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ARGUMENTATIVE
ESSAY
College Writing II
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY
 An argumentative essay is when the writer presents an opinion on a
controversial issue supported by evidence (facts, examples, the
opinion of experts, or logical reasoning)
 An essay in which you agree or disagree with an issue
 Your goal is to convince your readers that your opinion or point of
view is the most valid viewpoint.
 So, your essay must be balanced. It must contain:
 An explanation of the issue
 A clear thesis statement
 Opposing arguments / counterarguments
 Rebuttals / refutations of the opposing arguments (counterarguments)
 Your own arguments
“. . yo u do no t just g ive re aso ns to suppo rt yo ur po int o f vie w but yo u
m ust also discuss the o the r side ’s re aso ns and the n re but the m . . ”
“. . If yo u g ive o nly yo ur o pinio n, yo ur re ade rs willno t be co nvince d o f
yo ur vie wpo ints. . ”
DISTINCT FEATURE OF AN ARGUMENTATIVE
ESSAY
 The writer give reasons to support his/herpoint of
view as well as
 discuss the otherside’s reasons then
 rebut them (to point out problems with the other side’s
reasons to prove that they are not good reasons).
Key Terms
Refutation _____
Proponent _____
Opponent _____
Counter Argument (CON) ____
Pro Argument (PRO) _____
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1 A person who disagrees with something
and speaks against it
3 Point or statement that supports one’s
ideas and / or thesis
4 Point or statement in opposition to the
argument being made in a written
document
5 The process of discrediting the arguments
that oppose your thesis statement or also
known as counter arguments
6 Someone who argues in favor of
something; advocate
ARGUMENTATIVE TOPICS
 A good topic has at least two arguable sides.
 Topics that are not appropriate for
argumentative essays are arguments of
preference, belief or faith or fact
Type of
Argument
Example Appropriate Topic for
Argumentative Essay?
Preference Does chocolate ice cream taste better
than strawberry ice cream?
No; preference can’t be
supported with facts,
examples, or reasons
Belief of faith Does God exist? No; religious beliefs is
based on faith, not verifiable
facts
Argument of fact Who won the World Cup in 2010? No; there is one correct
answer that is not debatable
INTRO/THESIS STATEMENT
 Thesis statement clearly states which side you
are for:
 Curfe w laws are unfair and sho uld be abo lishe d
 In m y o pinio n, ste m ce llsho uld re ce ive the fullsuppo rt
o f o ur g o ve rnm e nt
 A thesis statement often mentions the o ppo sing
point of view.
 De spite the claim s that curfe w laws are ne ce ssary to
co ntro ljuve nile g ang s , curfe w laws are cle arly
unco nstitutio nal
 Altho ug h the re are ce rtainly re aso ns to be cautio us
with ste m ce llre se arch o r any ne w te chno lo g y , I
be lie ve that its po te ntialbe ne fits far o utwe ig h its
dang e rs
INTRO/THESIS STATEMENT
 Use expressions such as the following to
introduce opposing points of view:
 Some people feel that the United States should
have a national health care plan like Canada’s.
 Many thinkthat genetically engineered crops are
a grave danger to the environment
 Smokers say that they have a right to smoke
 It may be true that the U.S. Constitution gives
citizens the right to own weapons
INTRO/THESIS STATEMENT
 Then connect the opposing point of view to your
own with transitional signals of contrast.
 Some people feel that the United States should have a
national health care plan like Canada’s; however, others
feel that government should stay out of the health care
business
 Although/Even though many think that genetically
engineered crops are a grave danger to the
environment, such crops can alleviate world hunger and
malnutrition
 Smokers say that they have a right to smoke in spite of
the fact that/despite the fact that smoking will kill them
 While/Whereas it may be true that the U.S. Constitution
gives citizens the right to own weapons, the men who
wrote the Constitution lived in a different time
Sample Argumentative Thesis
Statements
Something should be done on media bias
This is not an effective argumentative thesis
statement because it does not clearly state the
writer’s idea. The answers of questions like
“what is that ‘something’ that should be done?”
or “who should do it?” are not clear.
Sample Argumentative Thesis
Statements
CNN is the best TV channel.
This is not an effective thesis statement. This
sentence is not debatable as it involves
personal choice or preference.
Sample Argumentative Thesis
Statements
There are 3 ways of media censorship.
This is not an argumentative thesis statement
as the writer aims at listing the types of media
censorship. Therefore, the writer’s purpose of
writing this essay is not to persuade the reader
but to give information. Also, the ways of media
censorship are not open to debate, thus, not
suitable for argumentation.
Sample Argumentative Thesis
Statements
Newspapers should not identify people by color, race, or
religious faith in any way
This is an effective argumentative thesis statement.
Firstly, the topic is open to discussion. There may be
people who would oppose this argument claiming that
this kind of restriction would damage the objectivity of
the news. Therefore, the writer holds a clear stance.
Above all, it is obvious that the writer’s aim is not simply
to inform the readers but to convince them to take his /
her side in the debate.
Sample Argumentative Thesis
Statements
There are three main reasons why the media
manipulate the news.
This thesis statement is not argumentative.
Although the writer has the assumption that the
media manipulate the news, the aim of this
essay is not to convince the reader on this
issue, but to simply list the three reasons for
media manipulation. The reader, too, expects to
learn the three reasons.
Sample Argumentative Thesis
Statements
The media should not manipulate the news in any
way
This thesis statement is acceptable as an
argumentative thesis statement because the
writer clearly takes a stand in the debate about
whether the media should manipulate the news
or not. Here, the writer intends to influence the
mind of readers rather than to merely inform
them.
Sample Argumentative Thesis
Statements
It is essential to be media literate forthree reasons
This thesis statement is an expository thesis statement
although the sentence includes a strong word,
“essential”. The use of this word does not make the
thesis statement an argumentative one because the aim
here is to inform the reader about the three reasons.
The reader, here, expects to read a list of the reasons
without being forced to take a side. The writer does not
hold a stance in an ongoing discussion.
Sample Argumentative Thesis
Statements
It is essential that media literacy be taught in
schools
This is clearly an argumentative thesis
statement. Firstly, the topic is debatable.
Secondly, the writer is clear about where in the
discussion he stands. Finally, the purpose of the
writer is to affect the readers’ ideas on this
issue.
EFFECTIVE THESIS
STATEMENTS
On the whole, while writing argumentative thesis
statements, be sure to have a debatable topic,
state yourclaim and stance as strongly as
possible and make the readerunderstand
that youraim is to persuade ratherthan only
to inform.
