4. I had taken in the improvements that people had wanted, and
thought could have been done better and done what was asked
which was more text, personally I think it looks better now and
iv also decided to do my own improvements by making it look
less bland by adding a camera and adding the features it has
making it more appealing and at the top left there is a circle
around the camera making it look a little bit different
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9. Looking back at people's opinions of my product they
were right, it is obviously too bland to be a product of
canons, so I've done what people had suggested and
made sure it's more colorful and gotten more life to it
and more detail compared to it used to look before,
I've tried to not make it plain and boring just there is a
lot of blank space but I've let that so the picture that’s
been taken is visible
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12. I have tried and make it so there
isn't a whole load of black space,
by adding a quote and camera to
hopefully push or motivate
someone to take inspiration
