1. Capturing our readers’ interest by investigating published writing and revising our own Legendary Leads

2. Help! I’ve got a great idea for a story and I just don’t know where to begin. If only there was someone to save me…

3. There’s no need to fear, Revision Man is here!!

4. Learn from the pros! Who is your superhero? Revision man says…

5. The greatest discovery of my generation is that a human being can alter his life by altering his attitude. -William James quotes

6. Who am I? And how, I wonder, will this story end? questions

7. March unleashed a torrent of rainfall after an abnormally dry winter. A cold front out of Canada then descended and was held in place by a swirling wind that roared down the Gorge from eastern Oregon. Although spring was surely just around the corner, the god of winter was not about to relinquish its hard-won dominion without a tussle. Setting

8. What have these authors done that I could try?

9. Meanwhile in a classroom of eager 2 nd graders…..

10. Thank you revision man! I know exactly how to start my story! Just doing my duty ma’am. remember…if 2 nd graders can do it, so can you!!

11. So, once again the metropolis of Authorsboro is safe from the evil villain writer’s block…

12. For now…

13. To be continued…