Decide if the following statements are
Argumentative (ARG) or Informative (INFO)
1. ________ Censorship is the best way of controlling the minds of
the citizens.
2. ________ Newspapers should not identify victims of sexual
assault without their consent.
3. ________ Parents control their children’s TV viewing habits in
three ways.
4. ________ In war journalism, it is never appropriate to show on the
news how a country’s soldiers suffer in combat.
5. ________ The only way to receive high ratings for a TV series is
to cast attractive actors or actresses.
Time to Practice!
1. ________ Censorship is the best way of controlling the minds of
the citizens.
2. ________ Newspapers should not identify victims of sexual
assault without their consent.
3. ________ Parents control their children’s TV viewing habits in
three ways.
4. ________ In war journalism, it is never appropriate to show on the
news how a country’s soldiers suffer in combat.
5. ________ The only way to receive high ratings for a TV series is
to cast attractive actors or actresses.
ARG.
ARG.
INFO
ARG.
ARG.
Time to Practice!
6. ________ There are common practices that
advertisers use to sell products.
7. ________ Politicians use various strategies to
influence the media during their election campaigns.
8. ________ There are two main ways of manipulation in
print media; false balancing, which means focusing on
only one side of an argument; and slighting of the
content, which aims at giving so much emphasis to
style and so little to the actual substance.
Time to Practice!
6. ________ There are common practices that
advertisers use to sell products.
7. ________ Politicians use various strategies to
influence the media during their election campaigns.
8. ________ There are two main ways of manipulation in
print media; false balancing, which means focusing on
only one side of an argument; and slighting of the
content, which aims at giving so much emphasis to
style and so little to the actual substance.
INFO.
INFO
INFO
GENERATING IDEAS
After formulating your argumentative thesis
statement, you need to brainstorm a variety of
supporting ideas, counter arguments and ways
to refute these opposing views.
SUPPORTİNG YOUR
ARGUMENT
One important concern in writing an argumentative essay is to
strengthen your argument. To do this, you need to base your
argument on sound evidence. In supporting your argument,
the evidence that you include can be facts, examples, support
from authority (testimony), and statistics.
 Facts: data that have been objectively proven and are
generally accepted (such as historical facts, scientific data,
statistics etc.)
 Examples: should be sufficient number of examples to
prove the case.
 Opinions of experts
Statistics/Research Findings
1. It is clear that TV triggers violence. According to a study by the
American Psychological Association (2005), the average child living
in a developed country will view 8000 murders and 100.000 other
acts of violence before finishing elementary school. The average 27
hours a week kids spend watching TV - much of it violent - makes
them more prone to aggressive and violent behavior as adolescents
and adults (p. 10). TV executives have known this for a long time.
One of the most comprehensive studies of the impact of violent TV
was commissioned by CBS back in 1978. It found that teenage
boys who watched more hours of violent TV than average before
adolescence were committing such violent crimes as rape and
assault at a rate 49 percent higher than boys who watched fewer
than average hours of violent TV (as cited in APA, 2005, p. 3).
Supporting technique used:
____________________________________________________Statistics /Research Findings
Authority’s opinion/testimony
2. Not letting their children watch television as a
punishment is a futile effort of parents since
almost every effect of punishment is negative.
Dr. Bruno Bettleheim (2003, p. 8), famous
psychologist and professor at the University of
Chicago, writes, “Punishment is a traumatic
experience not only in itself but also because it
disappoints the child’s wish to believe in the
benevolence of the parent, on which his sense
of security rests.”…
Supporting technique used: ________________Authority’s opinion /testimony
COUNTER ARGUMENT, REFUTATION &
CONCEDING (BODY PARAGRAPH)
 Counter Argument: writer’s opinion about the
opposing points of view
 Refutation: writer’s response to the counter
argument
 Conceding: writer agrees that the opposing
point of view is valid but emphasizes how his
or her argument is still stronger
COUNTER ARGUMENT, REFUTATION &
CONCEDING (BODY PARAGRAPH)
 Use appropriate transitions to introduce counter-
arguments:
 Opponents of this position argue that..
 Critics of this position point out that..
 It may be objected that..
EXAMPLE OF COUNTER-ARGUMENT,
CONCESSION & REFUTATION (BODY
PARAGRAPH)
Counter-
argument
Some students may argue that because of their
situation, they sometimes have no choice but to
buy essays off the Internet
Concession I understand that students are under a lot of
pressure to produce well-written essays in order to
pass their classes but this does not justify
plagiarism
Refutation If they plagiarize, they will not develop their own
writing and critical thinking skills. As a result, they
may not be prepared to pass their final exams. In
the end, plagiarizing is harmful to the student’s
own academic success.
Thesis Statement: However, plagiarism is irresponsible from a social and an
academic standpoint
EXAMPLE OF COUNTER ARGUMENT,
REFUTATION & CONCEDING (BODY
PARAGRAPH)
Many medical doctors refuse to recognize
acupuncture because they believe that the
theory behind the practice is non-scientific.
However, the answer to this viewpoint lies
in the definition of scientific’. In the U.S.,
its meaning requires a large number of
published empirical studies of thousands of
patients, with statistical results and control
groups, before the medical community will
accept the practice (or the cancer drug, or
the development of nutrition classes in
medical school).
Co unte r
arg um e nt
Re futatio n
Suppo rt fo r
to pic
se nte nce
REFUTING THE COUNTER
ARGUMENTS
Refuting CounterArguments by Claiming that they are:
1. Incorrect: demonstrating that your opponent’s reasoning is
wrong because it is based on incorrect or misleading information
2. Irrelevant: showing that your opponent’s viewpoint is
inappropriate and unrelated because it is not relevant to the key
point
3. Insufficient: showing that your opponent’s reasoning is weak
because it is based on insufficient information or ignores
significant information. Partially agree with the opponent’s point
of view but on the whole prove that it is weak
SAMPLE: REFUTATION 1
1. Opponents of RTÜK claim that censorship limits and also controls the way people
feel and think. They argue that such an institution contradicts the ideals of
democracy. This idea is flawed because organizations such as RTÜK do not aim
to control what people watch, but rather aim to “regulate” what is being shown
on the screen. This is because people need to be protected from the negative
influence of certain programs. For example, children need protection unless they
are continuously monitored by their parents who are cautious of the potential
harms of TV viewing. Undoubtedly, no parent would want their children to be
exposed to violent murder scenes on TV as “such programs may breed violence
in children starting from very early ages” (Nell, 1999, p.12). Therefore, if parents,
as in the case of working parents, do not have time and energy to protect their
children from violent images on the screen, this should be done by an outside
control organism, which is RTÜK in Turkey. Is this control of thought? Is this
control of feelings? Definitely, it is not. Moreover, it is not only in Turkey that
institutions such as RTÜK exist. Many democratic countries all over Europe have
similar regulations as every society operates on some rules and regulations.
