When servicing "cold" email traffic, what does a landing page have to do to be effective. This is a critique of Stress Free School Supplies landing page. See a detailed review on <a>The Conversion Scientist Blog</a>.

1. Landing Page Critique
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2. Shrink size
to allow
more info
above fold
Match Offer to
Audience
Move bullets into one
line. Shown to increase
readability and will give
room for form above fold
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3. Move Button and Consider Different Call
To Action Copy on Button
Move these to less Prime
Place
This is good
messaging!
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4. Testimonials are getting lost in the
cosmos of pretty colors
Fill Out The Form
Get Contacted
About Supplies
Lists
Have School
Supplies Taken
Care of!
Instead of this
picture a graphic
depicting the
process would be
more effective
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