers. From 1820 to 1870, agricultural periodicals were responsible for
sentence,
evidence,       spreading new knowledge among farmers. In his published dissertation The American
and a brief
wrap-up                                                                                                          Titles of
sentence.       Agricultural Press 1819-1860, Albert Lowther Demaree presents a “description of the              published
                                                                                                                 works
Notice how      general content of [agricultural journals]” (xi). These journals began in 1819 and were          (books,
                                                                                                                 journals,
this
                                                                                                                 films, etc.)
paragraph
                written for farmers, with topics devoted to “farming, stock raising, [and] horticulture”         are now
begins with
a transition.                                                                                                    italicized
                (12). The suggested “birthdate” of American agricultural journalism is April 2, 1819             instead of
The topic
                                                                                                                 underlined.
sentence
follows the
transition,
                when John S. Skinner published his periodical American Farmer in Baltimore. Demaree
and it tells
readers         writes that Skinner’s periodical was the “first continuous, successful agricultural
what the
paragraph
is about.       periodical in the United States” and “served as a model for hundreds of journals that
Direct
quotes are      succeeded it” (19). In the midst of the development of the journal, farmers began writing
used to
support
this topic      handbooks. Not much has been written on the handbooks’ history, aside from the fact that
sentence.

                C.M. Saxton & Co. in New York was the major handbook publisher. Despite the lack of

                information about handbooks, and as can be seen in my discussion below, these
Angeli 5
The
paragraph
ends with a    handbooks played a significant role in distributing knowledge among farmers and in
wrap-up
sentence,
“Despite       educating young farmers, as I now discuss.
the
lack . . .”,
while
               Farming’s Influence on Education. One result of the newly circulating print information
transi-
tioning to
the next       was the “need for acquiring scientific information upon which could be based a rational
paragraph.

               technology” that could “be substituted for the current diverse, empirical practices”

               (Danhof 69). In his 1825 book Nature and Reason Harmonized in the Practice of

               Husbandry, John Lorain begins his first chapter by stating that “[v]ery erroneous theories

               have been propagated” resulting in faulty farming methods (1). His words here create a

               framework for the rest of his book, as he offers his readers narratives of his own trials and

               errors and even dismisses foreign, time-tested techniques farmers had held on to: “The

               knowledge we have of that very ancient and numerous nation the Chinese, as well as the

               very located habits and costumes of this very singular people, is in itself insufficient to

               teach us . . .” (75). His book captures the call and need for scientific experiments to

               develop new knowledge meant to be used in/on/with American soil, which reflects some

               farmers’ thinking of the day.

                      By the 1860s, the need for this knowledge was strong enough to affect education.

               John Nicholson anticipated this effect in 1820 in the “Experiments” section of his book

               The Farmer’s Assistant; Being a Digest of All That Relates to Agriculture and the

               Conducting of Rural Affairs; Alphabetically Arranged and Adapted for the United States:
Use block
quotes                        Perhaps it would be well, if some institution were devised, and supported
when
quotations
are longer
                              at the expense of the State, which would be so organized as would tend
than four-
typed lines.                  most effectually to produce a due degree of emulation among Farmers, by

                              rewards and honorary distinctions conferred by those who, by their
Block
quotes                                                                                              Angeli 6
begin on a
new line,
are double-                   successful experimental efforts and improvements, should render
spaced, and
are
indented 1”
                              themselves duly entitled to them.3 (92)
from the
margin. Do    Part of Nicholson’s hope was realized in 1837 when Michigan established their state
not use
quotation
marks. The    university, specifying that “agriculture was to be an integral part of the curriculum”
citation
information
              (Danhof 71). Not much was accomplished, however, much to the dissatisfaction of
(author
name and
page          farmers, and in 1855, the state authorized a new college to be “devoted to agriculture and
number)
follows the
quote’s end
              to be independent of the university” (Danhof 71). The government became more involved
punctua-
tion.         in the creation of agricultural universities in 1862 when President Lincoln passed the

              Morrill Land Grant College Act, which begins with this phrase: “AN ACT Donating

              Public Lands to the several States and Territories which may provide Colleges for the

              Benefit of Agriculture and Mechanic Arts [sic].” The first agricultural colleges formed

Periods       under the act suffered from a lack of trained teachers and “an insufficient base of
occur
before the    knowledge,” and critics claimed that the new colleges did not meet the needs of farmers
end
quotation
mark if the   (Hurt 193).
citation
information
is given
                      Congress addressed these problems with the then newly formed United States
already in
the           Department of Agriculture (USDA). The USDA and Morrill Act worked together to form
sentence.

              “. . . State experiment stations and extension services . . . [that] added [to]

              . . . localized research and education . . .” (Baker et al. 415). The USDA added to the
                                                                                                               If a source
              scientific and educational areas of the agricultural field in other ways by including            has more
                                                                                                               than two
                                                                                                               authors,
              research as one of the organization’s “foundation stone” (367) and by including these
                                                                                                               use the
                                                                                                               first
              seven objectives:                                                                                author’s
                                                                                                               last name
                                                                                                               followed by
                              (1) [C]ollecting, arranging, and publishing statistical and other useful         “et al.”