Hence, it is not correct to link these regulations to the concept of democracy
anyway. This is not an issue of democracy. It is an issue concerning the common
good of the society, and RTÜK serves the common good of our society.
The refutation technique used:
____________________________________________________
incorrect
SAMPLE: REFUTATION 2
2. Those who think that RTÜK should not have the right to interfere with what
we watch assert that censors of TV programs make subjective decisions
and censor programs discriminately. They may be right to some extent;
some decisions taken by RTÜK in past years have been harshly criticized
in newspapers. However, this does not mean that they always take the
wrong decisions. When RTÜK, for example, punishes a channel
broadcasting programs that include violence, pornography or racism, it is
right in taking such decisions as this type of interference helps control the
possible chaos in the society. As such contents result in moral deterioration
in the long run, the control mechanism which is applied by RTÜK through
warnings and punishments are for the benefit of the society. Moreover,
RTÜK’s decisions on such programs can never be considered wrong since
such content is unacceptable and unethical according to the universal
moral codes. Therefore, such borders of morality are strictly set and any
program exceeding these borders should be warned and punished as
RTÜK does.
The refutation technique used:
__________________________________________________________
insufficient
SAMPLE: REFUTATION 3
3. People who harshly criticize RTÜK believe that censoring TV programs is
not a solution to abolish inappropriate media messages. For example, they
assert that programs that are censored such as pornography or horror
movies still exist. To exemplify their claim, these people show pirate CDs of
porn or horror movies, or simply the movie industry as their evidence.
However, this idea is a totally new discussion which is not the main focus
because TV industry is independent from these markets. The fact that there
are such movies in theaters or CDs circling around does not mean that TV
should also broadcast these materials. Unlike CDs that can be bought by
the individuals will, TV exposes its messages to all people. Therefore, the
cases of TV viewers and CD buyers are two separate cases. TV is the most
widely used tool to convey media messages and it is for the society’s own
benefit if it is kept purified from programs or films which might have
unethical or harmful effects on the viewers in some way.
The refutation technique used: ___________________________________irrelevant
Sample Essay - Introduction
ADVERTISING MANIPULATES VIEWERS
In the simplest form, advertising can be
defined as a kind of message or message
transmission that is designed to promote a
product, service, or an idea.
Today this basic marketing strategy has
become a natural part of our daily life.
Considering that the $ 20 billion spent on
advertisements in 1979 had drastically risen
to $120 billion in 1999 and that in the course
of a lifetime, one will see about three years
worth of advertisements on television and
approximately 3,000 ads per day, a person
may easily acknowledge the impact of
advertising (DiChiara, 2008, para. 3).
Nonetheless, as Giselle Touzard (2008)
explains, advertising, which originally intended
to be a source of information for people on
the availability of products, “has developed
into an industry that shapes people’s identity”
(para. 2). Coming in various forms – in print,
audio, or visual form – advertisements not
only bombard audience with their messages,
but they also sell the ideas of who we are and
what we should do or be.
Thus, advertisements are harmful for the
society owing to theirdisruptive influence.
Thesis statement
authority’s opinion
definition
facts
SAMPLE ESSAY – COUNTER ARGUMENT,
CONCESSION & REFUTATION PARAGRAPH
Some may argue that advertisements are beneficial. It is the contention of these
supporters that advertisements are essential in keeping the market alive and rivalry hot.
They believe that it is thanks to advertisements that companies working on the same line
can display theirproducts on the market equally and fairly.
However, this idea cannot go further than being an immature claim because this rivalry is
unfair. It is only the companies who can “afford” broadcasting strong propaganda of their
product that can actually survive in this competitive environment. In that sense, small
companies are destined to be wiped out from the market.
Proponents of advertisements may also assert that consumers become more “aware” and
“conscious”. This position goes on to say that advertisements help the undecided
customers come to a decision seeing all the available products on the media.
This point has merits on the surface and could be acceptable to an extent. It is true that
advertisements inform the consumers on the availability and variety of goods. Yet,
serious doubts can be raised against this view when one considers the shortcomings of
the messages the viewers are exposed to.
The target audience, that is the consumers, are forced to believe in illusions about the
product rather than realities. When an advertiser focuses merely on the advantages of a
product, it creates a false impression. Or when a commodity is equated with positive
feelings such as happiness and self-confidence, this image builds up a false hope that
once you buy it, you will be happy and self-confident. Eventually, when these illusions are
not realized – as they have been lies of the advertiser all along -, the consumer is
disappointed. The advertiser achieves the ultimate end and turns a gear in the consumer
society, but it is a deception that is ethically unacceptable. The advertiser not only pushes
the public deeper into consumption, but also disillusions it with false messages.
The conclusion one needs to draw fromthese is that advertisements are detrimental.
An idea that is contrary
to the thesis statement/
COUNTERARGUMENT
Showing the weaknesses
of this opposite
argument/REFUTATION
Another opposing claim/
COUNTERARGUMENT
Showing the
weaknesses of this
opposite argument/
REFUTATION
Sample Essay – Pro Paragraph
3 It is clear that advertisements manipulate viewers; first of all, they
destroy societal balance as they draw on genderstereotypes.
4 Frequently advertisements make use of archetypes and myths for the
sake of making the message striking and memorable. Thus, it is a
common practice to represent women as decorative objects at home
who are submissive to men. Studies have identified that in advertising
women are less often used in work representations compared with
men (as cited in Jacobson & Mazur, 2007, p. 217). In the
advertisements of house appliances, especially, women are typically
equated with housewives and mothers. Even when women are
portrayed in professional environments, they are often in subordinate
positions, receiving instructions. Hence, professional women are
reduced to order-takers. Men, on the other hand, are commonly
associated with power, leadership, and efficiency. It is especially in car
advertisements that these features are paired with masculinity. Also,
professional men are shown in powerful and influential positions,
giving orders. It is mostly men who solve the problems, lead a
company or pursue professional goals. This double standard in the
illustration of genders not only reveals the mainstream view but also
affirms it because when consumers buy the advertised products, one
indirectly approves of the advertisements, and therefore contributes to
keeping and reproducing certain representations. Hence,
advertisements destroy the possibility of a society where both genders
are equal.
