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- 1. 以詩入樂 民歌漢英語翻譯實作 I 陳美靜 2012.11.19
- 2. 民歌漢英語翻譯實作 I • 名家翻譯觀 • 英文特色、句構 • 譯詩賞析 • 翻譯實作評析
- 3. 名家翻譯觀 • 思果：翻譯「切不可譯字，要譯意、譯情 、譯氣勢，譯作者用心處」（ 1980 ： 5 ） 。 • 梁實秋認為「譯詩最難。因為詩的文字最 精練，經過千錘百鍊，幾度推敲，要確切 ，要典雅，又要含蓄，又要有韻致，又要 有節奏，又要有形式。條件實在太多」 （丘彥明 397 ）。
- 4. 名家翻譯觀 • 余光中： 譯詩要考慮的條件很複雜。「一 首詩的妙處如果是在歷史背景、文化環境 ，或是語言特色，其譯文必然事半功倍」 （ 154 ） • 詩歌翻譯：詩歌是形式與內容的結合，語 言精鍊，富含意象、具聲韻節奏之美，各 個譯者對詩歌翻譯採取不同的翻譯策略。 有的譯者以詩體譯詩，有的以散文體，有 的以再創造的方式改寫原詩。
- 5. 名家翻譯觀 • 歌曲翻譯：歌曲翻譯可視不同目的而採取 不同的翻譯策略。若是為了說明歌詞的意 義，協助聽眾瞭解歌曲內容，可用散文體 將內容譯出。但若是為了讓歌者演唱，則 必須將譯文的可唱性擺在第一位，其次是 意義，接下來是譯文要如目標語（譯入 語）般自然，還要注意押韻與節奏 (Peter Low 92-98) 。
- 6. 英文的特色 • 英文好用抽象名詞，而名詞又分單數、複 數 • 英文動詞的時態變化、被動句的使用 • 英文連接詞、介繫詞的使用
- 7. 英文的句構 • 1. Simple sentences: S+V • 2. Compound sentences: • S+V and S+V • but • ,so • 3. Complex sentence: • S+V although S+V • because • before • since • when
- 8. 譯詩賞析 • 民歌 余光中 傳說北方有一首歌 只有黃河的肺活量能歌唱 從青海到黃海 風 也聽見 沙 也聽見 • A Folk Song (Translated by the poet) • By legend a song was sung in the north • By the Yellow River, with her mighty lungs, • From Blue Sea to Yellow Sea, • It’s heard in the wind, • And heard in the sand.
- 9. 譯詩賞析 • 如果黃河凍成了冰河 還有長江最最母性的鼻音 從高原到平原 魚 也聽見 龍 也聽見 • If the Yellow River froze into icy river, • There’s the Long River’s most motherly hum. • From the plateau to the plain, • It’s heard by the dragons, • And heard by the fish. •
- 10. 譯詩賞析 • 如果長江凍成了冰河 還有我，還有我的紅海在呼嘯 從早潮到晚潮 醒 也聽見 夢 也聽見 • If the Long River froze into icy river, • There’s myself, my Red Sea howling in me. • From high tide to low tide, • It’s heard full awake. • And heard full asleep.
- 11. 譯詩賞析 • 有一天我的血也結冰 還有你的血他的血在合唱 從Ａ型到Ｏ型 哭 也聽見 笑 也聽見 • If one day my blood, too, shall freeze hard, • There’s the choir of your blood and his blood. • From Type A to Type O, • It’s heard while sobbing, • And heard while laughing.
- 12. 翻譯實作評析 • 抓泥鰍 (Catch the loaches) 侯德建詞曲 • 池塘裡水滿了 雨也停了 田邊的稀泥裡到處是泥鰍 天天我等著你 等著你捉泥鰍 大哥哥好不好 咱們去捉泥鰍 小牛的哥哥帶著他捉泥鰍 大哥哥好不好 咱們去捉泥鰍 • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v =iUCTzW5tbeY&feature=related
- 13. 翻譯實作評析 • The water in the pond is full and the rain has stopped • In the mud, by the field, is filled with loaches. • The muddy field is filled with loaches. • Every day I waited for you, waited for you, to catch the loaches • I wait for you to catch loaches • Is it okay? Let’s go catch the loaches. • Let’s go to catch loaches. • Is it okay for us to go to catch loaches? • Neo’s brother took him to catch the loaches • Is it okay? Let’s go catch the loaches. • Is it okay for us to go to catch loaches? • Is it okay if we go to catch loaches?
- 14. 翻譯實作評析 • 〈讓我與你相遇〉 • 假如我來世上一遭，只為與你相聚一次； • 只為了億萬年的那一剎那，一剎那裡所有的甜蜜 與悲淒。 • 那麼就讓一切該發生的，都在瞬間出現； • 讓我俯首感謝所有星球的相助，讓我與你相遇， 與你別離。 • 完成了上帝所作的一首詩，然後再緩緩地老去； • 讓我與你相遇，與你別離。 • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kqb8Ei1Dxj4
- 15. 翻譯實作評析 • (Let me meet with you) (let me meet you) • If I come to the world once a time is just for meet with you once a time; • If I come to this world once just for getting together with you one time, • is just for a flash of millions upon millions years, whole sweet and sorrow in the flash. • just for an instant, for all the happiness and sorrow at that instant, • So let the all things ought to happen, all appear in a moment; • Then let everything that is destined (bound) to happen take place at this instant.
- 16. 翻譯實作評析 • let me bow my head to thank the help of all planets, let me meet with you, leave with you. • Let me bow down to thank all the planets for their help— let me meet you and then part from you. • Completed a poem created by the God, and then get old slowly; • We finish the poem written by God and then we age little by little. • Finishing the poem created by God and then aging gradually • let me meet with you, leave with you. • Let me meet you and then part from you.
