Error correction activity becs 16-17

1. Sentence includingthe mistake(s)
Corrected sentence
Also a few peoplehave said that they want our feature
because they want to see photos or series with friends
projected in a surface.
Moreover, a few peoplehave said that they want our
feature because they would like to see photosor series
with friends projected on a surface.
Other problem is the price, our feature should not be
cheap is a good idea and they have to pay us for all the
technology we have used and for the idea.
Another problem is the price, our feature shouldnot be
cheap as it is a good idea and we need a decent return on
our investment.
Apple Samsung or whoever purchase our feature should
rise the price of their phone a little bit. Thisshould not be
a problem analyzing the results.
Apple, Samsung or whoever purchases our feature should
raise the price of their phonea little bit. This shouldnot
be a problem as we can see in the results.
The customers will receive a marvelous product, which
you will enjoy with your relatives.
The customers will receive a marvelous product, which
they will enjoy with their relatives.

2. Each interview took around2 minutes to complete which
is a fairy confortable time-consuming questionnaireto be
done.
Each interview took around2 minutes to complete which
is a fairly comfortable time.
This report aims to investigate the viabilityof a new
groundbreakingproduct as B-connected is.
This report aims to analyze the viabilityof a new
groundbreakingproduct: B-connected.
The device projects the time on the ceiling as well as
showing the time on the own carpet.
The device not only projects the time on the ceiling but it
also shows the time on the very carpet / on the carpet
itself.
In terms of financingthe ACC, we are doing a
crowdfunding in Kickstarter. Our company is looking for
80.000$ investment in order to start the production.
In terms of financingthe ACC, we are doing a
crowdfunding campaign on Kickstarter. Our company is
looking for an 80.000$ investment in order to start the
production.

3. Our society usually spend huge amount of money in
useless things such as sneakers that are way over 300$,
only because trends.
Our society usually spends huge amounts of money on
useless things, such as sneakers that are well above 300$,
only because of trends.
We also offer a wide range of colors in between the
clients can choose.
We also offer a wide range of colors from which / among
which the clientscan choose.
Moreover, we aimed to get specific information to
stablish a concrete idea of what the needs of our
customers were and how can we meet them
Moreover, we aimed to get specific information to
establish a concrete idea of what the needs of our
customers might be and how we can meet them
This informationguides us about on which brand we
should focus when creating our product.
This informationguides us as to which brand we should
focus on when creating our product.
Imagine a low-middle income person living in
Fuenlabradathat does not usuallyuse his/her car.
Imagine a low-middle income person living in
Fuenlabrada who/that does not usually use their car.

4. The elderly who own cars but they do not use them that
much, so instead of keeping them in their garage, we
offer them the possibilityof getting a profitability.
The elderly often own cars but do not use them that
much. Therefore, we offer them the possibilityof making
a profit out of their vehicles instead of keeping them in
their garage.
They own a car, which is good because this means they
have the possibilityof renting if they wish…
They own a car, which is good because this means they
have the possibilityof renting it out if they wish…
It consisted of 6 questions and a brief introductionthat
explainswhat Renti consist of.
It consisted of 6 questions and a brief introductionthat
explainedwhat Renti consists in.
In this day and age, fitness is more of a lifestyle then it is a
hobby and the number of people engaged to this lifestyle
keeps on growing.
In this day and age, fitness is more of a lifestyle than it is a
hobby and the number of people engaged in this lifestyle
keeps on growing.
In order to do this we have to have a globalsight on the
general things, but also have a particularview for each
group in the market.

5. In order to do this, we ought to have a globalview/
perspective on general things, but keep a closer eye on
each market segment.
Students, which could find the idea of having a chocolate
bar with caffeine very profitable,it is something that you
can carry with yourself everywhere.
Students might find the idea of having a chocolatebar
with caffeine very beneficialsince it is something that you
can carry with you everywhere.
23.2% attended the events with a companionand almost
anyone went alone (0.7%)
23.2% attended the events with a companionand almost
no one went alone(0.7%)
LACY will simplify the clients’ dailylife with its easy use
and enrich the style with its fashionableappearance.
LACY will simplify our clients’ dailylife with its simple use
and add a touch of style with its fashionableappearance.