Backto the
thesis
statement
and original
argument
Supporting
techniques
(example,
explanation,
authority’s
opinion)
Sample Essay – Pro Paragraph 2
Secondly, advertisements present unattainable body images both for men and
women, and thus create an insecure society.
Everywhere advertisements tell the audience what it means to be a desirable
man or woman, just as directly as the advertisement that claims, “Image is
everything”. For a man, the message is: You need to be athletic. It seems that
whether a man is twenty or forty, whether he has brown or silver hair, an
athletic body is indispensable for a strong, powerful, and confident man. The
opposite is a caricature, just like the poor man, the anti-Mr. Muscle in the
detergent advertisement. For a woman, too, the message is parallel: You need
to be beautiful and skinny. Women are constantly exposed to gorgeous looking
women who have the perfect hair or skin, and a body like that of a model.
Although all these images are simple illusions, created by skillful makeup
artists, photographers, or photo re-touchers who work on these meticulously,
women unfortunately ignore this and delve into endless self-scrutiny. As Susan
Brownmiller states, a woman is “forced to concentrate on the minutiae of her
bodily parts, [and consequently she] is never free of self-consciousness. She is
never quite satisfied, and never secure, for desperate, unending absorption in
the drive for perfect appearance” (as cited in Jacobson & Mazur, 2007, p. 213).
Due to this lack of self-satisfaction, today 25 per cent of women are dieting and
another 50 per cent has recently started or quitted a diet (Jacobson & Mazur,
2007, p. 214). Some women take even more dangerous steps to be like the
women they see in advertisements. They develop an eating disorder such as
anorexia or bulimia. It is quite striking that today approximately one in five
women have an eating disorder (p. 214). Hence, advertisements perpetuate
disappointment as well as dissatisfaction in both genders.
Another argument
which is parallel
to the thesis
statement
Examples,
explanations,
authority’s
opinions,
statistics to
clarify the topic
sentence
Sample Essay - Conclusion
All in all, attempts trying to justify the benignity of
advertisements are destined to being feeble because
advertisements cause apparent harms on public. These
written, audio or visual messages reinstate stereotypes
and consequently annihilate gender equality. They also
portray impossible body images for men and women,
which eventually manipulates the public and shakes
self-esteem. Finally, advertisements exploit the future
generations for their own end and cause irreversible
impairment on theirhealth and psychology.
As Sarah Bernhardt (n.d, para. 3) remarks, “The
monster of advertisement... is a sort of octopus with
innumerable tentacles. It throws out to right and left, in
front and behind its clammy arms, and gathers in,
through its thousand little suckers, all the gossip and
slander and praise afloat, to spit out again at the public.”
Therefore, we need to save ourselves from the evil
tentacles of this monster and learn to make our own free
choices, before it is too late.
Linkersignalling the
conclusion +
summary of the main
points
Authority’s opinion
warning
CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH
i. Summarizes arguments
ii. Calls for action
iii. Proposes solutions
AVOID FAULTY LOGIC
(FALLACY)
Good writers want to convince readers to agree
with their arguments-their reasons and
conclusions. Logic can help prove your point
and disprove your opponent’s point.
Sweeping Generalizations
Words such as all, always and never are too
broad and cannot be supported
Example: All Americans eat fast food
Problem: Maybe every American that you know
eats fast food but the statement that
all
Americans eat it cannot be proven
Events Related Only By Sequence
When one event happen, it does not necessarily
cause a second event to happen, even if one
follows the other in time
Example: Henry went to the football game and
then he had a car accident. Therefore, football
games cause car accidents
Problem: The two events may have happened
in that order, but do not mislead the reader into
thinking that the first action was responsible for
the second
Inappropriate Authority Figures
Using famous names may often help you prove
or disprove your point. However, be sure to use
the name logically and in the proper context
Example: Madonna is a good singer. As a result,
she would make a good orchestra conductor
Problem: While Madonna may be a good singer,
this quality will not necessarily make her a good
orchestra conductor
Hasty Generalizations
Hasty generalizations are making quick judgements based on inadequate
information. This kind of logical fallacy is a common error in argumentative
writing.
Example: Joe did not want to study at a university. Instead, he decided
to go to a technical school. He is now making an excellent salary repairing
computers. Bill does not want to study at a university. Therefore, he should go
to a technical school to become financially
successful.
Problem:While Joe and Bill have something in common (they do not
want to study at a university), this fact alone does not mean that Bill would be
successful doing the same thing that Joe has done. Other information may be
important as well, such as the fact that Joe has lots of experience with
computers or that Bill has problems with manual dexterity.
Loaded words
Some words contain positive or negative connotations.
Try to avoid them when you make an argument. Your
readers may think you are trying to appeal to them by
using these emotionally packed words. In fact, you want
to persuade the reader by using logical arguments, not
emotional rants.
Example: The blue-flag freedom fighters won the war
against the green-flag guerillas
Problem: The terms freedom fighters (positive) and
guerillas (negative) may influence the readers’ opinion about the
two groups without any support for the bias
Either/Or Arguments
When you argue a point, be careful not to limit
the outcome choices to only two or three. In fact,
there are often a multitude of choices. When you
offer only two scenarios, you are trying to
frighten the reader into your beliefs.
Example: The instructor must either return the
tests or dismiss the class
Problem: This statement implies that only two
choices are available to the instructor
Common Errors
1. The refutation does not refute the counter argument. In other
words, the refutation is irrelevant to the counterargument.
Thesis statement: The mediumof university education should be
Turkish.
CON: Supporters of English as the medium of university education
believe that English is the language in which most academic
studies are published. Therefore, they maintain, our education
should be in English so as to be able to better understand and
respond to these studies.
REF: But learning English is very difficult and not everyone can
master it.
Common Errors
2. In the counter argument refutation paragraph, one of the pro
arguments, which is dealt with in another paragraph as well, is repeated
as the refutation of the counter argument. In other words, the ideas are
repetitious.
Thesis statement: The mediumof university education should be
Turkish.
PRO: It will make Turkish more prestigious if we use it in the academic and
scientific context. The students will be more successful.
CON: Supporters of English medium universities believe that English is the of
the academic publication, so having education in English will
contribute to the students’ future accomplishments.