                              agricultural information; (2) introducing valuable plants and animals; (3)
Angeli 7

                              answering inquiries of farmers regarding agriculture; (4) testing

                              agricultural implements; (5) conducting chemical analyses of soils, grains,

                              fruits, plants, vegetables, and manures; (6) establishing a professorship of

                              botany and entomology; and (7) establishing an agricultural library and

                              museum. (Baker et al. 14)

               These objectives were a response to farmers’ needs at the time, mainly to the need for

               experiments, printed distribution of new farming knowledge, and education. Isaac

               Newton, the first Commissioner of Agriculture, ensured these objectives would be

               realized by stressing research and education with the ultimate goal of helping farmers

               improve their operations (Hurt 190).

                      Before the USDA assisted in the circulation of knowledge, however, farmers

               wrote about their own farming methods. This brings me to my next section in which I

               examine three handbooks written by farmers and connect my observations of the texts

               with the discussion of agricultural history I have presented above.

               Note: Sections of this paper have been deleted to shorten the length of the paper
                               The conclusion
                               “wraps up” what you
               CONCLUSION      have been discussing
                               in your paper.

Because        From examining Drown’s, Allen’s, and Crozier and Henderson’s handbooks in light of
this is a B-
level
header, the    nineteenth century agricultural history, I can say that science and education seem to have
paragraph
is not
               had a strong influence on how and why these handbooks were written. The authors’ ethos
intended.

               is created by how they align themselves as farmers with science and education either by

               supporting or by criticizing them. Regardless of their stance, the authors needed to create

               an ethos to gain an audience, and they did this by including tables of information,

               illustrations of animals and buildings, reasons for educational reform, and pieces of
Angeli 8

advice to young farmers in their texts. It would be interesting to see if other farming

handbooks of the same century also convey a similar ethos concerning science and

education in agriculture. Recovering more handbooks in this way could lead to a better,

more complete understanding of farming education, science’s role in farming and

education, and perhaps even an understanding of the rhetoric of farming handbooks in the

nineteenth century.
Use endnotes to explain a point in                                                                  Angeli 9
your paper that does not quite fit
in with the rest of the paragraph.                                   Center the title “Notes,”
                                                                     using 12-point Times
Avoid lengthy discussions in the                           Notes     New Roman font.
endnote entries.

                        1. Danhof includes “Delaware, Maryland, all states north of the Potomac and
Endnotes
begin on a
new page
               Ohio rivers, Missouri, and states to its north” when referring to the northern states (11).
after the
paper but               2. For the purposes of this paper, “science” is defined as it was in nineteenth
before the
Works
Cited.         century agriculture: conducting experiments and engaging in research.
Double-
space all               3. Please note that any direct quotes from the nineteenth century texts are written
entries, and
indent each
entry 0.5”     in their original form, which may contain grammar mistakes according to twenty-first
from the
margin.
               century grammar rules.
The Works Cited
                    page is a list of
                                                                                                  Angeli 10
The Works           all the sources
Cited page          cited in your
begins on a         paper.                               Works Cited
new page.
Center the                                                                                                      MLA now
title “Works      Allen, R.L. The American Farm Book; or Compend of American Agriculture; Being a               requires all
Cited”                                                                                                          sources to
without
underlining,
                          Practical Treatise on Soils, Manures, Draining, Irrigation, Grasses, Grain,           have a
                                                                                                                publication
bolding, or                                                                                                     marker. For
italicizing it.           Roots, Fruits, Cotton, Tobacco, Sugar Cane, Rice, and Every Staple Product of         example,
If there is                                                                                                     books
only one                                                                                                        receive the
entry, title              the United States with the Best Methods of Planting, Cultivating, and Preparation
                                                                                                                marker
this page                                                                                                       “Print”
“Work                     for Market. New York: Saxton, 1849. Print.                                            after the
Cited.”                                                                                                         citation.

                  Baker, Gladys L., Wayne D. Rasmussen, Vivian Wiser, and Jane M. Porter. Century of

                          Service: The First 100 Years of the United States Department of Agriculture.
                                                                                                              If a print
                          [Federal Government], 1996. Print.                                                  source
                                                                                                              does not
                                                                                                              list a
MLA no            Danhof, Clarence H. Change in Agriculture: The Northern United States, 1820-1870.           publisher
longer
                                                                                                              and you
requires
URLs in the               Cambridge, MA: Harvard UP, 1969. Print.                                             can infer
                                                                                                              who the
Works
Cited.                                                                                                        publisher is,
Instead,
                  Demaree, Albert Lowther. The American Agricultural Press 1819-1860. New York:               place the
you must                                                                                                      publisher’s
                                                                                                              name in
write                     Columbia UP, 1941. Print.
                                                                                                              brackets.
“Web”
before the
date of
                  Drown, William and Solomon Drown. Compendium of Agriculture or the Farmer’s
access in
the entry.                Guide, in the Most Essential Parts of Husbandry and Gardening; Compiled from
This serves
as the
entry’s                   the Best American and European Publications, and the Unwritten Opinions of
publication
marker.
                          Experienced Cultivators. Providence, RI: Field, 1824. Print.

                  “Historical Census Browser.” University of Virginia Library. 2007. Web. 6 Dec. 2008.

                  Hurt, R. Douglas. American Agriculture: A Brief History. Ames, IA: Iowa State UP,

                          1994. Print.

                  Lorain, John. Nature and Reason Harmonized in the Practice of Husbandry.

                          Philadelphia: Carey, 1825. Print.

                  Morrill Land Grant Act of 1862. Prairie View A&M. 2003. Web. 6 Dec. 2008.
Angeli 11

Nicholson, John. The Farmer’s Assistant; Being a Digest of All That Relates to

       Agriculture and the Conducting of Rural Affairs; Alphabetically Arranged and

       Adapted for the United States. [Philadelphia]: Warner, 1820. Print.