- 17. 翻譯實作評析 • 〈廟會〉 李潼（賴西安）詞、陳揮雄曲 • 歡鑼喜鼓咚得隆咚鏘 鈸鐃穿雲霄 盤柱青龍探頭望 石獅笑張嘴 紅燭火檀香燒 菩薩滿身香 祈祝年冬收成好 遊子都平安 歡鑼喜鼓咚得隆咚鏘 鈸鐃穿雲霄 范謝將軍站兩旁 叱吒想當年 戰天神護鄉民 魂魄在人間 悲歡聚散總無常 知足心境寬 • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v =BGQ8rgpxgLo&feature=related
- 18. 翻譯實作評析 • Gongs and drums are so loudly , and the sound of cymbal is over the sky • People strike gongs and beat drums happily. • The loud gongs and drums show that people are joyous. • The clanging of cymbals penetrates the clouds. • There are pillars of dragon , and stone lion is laughing • Green dragons carved on the pillars raise their heads; stone lions on the two sides of the gate grin widely
- 19. 翻譯實作評析 • Red candles and sandalwood were burned , and the smell arounds Buddha • The Goddess of Mercy is surrounded by fragrance of the sandalwood. • Praying for the harvest this year , and people at outside were all safe • People pray for a bumper harvest in the end of the year and for the safety of wanderers.
- 20. 翻譯實作評析 • Black and White are stand at both side , thinking of years ago • Two Generals (General Hsieh and General Fan) stand on each side of Cheng Huang, the God of Cities, thinking of their glorious past • Fight with the gods and protect people , their spirits are in this world • When they fought against other deities to protect villagers. • All good things must come to an end , happiness consists in contentment • Life is unpredictable (changeable);
- 21. 翻譯實作評析 • 〈歌〉（徐志摩詞、羅大佑編曲） • 當我死去的時候 親愛 你別為我唱悲傷的歌 我墳上不必安插 薔薇 也無需濃蔭的柏樹 • 讓蓋著我的輕輕草 淋著雨也沾著露珠 假如你願意請記著我 要是你甘心忘了我
- 22. 翻譯實作評析 • 在悠久的墳墓中迷惘 陽光不昇起也不消翳 我也許也許我還記得你 我也許把你忘記 • 我再也見不到地面的青蔭 感覺不到雨露的甜蜜 我再也聽不到夜鶯的歌喉 在黑夜裡傾吐悲啼 • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ GKFzByiSbY&feature=related
- 23. 翻譯實作評析 • When I was died, my darling • After I am dead, my darling, • You don’t have to sing the sorrow song • for me • You don’t have to sing a sad song for me • Don’t have to put rose on my grave • You don’t have to plant roses on my grave • Don’t need a shade of cypress • And you don’t have to plant cypresses, either. • Nor plant cypresses.
- 24. 翻譯實作評析 • Let the grass covered me gently • Let the tender grass that covered me • Get wet in the rain and dipped in dew • Become dewy and misty • If you would like, please remember me • If you will, please remember me, • If you are willing, please forget me • If you will, please forget me.
- 25. 翻譯實作評析 • I get lost in this old tomb. • There is no sunshine but lingering shadows • Maybe I still remember you. • Maybe I have forgotten you.
- 26. 翻譯實作評析 • I will never see the shadow of the tree • Never feel the dewdrop of the love • I will never heard the twitter of the owl • I will never hear the nightingale • Whisper for the sorrow in the dark • singing her sorrow at night.
- 27. 翻譯實作評析 • SONG by: Christina Rossetti (1830-1894) • WHEN I am dead, my dearest, • Sing no sad songs for me; • Plant thou no roses at my head, • Nor shady cypress tree: • Be the green grass above me • With showers and dewdrops wet; • And if thou wilt, remember, • And if thou wilt, forget.
- 28. 翻譯實作評析 • I shall not see the shadows, • I shall not feel the rain; • I shall not hear the nightingale • Sing on, as if in pain; • And dreaming through the twilight • That doth not rise nor set, • Haply I may remember, • And haply may forget.
- 29. 翻譯實作評析 • 〈青夢湖〉蓉子詞、李泰祥曲 • 清晨的涼露何等瑩潔 四月是希望與濃蔭覆蓋下的湖水 • 我是未啟航的小船兒 靜臥在岸邊 • 微風輕奏著幸福的歡欣 這兒擁有光和美 • 且讓我靜悄悄的安睡 享受這最後的寧謐 • 青色的夢圍繞著沉沉的湖水 啦啦啦啦啦 啦啦啦啦啦啦 啦啦啦啦啦 • 那甜美的情緒在緩緩的變化 我流動的思想就是這樣慢慢 的變成了詩 • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2CV2lmwQC0
- 30. 翻譯實作評析 • Cyan Lake (Lake of Green Dreams) • The dew of morning is such crystal clear • so crystal clear • April is the lake which is covered by hope and dense shade • I am the gondola which is ready to go • Lying down by the shore peacefully
- 31. 翻譯實作評析 • The breeze perform the joy of the welfare lightly • The breeze softly plays the song of happiness. • Here, we have light and beauty • Let me fall asleep quietly • Enjoy the last tranquil • Enjoy the last tranquility
- 32. 翻譯實作評析 • The deep lake is surrounded by cyan (green) dream (dreams) • La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La • That sweetness feeling varies slowly • That sweet feeling changes slowly. • The mellow mood is changing little by little. • My moving thoughts thus turn into poems.