REF: By doing so we miss the opportunity to make Turkish accepted in the
academic circles; Turkish needs to be used in academic and scientific
context so as to gain more prestige and be a world language.
Common Errors
3.The counterargument presented is not
contradictory to the thesis statement. In other
words, the counter argument does not present a
direct opposition to the stance of the thesis
statement.
Thesis statement: The medium of university
education should be Turkish.
CON: Opponents of this idea believe that
English is a world language and
everybody should learn it.

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Argumentative Essay

  • 2. ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY  An argumentative essay is when the writer presents an opinion on a controversial issue supported by evidence (facts, examples, the opinion of experts, or logical reasoning)  An essay in which you agree or disagree with an issue  Your goal is to convince your readers that your opinion or point of view is the most valid viewpoint.  So, your essay must be balanced. It must contain:  An explanation of the issue  A clear thesis statement  Opposing arguments / counterarguments  Rebuttals / refutations of the opposing arguments (counterarguments)  Your own arguments “. . yo u do no t just g ive re aso ns to suppo rt yo ur po int o f vie w but yo u m ust also discuss the o the r side ’s re aso ns and the n re but the m . . ” “. . If yo u g ive o nly yo ur o pinio n, yo ur re ade rs willno t be co nvince d o f yo ur vie wpo ints. . ”
  • 3. DISTINCT FEATURE OF AN ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY  The writer give reasons to support his/herpoint of view as well as  discuss the otherside’s reasons then  rebut them (to point out problems with the other side’s reasons to prove that they are not good reasons).
  • 4. Key Terms Refutation _____ Proponent _____ Opponent _____ Counter Argument (CON) ____ Pro Argument (PRO) _____ 5 6 1 4 3 1 A person who disagrees with something and speaks against it 3 Point or statement that supports one’s ideas and / or thesis 4 Point or statement in opposition to the argument being made in a written document 5 The process of discrediting the arguments that oppose your thesis statement or also known as counter arguments 6 Someone who argues in favor of something; advocate
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  • 7. ARGUMENTATIVE TOPICS  A good topic has at least two arguable sides.  Topics that are not appropriate for argumentative essays are arguments of preference, belief or faith or fact Type of Argument Example Appropriate Topic for Argumentative Essay? Preference Does chocolate ice cream taste better than strawberry ice cream? No; preference can’t be supported with facts, examples, or reasons Belief of faith Does God exist? No; religious beliefs is based on faith, not verifiable facts Argument of fact Who won the World Cup in 2010? No; there is one correct answer that is not debatable
  • 8. INTRO/THESIS STATEMENT  Thesis statement clearly states which side you are for:  Curfe w laws are unfair and sho uld be abo lishe d  In m y o pinio n, ste m ce llsho uld re ce ive the fullsuppo rt o f o ur g o ve rnm e nt  A thesis statement often mentions the o ppo sing point of view.  De spite the claim s that curfe w laws are ne ce ssary to co ntro ljuve nile g ang s , curfe w laws are cle arly unco nstitutio nal  Altho ug h the re are ce rtainly re aso ns to be cautio us with ste m ce llre se arch o r any ne w te chno lo g y , I be lie ve that its po te ntialbe ne fits far o utwe ig h its dang e rs
  • 9. INTRO/THESIS STATEMENT  Use expressions such as the following to introduce opposing points of view:  Some people feel that the United States should have a national health care plan like Canada’s.  Many thinkthat genetically engineered crops are a grave danger to the environment  Smokers say that they have a right to smoke  It may be true that the U.S. Constitution gives citizens the right to own weapons
  • 10. INTRO/THESIS STATEMENT  Then connect the opposing point of view to your own with transitional signals of contrast.  Some people feel that the United States should have a national health care plan like Canada’s; however, others feel that government should stay out of the health care business  Although/Even though many think that genetically engineered crops are a grave danger to the environment, such crops can alleviate world hunger and malnutrition  Smokers say that they have a right to smoke in spite of the fact that/despite the fact that smoking will kill them  While/Whereas it may be true that the U.S. Constitution gives citizens the right to own weapons, the men who wrote the Constitution lived in a different time
  • 11. Sample Argumentative Thesis Statements Something should be done on media bias This is not an effective argumentative thesis statement because it does not clearly state the writer’s idea. The answers of questions like “what is that ‘something’ that should be done?” or “who should do it?” are not clear.
  • 12. Sample Argumentative Thesis Statements CNN is the best TV channel. This is not an effective thesis statement. This sentence is not debatable as it involves personal choice or preference.
  • 13. Sample Argumentative Thesis Statements There are 3 ways of media censorship. This is not an argumentative thesis statement as the writer aims at listing the types of media censorship. Therefore, the writer’s purpose of writing this essay is not to persuade the reader but to give information. Also, the ways of media censorship are not open to debate, thus, not suitable for argumentation.
  • 14. Sample Argumentative Thesis Statements Newspapers should not identify people by color, race, or religious faith in any way This is an effective argumentative thesis statement. Firstly, the topic is open to discussion. There may be people who would oppose this argument claiming that this kind of restriction would damage the objectivity of the news. Therefore, the writer holds a clear stance. Above all, it is obvious that the writer’s aim is not simply to inform the readers but to convince them to take his / her side in the debate.
  • 15. Sample Argumentative Thesis Statements There are three main reasons why the media manipulate the news. This thesis statement is not argumentative. Although the writer has the assumption that the media manipulate the news, the aim of this essay is not to convince the reader on this issue, but to simply list the three reasons for media manipulation. The reader, too, expects to learn the three reasons.
  • 16. Sample Argumentative Thesis Statements The media should not manipulate the news in any way This thesis statement is acceptable as an argumentative thesis statement because the writer clearly takes a stand in the debate about whether the media should manipulate the news or not. Here, the writer intends to influence the mind of readers rather than to merely inform them.
  • 17. Sample Argumentative Thesis Statements It is essential to be media literate forthree reasons This thesis statement is an expository thesis statement although the sentence includes a strong word, “essential”. The use of this word does not make the thesis statement an argumentative one because the aim here is to inform the reader about the three reasons. The reader, here, expects to read a list of the reasons without being forced to take a side. The writer does not hold a stance in an ongoing discussion.
  • 18. Sample Argumentative Thesis Statements It is essential that media literacy be taught in schools This is clearly an argumentative thesis statement. Firstly, the topic is debatable. Secondly, the writer is clear about where in the discussion he stands. Finally, the purpose of the writer is to affect the readers’ ideas on this issue.