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  • 1. Your name, Angeli 1 the course number, Page numbers Green text boxes begin on and the Elizabeth L. Angeli contain explanations with page 1. professor’s of MLA style Type your name, and the date of Professor Patricia Sullivan guidelines. name next to the paper the page are double- number so English 624 Blue boxes contain that it spaced in directions for writing appears on 12-point, and citing in MLA Times New 14 December 2008 style. every page. Roman font. Dates Titles are in MLA are centered written in Toward a Recovery of Nineteenth Century Farming Handbooks and written this order: in 12-point, day, month, and year. While researching texts written about nineteenth century farming, I found a few Times New Roman font. The authors who published books about the literature of nineteenth century farming, title is not bolded, particularly agricultural journals, newspapers, pamphlets, and brochures. These authors underlined, or The italicized. introduc- often placed the farming literature they were studying into an historical context by tory paragraph, discussing the important events in agriculture of the year in which the literature was or introduc- The thesis tion, should statement set the published (see Demaree, for example). However, while these authors discuss journals, usually is context for the last the rest of sentence of the paper. newspapers, pamphlets, and brochures, I could not find much discussion about another the Tell your introduc- readers important source of farming knowledge: farming handbooks. My goal in this paper is to tion. why you are writing and why bring this source into the agricultural literature discussion by connecting three The thesis is a clear your topic position is agricultural handbooks from the nineteenth century with nineteenth century agricultural that you important. will support and history. develop throughout To achieve this goal, I have organized my paper into four main sections, two of your paper. This If your sentence which have sub-sections. In the first section, I provide an account of three important guides or paper is long, you controls may want events in nineteenth century agricultural history: population and technological changes, your paper. to write about how your paper the distribution of scientific new knowledge, and farming’s influence on education. In the is organized. second section, I discuss three nineteenth century farming handbooks in connection with This will help your readers the important events described in the first section. I end my paper with a third section that follow your ideas. MLA requires offers research questions that could be answered in future versions of this paper and double-spacing throughout the document; do not single-space any part of the document.
  • 2. Angeli 2 conclude with a fourth section that discusses the importance of expanding this particular Use personal project. I also include an appendix after the Works Cited that contains images of the three pronouns (I, we, us, etc.) at handbooks I examined. Before I can begin the examination of the three handbooks, your instructor’s discretion. however, I need to provide an historical context in which the books were written, and it is When using headings in The headings used here follow an A-, B-, C- to this that I now turn. MLA, title the main level system to break the text into smaller sections (B-level sections. The different levels help organize Headers, headers) in a different the paper and maintain consistency in the though not style font than the paper’s organization. You may come up with required by HISTORICAL CONTEXT paper’s title, e.g., in your own headings as long as they are MLA style, small caps. consistent. The help the paragraph overall after the B- The nineteenth century saw many changes to daily American life with an increase in structure level and organiza- headers population, improved methods of transportation, developments in technology, and the start flush tion of a left after paper. Use the rise in the importance of science. These events impacted all aspects of nineteenth century them at headings. your instructor’s American life, most significantly those involved in slavery and the Civil War, but a large discretion to help part of American life was affected, a part that is quite often taken for granted: the life of your reader follow your ideas. the American farmer. Use Population and Technological Changes. One of the biggest changes, as seen in another style, e.g., nineteenth century America’s census reports, is the dramatic increase in population. The italics, to differen- If there is a tiate the C- 1820 census reported that over 10 million people were living in America; of those 10 gramma- level tical, headers million, over 2 million were engaged in agriculture. Ten years prior to that, the 1810 mechanical, from the B- or spelling level error in the headers. census reported over 7 million people were living in the states; there was no category for text you The are citing, paragraph continues people engaged in agriculture. In this ten-year time span, then, agriculture experienced type the quote as it directly appears. after the significant improvements and changes that enhanced its importance in American life. Follow the header. quote with One of these improvements was the developments of canals and steamboats, “[sic].” which allowed farmers to “sell what has previously been unsalable [sic]” and resulted in a “substantial increase in [a farmer’s] ability to earn income” (Danhof 5). This
  • 3. Angeli 3 improvement allowed the relations between the rural and urban populations to strengthen, Use resulting in an increase in trade. The urban population (defined as having over 2,500 footnotes to explain a inhabitants) in the northern states increased rapidly after 1820.1 This increase point in your paper that does accompanied the decrease in rural populations, as farmers who “preferred trade, not quite fit in with transportation, or ‘tinkering’” to the tasks of tending to crops and animals found great the rest of the paragraph. opportunities in the city (Danhof 7). Trade and transportation thus began to influence Insert the In-text farming life significantly. Before 1820, the rural community accounted for eighty percent footnote citations directly occur after after the the quote of consumption of farmers’ goods (Hurt 127). With the improvements in transportation, phrase or but before clause to the period. twenty-five percent of farmers’ products were sold for commercial gain, and by 1825, which it The refers. author’s/ authors’ farming “became a business rather than a way of life” (Hurt 128). This business required name/s go before