  • 19. EFFECTIVE THESIS STATEMENTS On the whole, while writing argumentative thesis statements, be sure to have a debatable topic, state yourclaim and stance as strongly as possible and make the readerunderstand that youraim is to persuade ratherthan only to inform.
  • 20. Decide if the following statements are Argumentative (ARG) or Informative (INFO) 1. ________ Censorship is the best way of controlling the minds of the citizens. 2. ________ Newspapers should not identify victims of sexual assault without their consent. 3. ________ Parents control their children’s TV viewing habits in three ways. 4. ________ In war journalism, it is never appropriate to show on the news how a country’s soldiers suffer in combat. 5. ________ The only way to receive high ratings for a TV series is to cast attractive actors or actresses.
  • 21. Time to Practice! 1. ________ Censorship is the best way of controlling the minds of the citizens. 2. ________ Newspapers should not identify victims of sexual assault without their consent. 3. ________ Parents control their children’s TV viewing habits in three ways. 4. ________ In war journalism, it is never appropriate to show on the news how a country’s soldiers suffer in combat. 5. ________ The only way to receive high ratings for a TV series is to cast attractive actors or actresses. ARG. ARG. INFO ARG. ARG.
  • 22. Time to Practice! 6. ________ There are common practices that advertisers use to sell products. 7. ________ Politicians use various strategies to influence the media during their election campaigns. 8. ________ There are two main ways of manipulation in print media; false balancing, which means focusing on only one side of an argument; and slighting of the content, which aims at giving so much emphasis to style and so little to the actual substance.
  • 23. Time to Practice! 6. ________ There are common practices that advertisers use to sell products. 7. ________ Politicians use various strategies to influence the media during their election campaigns. 8. ________ There are two main ways of manipulation in print media; false balancing, which means focusing on only one side of an argument; and slighting of the content, which aims at giving so much emphasis to style and so little to the actual substance. INFO. INFO INFO
  • 24. GENERATING IDEAS After formulating your argumentative thesis statement, you need to brainstorm a variety of supporting ideas, counter arguments and ways to refute these opposing views.
  • 25. SUPPORTİNG YOUR ARGUMENT One important concern in writing an argumentative essay is to strengthen your argument. To do this, you need to base your argument on sound evidence. In supporting your argument, the evidence that you include can be facts, examples, support from authority (testimony), and statistics.  Facts: data that have been objectively proven and are generally accepted (such as historical facts, scientific data, statistics etc.)  Examples: should be sufficient number of examples to prove the case.  Opinions of experts
  • 26. Statistics/Research Findings 1. It is clear that TV triggers violence. According to a study by the American Psychological Association (2005), the average child living in a developed country will view 8000 murders and 100.000 other acts of violence before finishing elementary school. The average 27 hours a week kids spend watching TV - much of it violent - makes them more prone to aggressive and violent behavior as adolescents and adults (p. 10). TV executives have known this for a long time. One of the most comprehensive studies of the impact of violent TV was commissioned by CBS back in 1978. It found that teenage boys who watched more hours of violent TV than average before adolescence were committing such violent crimes as rape and assault at a rate 49 percent higher than boys who watched fewer than average hours of violent TV (as cited in APA, 2005, p. 3). Supporting technique used: ____________________________________________________Statistics /Research Findings
  • 27. Authority’s opinion/testimony 2. Not letting their children watch television as a punishment is a futile effort of parents since almost every effect of punishment is negative. Dr. Bruno Bettleheim (2003, p. 8), famous psychologist and professor at the University of Chicago, writes, “Punishment is a traumatic experience not only in itself but also because it disappoints the child’s wish to believe in the benevolence of the parent, on which his sense of security rests.”… Supporting technique used: ________________Authority’s opinion /testimony
  • 28. COUNTER ARGUMENT, REFUTATION & CONCEDING (BODY PARAGRAPH)  Counter Argument: writer’s opinion about the opposing points of view  Refutation: writer’s response to the counter argument  Conceding: writer agrees that the opposing point of view is valid but emphasizes how his or her argument is still stronger
  • 29. COUNTER ARGUMENT, REFUTATION & CONCEDING (BODY PARAGRAPH)  Use appropriate transitions to introduce counter- arguments:  Opponents of this position argue that..  Critics of this position point out that..  It may be objected that..
  • 30. EXAMPLE OF COUNTER-ARGUMENT, CONCESSION & REFUTATION (BODY PARAGRAPH) Counter- argument Some students may argue that because of their situation, they sometimes have no choice but to buy essays off the Internet Concession I understand that students are under a lot of pressure to produce well-written essays in order to pass their classes but this does not justify plagiarism Refutation If they plagiarize, they will not develop their own writing and critical thinking skills. As a result, they may not be prepared to pass their final exams. In the end, plagiarizing is harmful to the student’s own academic success. Thesis Statement: However, plagiarism is irresponsible from a social and an academic standpoint
  • 31. EXAMPLE OF COUNTER ARGUMENT, REFUTATION & CONCEDING (BODY PARAGRAPH) Many medical doctors refuse to recognize acupuncture because they believe that the theory behind the practice is non-scientific. However, the answer to this viewpoint lies in the definition of scientific’. In the U.S., its meaning requires a large number of published empirical studies of thousands of patients, with statistical results and control groups, before the medical community will accept the practice (or the cancer drug, or the development of nutrition classes in medical school). Co unte r arg um e nt Re futatio n Suppo rt fo r to pic se nte nce
  • 32. REFUTING THE COUNTER ARGUMENTS Refuting CounterArguments by Claiming that they are: 1. Incorrect: demonstrating that your opponent’s reasoning is wrong because it is based on incorrect or misleading information 2. Irrelevant: showing that your opponent’s viewpoint is inappropriate and unrelated because it is not relevant to the key point 3. Insufficient: showing that your opponent’s reasoning is weak because it is based on insufficient information or ignores significant information. Partially agree with the opponent’s point of view but on the whole prove that it is weak
  • 33. SAMPLE: REFUTATION 1 1. Opponents of RTÜK claim that censorship limits and also controls the way people feel and think. They argue that such an institution contradicts the ideals of democracy. This idea is flawed because organizations such as RTÜK do not aim to control what people watch, but rather aim to “regulate” what is being shown on the screen. This is because people need to be protected from the negative influence of certain programs. For example, children need protection unless they are continuously monitored by their parents who are cautious of the potential harms of TV viewing. Undoubtedly, no parent would want their children to be exposed to violent murder scenes on TV as “such programs may breed violence in children starting from very early ages” (Nell, 1999, p.12). Therefore, if parents, as in the case of working parents, do not have time and energy to protect their children from violent images on the screen, this should be done by an outside control organism, which is RTÜK in Turkey. Is this control of thought? Is this control of feelings? Definitely, it is not. Moreover, it is not only in Turkey that institutions such as RTÜK exist. Many democratic countries all over Europe have similar regulations as every society operates on some rules and regulations. Hence, it is not correct to link these regulations to the concept of democracy anyway. This is not an issue of democracy. It is an issue concerning the common good of the society, and RTÜK serves the common good of our society. The refutation technique used: ____________________________________________________ incorrect
  • 34. SAMPLE: REFUTATION 2 2. Those who think that RTÜK should not have the right to interfere with what we watch assert that censors of TV programs make subjective decisions and censor programs discriminately. They may be right to some extent; some decisions taken by RTÜK in past years have been harshly criticized in newspapers. However, this does not mean that they always take the wrong decisions. When RTÜK, for example, punishes a channel broadcasting programs that include violence, pornography or racism, it is right in taking such decisions as this type of interference helps control the possible chaos in the society. As such contents result in moral deterioration in the long run, the control mechanism which is applied by RTÜK through warnings and punishments are for the benefit of the society. Moreover, RTÜK’s decisions on such programs can never be considered wrong since such content is unacceptable and unethical according to the universal moral codes. Therefore, such borders of morality are strictly set and any program exceeding these borders should be warned and punished as RTÜK does. The refutation technique used: __________________________________________________________ insufficient
  • 35. SAMPLE: REFUTATION 3 3. People who harshly criticize RTÜK believe that censoring TV programs is not a solution to abolish inappropriate media messages. For example, they assert that programs that are censored such as pornography or horror movies still exist. To exemplify their claim, these people show pirate CDs of porn or horror movies, or simply the movie industry as their evidence. However, this idea is a totally new discussion which is not the main focus because TV industry is independent from these markets. The fact that there are such movies in theaters or CDs circling around does not mean that TV should also broadcast these materials. Unlike CDs that can be bought by the individuals will, TV exposes its messages to all people. Therefore, the cases of TV viewers and CD buyers are two separate cases. TV is the most widely used tool to convey media messages and it is for the society’s own benefit if it is kept purified from programs or films which might have unethical or harmful effects on the viewers in some way. The refutation technique used: ___________________________________irrelevant
  • 36. Sample Essay - Introduction ADVERTISING MANIPULATES VIEWERS In the simplest form, advertising can be defined as a kind of message or message transmission that is designed to promote a product, service, or an idea. Today this basic marketing strategy has become a natural part of our daily life. Considering that the $ 20 billion spent on advertisements in 1979 had drastically risen to $120 billion in 1999 and that in the course of a lifetime, one will see about three years worth of advertisements on television and approximately 3,000 ads per day, a person may easily acknowledge the impact of advertising (DiChiara, 2008, para. 3). Nonetheless, as Giselle Touzard (2008) explains, advertising, which originally intended to be a source of information for people on the availability of products, “has developed into an industry that shapes people’s identity” (para. 2). Coming in various forms – in print, audio, or visual form – advertisements not only bombard audience with their messages, but they also sell the ideas of who we are and what we should do or be. Thus, advertisements are harmful for the society owing to theirdisruptive influence. Thesis statement authority’s opinion definition facts
  • 37. SAMPLE ESSAY – COUNTER ARGUMENT, CONCESSION & REFUTATION PARAGRAPH Some may argue that advertisements are beneficial. It is the contention of these supporters that advertisements are essential in keeping the market alive and rivalry hot. They believe that it is thanks to advertisements that companies working on the same line can display theirproducts on the market equally and fairly. However, this idea cannot go further than being an immature claim because this rivalry is unfair. It is only the companies who can “afford” broadcasting strong propaganda of their product that can actually survive in this competitive environment. In that sense, small companies are destined to be wiped out from the market. Proponents of advertisements may also assert that consumers become more “aware” and “conscious”. This position goes on to say that advertisements help the undecided customers come to a decision seeing all the available products on the media. This point has merits on the surface and could be acceptable to an extent. It is true that advertisements inform the consumers on the availability and variety of goods. Yet, serious doubts can be raised against this view when one considers the shortcomings of the messages the viewers are exposed to. The target audience, that is the consumers, are forced to believe in illusions about the product rather than realities. When an advertiser focuses merely on the advantages of a product, it creates a false impression. Or when a commodity is equated with positive feelings such as happiness and self-confidence, this image builds up a false hope that once you buy it, you will be happy and self-confident. Eventually, when these illusions are not realized – as they have been lies of the advertiser all along -, the consumer is disappointed. The advertiser achieves the ultimate end and turns a gear in the consumer society, but it is a deception that is ethically unacceptable. The advertiser not only pushes the public deeper into consumption, but also disillusions it with false messages. The conclusion one needs to draw fromthese is that advertisements are detrimental. An idea that is contrary to the thesis statement/ COUNTERARGUMENT Showing the weaknesses of this opposite argument/REFUTATION Another opposing claim/ COUNTERARGUMENT Showing the weaknesses of this opposite argument/ REFUTATION
  • 38. Sample Essay – Pro Paragraph 3 It is clear that advertisements manipulate viewers; first of all, they destroy societal balance as they draw on genderstereotypes. 4 Frequently advertisements make use of archetypes and myths for the sake of making the message striking and memorable. Thus, it is a common practice to represent women as decorative objects at home who are submissive to men. Studies have identified that in advertising women are less often used in work representations compared with men (as cited in Jacobson & Mazur, 2007, p. 217). In the advertisements of house appliances, especially, women are typically equated with housewives and mothers. Even when women are portrayed in professional environments, they are often in subordinate positions, receiving instructions. Hence, professional women are reduced to order-takers. Men, on the other hand, are commonly associated with power, leadership, and efficiency. It is especially in car advertisements that these features are paired with masculinity. Also, professional men are shown in powerful and influential positions, giving orders. It is mostly men who solve the problems, lead a company or pursue professional goals. This double standard in the illustration of genders not only reveals the mainstream view but also affirms it because when consumers buy the advertised products, one indirectly approves of the advertisements, and therefore contributes to keeping and reproducing certain representations. Hence, advertisements destroy the possibility of a society where both genders are equal. Backto the thesis statement and original argument Supporting techniques (example, explanation, authority’s opinion)