the farmers to specialize their production and caused most farmers to give “less attention to page number with no the production of surplus commodities like wheat, tobacco, pork, or beef” (Hurt 128). comma in between. The increase in specialization encouraged some farmers to turn to technology to increase their production and capitalize on commercial markets (Hurt 172). The technology farmers used around 1820 was developed from three main sources: Europe, coastal Indian tribes in America, and domestic modifications made from the first two sources’ technologies. Through time, technology improved, and while some farmers clung to their time-tested technologies, others were eager to find alternatives to these technologies. These farmers often turned to current developments in Great Britain Footnotes and received word of their technological improvements through firsthand knowledge by should be double- spaced, in talking with immigrants and travelers. Farmers also began planning and conducting 12-point Times New Roman font, and indented 1. Danhof includes “Delaware, Maryland, all states north of the Potomac and 0.5” from the margin. Ohio rivers, Missouri, and states to its north” when referring to the northern states (11).
  • 4. Angeli 4 experiments, and although they lacked a truly scientific approach, these farmers engaged in experiments to obtain results and learn from the results.2 Agricultural organizations were then formed to “encourage . . . experimentation, hear reports, observe results, and If you exchange critical comments” (Danhof 53). Thus, new knowledge was transmitted orally delete Transitions words from connect the original from farmer to farmer, immigrant to farmer, and traveler to farmer, which could result in paragraphs quote, and unify insert three the miscommunication of this new scientific knowledge. Therefore, developments were writing. ellipses with a Notice how space made for knowledge to be transmitted and recorded in a more permanent, credible way: this between paragraph ends with a and after by print. brief each one. mention of print The Distribution of New Knowledge. Before 1820 and prior to the new knowledge sources and the next paragraph farmers were creating, farmers who wanted print information about agriculture had their begins with a Body choice of agricultural almanacs and even local newspapers to receive information discussion paragraphs of print have these informa- four (Danhof 54). After 1820, however, agricultural writing took more forms than almanacs tion. elements: a transition, a topic and newspapers. From 1820 to 1870, agricultural periodicals were responsible for sentence, evidence, spreading new knowledge among farmers. In his published dissertation The American and a brief wrap-up Titles of sentence. Agricultural Press 1819-1860, Albert Lowther Demaree presents a “description of the published works Notice how general content of [agricultural journals]” (xi). These journals began in 1819 and were (books, journals, this films, etc.) paragraph written for farmers, with topics devoted to “farming, stock raising, [and] horticulture” are now begins with a transition. italicized (12). The suggested “birthdate” of American agricultural journalism is April 2, 1819 instead of The topic underlined. sentence follows the transition, when John S. Skinner published his periodical American Farmer in Baltimore. Demaree and it tells readers writes that Skinner’s periodical was the “first continuous, successful agricultural what the paragraph is about. periodical in the United States” and “served as a model for hundreds of journals that Direct quotes are used to 2. For the purposes of this paper, “science” is defined as it was in nineteenth support this topic sentence. century agriculture: conducting experiments and engaging in research.
  • 5. Angeli 5 The succeeded it” (19). In the midst of the development of the journal, farmers began writing paragraph ends with a handbooks. Not much has been written on the handbooks’ history, aside from the fact that wrap-up sentence, “Despite C.M. Saxton & Co. in New York was the major handbook publisher. Despite the lack of the lack . . .”, while information about handbooks, and as can be seen in my discussion below, these transi- tioning to handbooks played a significant role in distributing knowledge among farmers and in the next paragraph. educating young farmers, as I now discuss. Farming’s Influence on Education. One result of the newly circulating print information was the “need for acquiring scientific information upon which could be based a rational technology” that could “be substituted for the current diverse, empirical practices” (Danhof 69). In his 1825 book Nature and Reason Harmonized in the Practice of Husbandry, John Lorain begins his first chapter by stating that “[v]ery erroneous theories have been propagated” resulting in faulty farming methods (1). His words here create a framework for the rest of his book, as he offers his readers narratives of his own trials and errors and even dismisses foreign, time-tested techniques farmers had held on to: “The knowledge we have of that very ancient and numerous nation the Chinese, as well as the very located habits and costumes of this very singular people, is in itself insufficient to teach us . . .” (75). His book captures the call and need for scientific experiments to develop new knowledge meant to be used in/on/with American soil, which reflects some farmers’ thinking of the day. By the 1860s, the need for this knowledge was strong enough to affect education. John Nicholson anticipated this effect in 1820 in the “Experiments” section of his book The Farmer’s Assistant; Being a Digest of All That Relates to Agriculture and the Conducting of Rural Affairs; Alphabetically Arranged and Adapted for the United States:
  • 6. Angeli 6 Use block quotes Perhaps it would be well, if some institution were devised, and supported when quotations at the expense of the State, which would be so organized as would tend are longer than four- typed lines. most effectually to produce a due degree of emulation among Farmers, by Block rewards and honorary distinctions conferred by those who, by their quotes begin on a new line, successful experimental efforts and improvements, should render are double- spaced, and themselves duly entitled to them.3 (92) are indented 1” from the Part of Nicholson’s hope was realized in 1837 when Michigan established their state margin. Do not use university, specifying that “agriculture was to be an integral part of the curriculum” quotation marks. The citation (Danhof 71). Not much was accomplished, however, much to the dissatisfaction of information (author name and farmers, and in 1855, the state authorized a new college to be “devoted to agriculture and page number) to be independent of the university” (Danhof 71). The government became more involved follows the quote’s end punctua- in the creation of agricultural universities in 1862 when President Lincoln passed the tion. Morrill Land Grant College Act, which begins with this phrase: “AN ACT Donating Public Lands to the several States and Territories which may provide Colleges for the Benefit of Agriculture and Mechanic Arts [sic].” The first agricultural colleges formed Periods under the act suffered from a lack of trained teachers and “an insufficient base of occur before the knowledge,” and critics claimed that the new colleges did not meet the needs of farmers end quotation mark if the (Hurt 193). citation information is given 3. Please note that any direct quotes from the nineteenth century texts are written already in the in their original form, which may contain grammar mistakes according to twenty-first sentence. century grammar rules.
  • 7. Angeli 7 Congress addressed these problems with the then newly formed United States Department of Agriculture (USDA). The USDA and Morrill Act worked together to form “. . . State experiment stations and extension services . . . [that] added [to] . . . localized research and education . . .” (Baker et al. 415). The USDA added to the If a source scientific and educational areas of the agricultural field in other ways by including has more than two authors, research as one of the organization’s “foundation stone” (367) and by including these use the first seven objectives: author’s last name followed by (1) [C]ollecting, arranging, and publishing statistical and other useful “et al.” agricultural information; (2) introducing valuable plants and animals; (3) answering inquiries of farmers regarding agriculture; (4) testing agricultural implements; (5) conducting chemical analyses of soils, grains, fruits, plants, vegetables, and manures; (6) establishing a professorship of botany and entomology; and (7) establishing an agricultural library and museum. (Baker et al. 14) These objectives were a response to farmers’ needs at the time, mainly to the need for experiments, printed distribution of new farming knowledge, and education. Isaac Newton, the first Commissioner of Agriculture, ensured these objectives would be realized by stressing research and education with the ultimate goal of helping farmers improve their operations (Hurt 190). Before the USDA assisted in the circulation of knowledge, however, farmers wrote about their own farming methods. This brings me to my next section in which I examine three handbooks written by farmers and connect my observations of the texts
  • 8. Angeli 8 with the discussion of agricultural history I have presented above. Note: Sections of this paper have been deleted to shorten the length of the paper The conclusion “wraps up” what you CONCLUSION have been discussing in your paper. Because From examining Drown’s, Allen’s, and Crozier and Henderson’s handbooks in light of this is a B- level header, the nineteenth century agricultural history, I can say that science and education seem to have paragraph is not had a strong influence on how and why these handbooks were written. The authors’ ethos intended. is created by how they align themselves as farmers with science and education either by The conclusion supporting or by criticizing them. Regardless of their stance, the authors needed to create should restate the following: an ethos to gain an audience, and they did this by including tables of information, your topic, your topic’s importance, illustrations of animals and buildings, reasons for educational reform, and pieces of your thesis, and your advice to young farmers in their texts. It would be interesting to see if other farming supporting points. handbooks of the same century also convey a similar ethos concerning science and education in agriculture. Recovering more handbooks in this way could lead to a better, more complete understanding of farming education, science’s role in farming and education, and perhaps even an understanding of the rhetoric of farming handbooks in the nineteenth century. You may end your conclusion with a call for action or future research possibilities. You might also include what this would add to your topic’s field.
  • 9. The Works Cited page is a list of Angeli 9 The Works all the sources Cited page cited in your begins on a paper. Works Cited new page. Center the MLA now title “Works Allen, R.L. The American Farm Book; or Compend of American Agriculture; Being a requires all Cited” sources to without underlining, Practical Treatise on Soils, Manures, Draining, Irrigation, Grasses, Grain, have a publication bolding, or marker. For italicizing it. Roots, Fruits, Cotton, Tobacco, Sugar Cane, Rice, and Every Staple Product of example, If there is books only one receive the entry, title the United States with the Best Methods of Planting, Cultivating, and Preparation marker this page “Print” “Work for Market. New York: Saxton, 1849. Print. after the Cited.” citation. Baker, Gladys L., Wayne D. Rasmussen, Vivian Wiser, and Jane M. Porter. Century of Service: The First 100 Years of the United States Department of Agriculture. If a print [Federal Government], 1996. Print. source does not list a MLA no Danhof, Clarence H. Change in Agriculture: The Northern United States, 1820-1870. publisher longer and you requires URLs in the Cambridge, MA: Harvard UP, 1969. Print. can infer who the Works Cited. publisher is, Instead, Demaree, Albert Lowther. The American Agricultural Press 1819-1860. New York: place the you must publisher’s name in write Columbia UP, 1941. Print. brackets. “Web” before the date of Drown, William and Solomon Drown. Compendium of Agriculture or the Farmer’s access in the entry. Guide, in the Most Essential Parts of Husbandry and Gardening; Compiled from This serves as the entry’s the Best American and European Publications, and the Unwritten Opinions of publication marker. Experienced Cultivators. Providence, RI: Field, 1824. Print. “Historical Census Browser.” University of Virginia Library. 2007. Web. 6 Dec. 2008. Hurt, R. Douglas. American Agriculture: A Brief History. Ames, IA: Iowa State UP, 1994. Print. Lorain, John. Nature and Reason Harmonized in the Practice of Husbandry. Philadelphia: Carey, 1825. Print. Morrill Land Grant Act of 1862. Prairie View A&M. 2003. Web. 6 Dec. 2008.
  • 10. Angeli 10 Nicholson, John. The Farmer’s Assistant; Being a Digest of All That Relates to Agriculture and the Conducting of Rural Affairs; Alphabetically Arranged and Adapted for the United States. [Philadelphia]: Warner, 1820. Print.