  • 39. Sample Essay – Pro Paragraph 2 Secondly, advertisements present unattainable body images both for men and women, and thus create an insecure society. Everywhere advertisements tell the audience what it means to be a desirable man or woman, just as directly as the advertisement that claims, “Image is everything”. For a man, the message is: You need to be athletic. It seems that whether a man is twenty or forty, whether he has brown or silver hair, an athletic body is indispensable for a strong, powerful, and confident man. The opposite is a caricature, just like the poor man, the anti-Mr. Muscle in the detergent advertisement. For a woman, too, the message is parallel: You need to be beautiful and skinny. Women are constantly exposed to gorgeous looking women who have the perfect hair or skin, and a body like that of a model. Although all these images are simple illusions, created by skillful makeup artists, photographers, or photo re-touchers who work on these meticulously, women unfortunately ignore this and delve into endless self-scrutiny. As Susan Brownmiller states, a woman is “forced to concentrate on the minutiae of her bodily parts, [and consequently she] is never free of self-consciousness. She is never quite satisfied, and never secure, for desperate, unending absorption in the drive for perfect appearance” (as cited in Jacobson & Mazur, 2007, p. 213). Due to this lack of self-satisfaction, today 25 per cent of women are dieting and another 50 per cent has recently started or quitted a diet (Jacobson & Mazur, 2007, p. 214). Some women take even more dangerous steps to be like the women they see in advertisements. They develop an eating disorder such as anorexia or bulimia. It is quite striking that today approximately one in five women have an eating disorder (p. 214). Hence, advertisements perpetuate disappointment as well as dissatisfaction in both genders. Another argument which is parallel to the thesis statement Examples, explanations, authority’s opinions, statistics to clarify the topic sentence
  • 40. Sample Essay - Conclusion All in all, attempts trying to justify the benignity of advertisements are destined to being feeble because advertisements cause apparent harms on public. These written, audio or visual messages reinstate stereotypes and consequently annihilate gender equality. They also portray impossible body images for men and women, which eventually manipulates the public and shakes self-esteem. Finally, advertisements exploit the future generations for their own end and cause irreversible impairment on theirhealth and psychology. As Sarah Bernhardt (n.d, para. 3) remarks, “The monster of advertisement... is a sort of octopus with innumerable tentacles. It throws out to right and left, in front and behind its clammy arms, and gathers in, through its thousand little suckers, all the gossip and slander and praise afloat, to spit out again at the public.” Therefore, we need to save ourselves from the evil tentacles of this monster and learn to make our own free choices, before it is too late. Linkersignalling the conclusion + summary of the main points Authority’s opinion warning
  • 41. CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH i. Summarizes arguments ii. Calls for action iii. Proposes solutions
  • 42. AVOID FAULTY LOGIC (FALLACY) Good writers want to convince readers to agree with their arguments-their reasons and conclusions. Logic can help prove your point and disprove your opponent’s point.
  • 43. Sweeping Generalizations Words such as all, always and never are too broad and cannot be supported Example: All Americans eat fast food Problem: Maybe every American that you know eats fast food but the statement that all Americans eat it cannot be proven
  • 44. Events Related Only By Sequence When one event happen, it does not necessarily cause a second event to happen, even if one follows the other in time Example: Henry went to the football game and then he had a car accident. Therefore, football games cause car accidents Problem: The two events may have happened in that order, but do not mislead the reader into thinking that the first action was responsible for the second
  • 45. Inappropriate Authority Figures Using famous names may often help you prove or disprove your point. However, be sure to use the name logically and in the proper context Example: Madonna is a good singer. As a result, she would make a good orchestra conductor Problem: While Madonna may be a good singer, this quality will not necessarily make her a good orchestra conductor
  • 46. Hasty Generalizations Hasty generalizations are making quick judgements based on inadequate information. This kind of logical fallacy is a common error in argumentative writing. Example: Joe did not want to study at a university. Instead, he decided to go to a technical school. He is now making an excellent salary repairing computers. Bill does not want to study at a university. Therefore, he should go to a technical school to become financially successful. Problem:While Joe and Bill have something in common (they do not want to study at a university), this fact alone does not mean that Bill would be successful doing the same thing that Joe has done. Other information may be important as well, such as the fact that Joe has lots of experience with computers or that Bill has problems with manual dexterity.
  • 47. Loaded words Some words contain positive or negative connotations. Try to avoid them when you make an argument. Your readers may think you are trying to appeal to them by using these emotionally packed words. In fact, you want to persuade the reader by using logical arguments, not emotional rants. Example: The blue-flag freedom fighters won the war against the green-flag guerillas Problem: The terms freedom fighters (positive) and guerillas (negative) may influence the readers’ opinion about the two groups without any support for the bias
  • 48. Either/Or Arguments When you argue a point, be careful not to limit the outcome choices to only two or three. In fact, there are often a multitude of choices. When you offer only two scenarios, you are trying to frighten the reader into your beliefs. Example: The instructor must either return the tests or dismiss the class Problem: This statement implies that only two choices are available to the instructor
  • 49. Common Errors 1. The refutation does not refute the counter argument. In other words, the refutation is irrelevant to the counterargument. Thesis statement: The mediumof university education should be Turkish. CON: Supporters of English as the medium of university education believe that English is the language in which most academic studies are published. Therefore, they maintain, our education should be in English so as to be able to better understand and respond to these studies. REF: But learning English is very difficult and not everyone can master it.
  • 50. Common Errors 2. In the counter argument refutation paragraph, one of the pro arguments, which is dealt with in another paragraph as well, is repeated as the refutation of the counter argument. In other words, the ideas are repetitious. Thesis statement: The mediumof university education should be Turkish. PRO: It will make Turkish more prestigious if we use it in the academic and scientific context. The students will be more successful. CON: Supporters of English medium universities believe that English is the of the academic publication, so having education in English will contribute to the students’ future accomplishments. REF: By doing so we miss the opportunity to make Turkish accepted in the academic circles; Turkish needs to be used in academic and scientific context so as to gain more prestige and be a world language.
  • 51. Common Errors 3.The counterargument presented is not contradictory to the thesis statement. In other words, the counter argument does not present a direct opposition to the stance of the thesis statement. Thesis statement: The medium of university education should be Turkish. CON: Opponents of this idea believe that English is a world language and everybody should learn it.