  • 11. Your name, Angeli 1 the course number, Page numbers Green text boxes begin on and the Elizabeth L. Angeli contain explanations with page 1. professor’s of MLA style Type your name, and the date of Professor Patricia Sullivan guidelines. name next to the paper the page are double- number so English 624 Blue boxes contain that it spaced in directions for writing appears on 12-point, and citing in MLA Times New 14 December 2008 style. every page. Roman font. Dates Titles are in MLA are centered written in Toward a Recovery of Nineteenth Century Farming Handbooks and written this order: in 12-point, day, month, and year. While researching texts written about nineteenth century farming, I found a few Times New Roman font. The authors who published books about the literature of nineteenth century farming, title is not bolded, particularly agricultural journals, newspapers, pamphlets, and brochures. These authors underlined, or The italicized. introduc- often placed the farming literature they were studying into an historical context by tory paragraph, discussing the important events in agriculture of the year in which the literature was or introduc- The thesis tion, should statement set the published (see Demaree, for example). However, while these authors discuss journals, usually is context for the last the rest of sentence of the paper. newspapers, pamphlets, and brochures, I could not find much discussion about another the Tell your introduc- readers important source of farming knowledge: farming handbooks. My goal in this paper is to tion. why you are writing and why bring this source into the agricultural literature discussion by connecting three The thesis is a clear your topic position is agricultural handbooks from the nineteenth century with nineteenth century agricultural that you important. will support and history. develop throughout To achieve this goal, I have organized my paper into four main sections, two of your paper. This If your sentence which have sub-sections. In the first section, I provide an account of three important guides or paper is long, you controls may want events in nineteenth century agricultural history: population and technological changes, your paper. to write about how your paper the distribution of scientific new knowledge, and farming’s influence on education. In the is organized. second section, I discuss three nineteenth century farming handbooks in connection with This will help your readers the important events described in the first section. I end my paper with a third section that follow your ideas. MLA requires offers research questions that could be answered in future versions of this paper and double-spacing throughout a document; do not single-space any part of the document.
  • 12. Angeli 2 conclude with a fourth section that discusses the importance of expanding this particular Use personal project. I also include an appendix after the Works Cited that contains images of the three pronouns (I, we, us, etc.) at handbooks I examined. Before I can begin the examination of the three handbooks, your instructor’s discretion. however, I need to provide an historical context in which the books were written, and it is When using headings in The headings used here follow an A-, B-, C- to this that I now turn. MLA, title the main level system to break the text into smaller sections (B-level sections. The different levels help organize Headers, headers) in a different the paper and maintain consistency in the though not style font than the paper’s organization. You may come up with required by HISTORICAL CONTEXT paper’s title, e.g., in your own headings as long as they are MLA style, small caps. consistent. The help the paragraph overall after the B- The nineteenth century saw many changes to daily American life with an increase in structure level and organiza- headers population, improved methods of transportation, developments in technology, and the start flush tion of a left after paper. Use the rise in the importance of science. These events impacted all aspects of nineteenth century them at headings. your instructor’s American life, most significantly those involved in slavery and the Civil War, but a large discretion to help part of American life was affected, a part that is quite often taken for granted: the life of your reader follow your ideas. the American farmer. Use Population and Technological Changes. One of the biggest changes, as seen in another style, e.g., nineteenth century America’s census reports, is the dramatic increase in population. The italics, to differen- If there is a tiate the C- 1820 census reported that over 10 million people were living in America; of those 10 gramma- level tical, headers million, over 2 million were engaged in agriculture. Ten years prior to that, the 1810 mechanical, from the B- or spelling level error in the headers. census reported over 7 million people were living in the states; there was no category for text you The are citing, paragraph continues people engaged in agriculture. In this ten-year time span, then, agriculture experienced type the quote as it directly appears. after the significant improvements and changes that enhanced its importance in American life. Follow the header. quote with One of these improvements was the developments of canals and steamboats, “[sic].” which allowed farmers to “sell what has previously been unsalable [sic]” and resulted in a “substantial increase in [a farmer’s] ability to earn income” (Danhof 5). This
  • 13. Angeli 3 improvement allowed the relations between the rural and urban populations to strengthen, Use resulting in an increase in trade. The urban population (defined as having over 2,500 footnotes to explain a inhabitants) in the northern states increased rapidly after 1820.1 This increase point in your paper that does accompanied the decrease in rural populations, as farmers who “preferred trade, not quite fit in with transportation, or ‘tinkering’” to the tasks of tending to crops and animals found great the rest of the paragraph. opportunities in the city (Danhof 7). Trade and transportation thus began to influence Insert the In-text farming life significantly. Before 1820, the rural community accounted for eighty percent footnote citations directly occur after after the the quote of consumption of farmers’ goods (Hurt 127). With the improvements in transportation, phrase or but before clause to the period. twenty-five percent of farmers’ products were sold for commercial gain, and by 1825, which it The refers. author’s/ authors’ farming “became a business rather than a way of life” (Hurt 128). This business required name/s go before the farmers to specialize their production and caused most farmers to give “less attention to page number with no the production of surplus commodities like wheat, tobacco, pork, or beef” (Hurt 128). comma in between. The increase in specialization encouraged some farmers to turn to technology to increase their production and capitalize on commercial markets (Hurt 172). The technology farmers used around 1820 was developed from three main sources: Europe, coastal Indian tribes in America, and domestic modifications made from the first two sources’ technologies. Through time, technology improved, and while some farmers clung to their time-tested technologies, others were eager to find alternatives to these technologies. These farmers often turned to current developments in Great Britain and received word of their technological improvements through firsthand knowledge by Footnotes should be talking with immigrants and travelers. Farmers also began planning and conducting double- spaced and in size 12 experiments, and although they lacked a truly scientific approach, these farmers engaged Times New Roman in experiments to obtain results and learn from the results.2 Agricultural organizations font.
  • 14. Angeli 4 were then formed to “encourage . . . experimentation, hear reports, observe results, and If you exchange critical comments” (Danhof 53). Thus, new knowledge was transmitted orally delete Transitions words from connect the original from farmer to farmer, immigrant to farmer, and traveler to farmer, which could result in paragraphs quote, and unify insert three the miscommunication of this new scientific knowledge. Therefore, developments were writing. ellipses with a Notice how space made for knowledge to be transmitted and recorded in a more permanent, credible way: this between paragraph ends with a and after by print. brief each one. mention of print The Distribution of New Knowledge. Before 1820 and prior to the new knowledge sources and the next paragraph farmers were creating, farmers who wanted print information about agriculture had their begins with a Body choice of agricultural almanacs and even local newspapers to receive information discussion paragraphs of print have these informa- four (Danhof 54). After 1820, however, agricultural writing took more forms than almanacs tion. elements: a transition, a topic and newspapers. From 1820 to 1870, agricultural periodicals were responsible for sentence, evidence, spreading new knowledge among farmers. In his published dissertation The American and a brief wrap-up Titles of sentence. Agricultural Press 1819-1860, Albert Lowther Demaree presents a “description of the published works Notice how general content of [agricultural journals]” (xi). These journals began in 1819 and were (books, journals, this films, etc.) paragraph written for farmers, with topics devoted to “farming, stock raising, [and] horticulture” are now begins with a transition. italicized (12). The suggested “birthdate” of American agricultural journalism is April 2, 1819 instead of The topic underlined. sentence follows the transition, when John S. Skinner published his periodical American Farmer in Baltimore. Demaree and it tells readers writes that Skinner’s periodical was the “first continuous, successful agricultural what the paragraph is about. periodical in the United States” and “served as a model for hundreds of journals that Direct quotes are succeeded it” (19). In the midst of the development of the journal, farmers began writing used to support this topic handbooks. Not much has been written on the handbooks’ history, aside from the fact that sentence. C.M. Saxton & Co. in New York was the major handbook publisher. Despite the lack of information about handbooks, and as can be seen in my discussion below, these
  • 15. Angeli 5 The paragraph ends with a handbooks played a significant role in distributing knowledge among farmers and in wrap-up sentence, “Despite educating young farmers, as I now discuss. the lack . . .”, while Farming’s Influence on Education. One result of the newly circulating print information transi- tioning to the next was the “need for acquiring scientific information upon which could be based a rational paragraph. technology” that could “be substituted for the current diverse, empirical practices” (Danhof 69). In his 1825 book Nature and Reason Harmonized in the Practice of Husbandry, John Lorain begins his first chapter by stating that “[v]ery erroneous theories have been propagated” resulting in faulty farming methods (1). His words here create a framework for the rest of his book, as he offers his readers narratives of his own trials and errors and even dismisses foreign, time-tested techniques farmers had held on to: “The knowledge we have of that very ancient and numerous nation the Chinese, as well as the very located habits and costumes of this very singular people, is in itself insufficient to teach us . . .” (75). His book captures the call and need for scientific experiments to develop new knowledge meant to be used in/on/with American soil, which reflects some farmers’ thinking of the day. By the 1860s, the need for this knowledge was strong enough to affect education. John Nicholson anticipated this effect in 1820 in the “Experiments” section of his book The Farmer’s Assistant; Being a Digest of All That Relates to Agriculture and the Conducting of Rural Affairs; Alphabetically Arranged and Adapted for the United States: Use block quotes Perhaps it would be well, if some institution were devised, and supported when quotations are longer at the expense of the State, which would be so organized as would tend than four- typed lines. most effectually to produce a due degree of emulation among Farmers, by rewards and honorary distinctions conferred by those who, by their
  • 16. Block quotes Angeli 6 begin on a new line, are double- successful experimental efforts and improvements, should render spaced, and are indented 1” themselves duly entitled to them.3 (92) from the margin. Do Part of Nicholson’s hope was realized in 1837 when Michigan established their state not use quotation marks. The university, specifying that “agriculture was to be an integral part of the curriculum” citation information (Danhof 71). Not much was accomplished, however, much to the dissatisfaction of (author name and page farmers, and in 1855, the state authorized a new college to be “devoted to agriculture and number) follows the quote’s end to be independent of the university” (Danhof 71). The government became more involved punctua- tion. in the creation of agricultural universities in 1862 when President Lincoln passed the Morrill Land Grant College Act, which begins with this phrase: “AN ACT Donating Public Lands to the several States and Territories which may provide Colleges for the Benefit of Agriculture and Mechanic Arts [sic].” The first agricultural colleges formed Periods under the act suffered from a lack of trained teachers and “an insufficient base of occur before the knowledge,” and critics claimed that the new colleges did not meet the needs of farmers end quotation mark if the (Hurt 193). citation information is given Congress addressed these problems with the then newly formed United States already in the Department of Agriculture (USDA). The USDA and Morrill Act worked together to form sentence. “. . . State experiment stations and extension services . . . [that] added [to] . . . localized research and education . . .” (Baker et al. 415). The USDA added to the If a source scientific and educational areas of the agricultural field in other ways by including has more than two authors, research as one of the organization’s “foundation stone” (367) and by including these use the first seven objectives: author’s last name followed by (1) [C]ollecting, arranging, and publishing statistical and other useful “et al.” agricultural information; (2) introducing valuable plants and animals; (3)
  • 17. Angeli 7 answering inquiries of farmers regarding agriculture; (4) testing agricultural implements; (5) conducting chemical analyses of soils, grains, fruits, plants, vegetables, and manures; (6) establishing a professorship of botany and entomology; and (7) establishing an agricultural library and museum. (Baker et al. 14) These objectives were a response to farmers’ needs at the time, mainly to the need for experiments, printed distribution of new farming knowledge, and education. Isaac Newton, the first Commissioner of Agriculture, ensured these objectives would be realized by stressing research and education with the ultimate goal of helping farmers improve their operations (Hurt 190). Before the USDA assisted in the circulation of knowledge, however, farmers wrote about their own farming methods. This brings me to my next section in which I examine three handbooks written by farmers and connect my observations of the texts with the discussion of agricultural history I have presented above. Note: Sections of this paper have been deleted to shorten the length of the paper The conclusion “wraps up” what you CONCLUSION have been discussing in your paper. Because From examining Drown’s, Allen’s, and Crozier and Henderson’s handbooks in light of this is a B- level header, the nineteenth century agricultural history, I can say that science and education seem to have paragraph is not had a strong influence on how and why these handbooks were written. The authors’ ethos intended. is created by how they align themselves as farmers with science and education either by supporting or by criticizing them. Regardless of their stance, the authors needed to create an ethos to gain an audience, and they did this by including tables of information, illustrations of animals and buildings, reasons for educational reform, and pieces of
  • 18. Angeli 8 advice to young farmers in their texts. It would be interesting to see if other farming handbooks of the same century also convey a similar ethos concerning science and education in agriculture. Recovering more handbooks in this way could lead to a better, more complete understanding of farming education, science’s role in farming and education, and perhaps even an understanding of the rhetoric of farming handbooks in the nineteenth century.
  • 19. Use endnotes to explain a point in Angeli 9 your paper that does not quite fit in with the rest of the paragraph. Center the title “Notes,” using 12-point Times Avoid lengthy discussions in the Notes New Roman font. endnote entries. 1. Danhof includes “Delaware, Maryland, all states north of the Potomac and Endnotes begin on a new page Ohio rivers, Missouri, and states to its north” when referring to the northern states (11). after the paper but 2. For the purposes of this paper, “science” is defined as it was in nineteenth before the Works Cited. century agriculture: conducting experiments and engaging in research. Double- space all 3. Please note that any direct quotes from the nineteenth century texts are written entries, and indent each entry 0.5” in their original form, which may contain grammar mistakes according to twenty-first from the margin. century grammar rules.
  • 20. The Works Cited page is a list of Angeli 10 The Works all the sources Cited page cited in your begins on a paper. Works Cited new page. Center the MLA now title “Works Allen, R.L. The American Farm Book; or Compend of American Agriculture; Being a requires all Cited” sources to without underlining, Practical Treatise on Soils, Manures, Draining, Irrigation, Grasses, Grain, have a publication bolding, or marker. For italicizing it. Roots, Fruits, Cotton, Tobacco, Sugar Cane, Rice, and Every Staple Product of example, If there is books only one receive the entry, title the United States with the Best Methods of Planting, Cultivating, and Preparation marker this page “Print” “Work for Market. New York: Saxton, 1849. Print. after the Cited.” citation. Baker, Gladys L., Wayne D. Rasmussen, Vivian Wiser, and Jane M. Porter. Century of Service: The First 100 Years of the United States Department of Agriculture. If a print [Federal Government], 1996. Print. source does not list a MLA no Danhof, Clarence H. Change in Agriculture: The Northern United States, 1820-1870. publisher longer and you requires URLs in the Cambridge, MA: Harvard UP, 1969. Print. can infer who the Works Cited. publisher is, Instead, Demaree, Albert Lowther. The American Agricultural Press 1819-1860. New York: place the you must publisher’s name in write Columbia UP, 1941. Print. brackets. “Web” before the date of Drown, William and Solomon Drown. Compendium of Agriculture or the Farmer’s access in the entry. Guide, in the Most Essential Parts of Husbandry and Gardening; Compiled from This serves as the entry’s the Best American and European Publications, and the Unwritten Opinions of publication marker. Experienced Cultivators. Providence, RI: Field, 1824. Print. “Historical Census Browser.” University of Virginia Library. 2007. Web. 6 Dec. 2008. Hurt, R. Douglas. American Agriculture: A Brief History. Ames, IA: Iowa State UP, 1994. Print. Lorain, John. Nature and Reason Harmonized in the Practice of Husbandry. Philadelphia: Carey, 1825. Print. Morrill Land Grant Act of 1862. Prairie View A&M. 2003. Web. 6 Dec. 2008.
  • 21. Angeli 11 Nicholson, John. The Farmer’s Assistant; Being a Digest of All That Relates to Agriculture and the Conducting of Rural Affairs; Alphabetically Arranged and Adapted for the United States. [Philadelphia]: Warner, 1820. Print.