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1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles?

This 2 corner paper is written about the car navigation.
The 1st paper(http://www.ehow.co.uk/how-
does_5217256_do-car-navigation-systems- work_.html) is
written about the mechanism of the car navigation.
The car navigation gets a positional-information using the 4
corner GPS satellite. The GPS satellite always
synchronizes with the other GPS satellite using the atomic
clock. As for the 2nd
paper(http://www.ehow.co.uk/how_6847_map-based-
gps.html), how to use of the car navigation is written. Two
are written in this paper. The 1st is how to use of the car
navigation to the known destination when going. The 2nd
is how to use of the car navigation to the destination not to
know when going.
2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the
document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.

The section and the index of the 2 corner paper agree with the
contents of question 1. There is a 4 corner section in the 1st
paper.
In Car Navigation Basics's section, the basics of the car
navigation to use a GPS, and so on, are written. By GPS
Satellites's section. It is written about the mechanism in the
GPS satellite. It is written when the position of the car can be
specified from the position of the GPS satellite in Calculating
Location's section. There is a 2 corner section in the 2nd
paper which can depend when the car navigation can decide a
route to the destination in Planning a Trip's section. In Select a
Known Destination's section, the way of the use of the car
navigation when going to the known destination went step by
step and it was explained. Select Route by Point of Interest's
section. It is. The way of searching a destination was
described.
3. What details are included in the articles?

In the 2nd paper, the section of Select a Known Destination
separated into 9 steps and each was minutely written. For
example, it is step1: step2 which reads an instruction: It puts
the engine of the car. step3: step4 which puts the power of
the car navigation: It enters using the remote control lock
system. step5: You push a menu button and it is step6: You
enter a destination using the remote control lock system and
it is step7: You decide a route using the remote control lock
system and it is step8: You do to the sound instruction and it
is step9: When meeting a route, it was minutely written .
4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?

It was difficult to find that it was written in Calculating
Location's.
it is because the explanation was technical. I didn't know all
of the car navigation system. Therefore, it didn't understand
a measurement method in the position well. I think, When
you understand to be written by the paper,you need a little
knowledge . It thinks that I should explain using the figure.
Because it is more comprehensible than that explains only
by the sentence. I think that I should write plainly because it
is an explained sentence
5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

I think, 2 corner paper above is divided every
section and saying easy to understand.
Specifically, the 2nd paper was easy to
understand.
The 2 corner paper was the paper which does the
explanation of the car navigation to the other
person. The paper where the other person is
explained must give an easy-to-understand
description to the other person. For example, the
2nd paper was written every step and was easy to
understand. Therefore, the form of the 2 corner
paper was good.
6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?

I think that there is not a mistake in the 2 corner
paper above.
It is because contents as the section were written.
For example, in the section of Car Navigation
Basics, the car navigation system is neatly written
when it uses a GPS satellite. This was as it if
examining in wikipedia. Also, it examined about the
GPS satellite, too.
The thing that this, too, is the same as the paper
was written.
I think that there is not a mistake in this paper from
above thing.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles
can you make?

I think that there is not a mistake especially about
the 2 corner paper above. However, I thinks that it
should correct there because the part which it is difficult
to understand a little met me.
I think specifically when explained, it should use a figure.
Because if figure is put, it becomes comprehensible.
Specifically it was difficult to find that it was written in
Calculating Location's. Therefore, I think that it become
more comprehensible because figure is put in the thesis .
8. Identify three basic differences between how your
group would author a similar document and how this
author authored it (as you see it in the link).

As for the paper above, there was not a problem
in the sentences specifically. However, there was a part
which it is difficult to understand. Specifically it was
difficult to find that it was written in
Calculating Location's. Therefore, I want to put figure in
this thesis.
Specifically, it puts the figure which joined a 4 corner
GPS satellite
and a car by the line and the figure which linked a 4
corner GPS
satellite each other by the line.
9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize
10 major points that you were able to understand.

There is following point in the video above.
The first, we can schmeer cellphone used by GPS feature.
The second, the GPS function attached to carrying is
used.
The third, it is possible to schmeer in the cell phone using
the service of the provider.
The fourth., it is possible to schmeer using the software.
The fifth, it is convenient when losing a cell phone.
The sixth, it is convenient in the cell phone when stolen.
The seventh, the present location can be known.
The ninth, it is possible to schmeer while the power plugs.
The tenth, it is necessary to continue to update always.
There are above ten points.
10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize
10 major points that you were able to understand.

There is following point in the video above.
The first, It uses the software of iphone.
The second, the map can be seen in iphone.
The third, the destination can be specified by touching in the
screen.
The fourth, The destination can be specified by the sound.
The fifth, The destination can be specified using the button.
The sixth, 1/4 miles around can be displayed.
The seventh, The information around can be seen in
expanding.
The eighth, A few errors have occurred.
The ninth, to touch in the screen, it is possible to do a map in
the zoom lens.
The tenth, The neighborhood of the destination can be
expanded.
There are above ten points.

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Review 5

  • 1. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? This 2 corner paper is written about the car navigation. The 1st paper(http://www.ehow.co.uk/how- does_5217256_do-car-navigation-systems- work_.html) is written about the mechanism of the car navigation. The car navigation gets a positional-information using the 4 corner GPS satellite. The GPS satellite always synchronizes with the other GPS satellite using the atomic clock. As for the 2nd paper(http://www.ehow.co.uk/how_6847_map-based- gps.html), how to use of the car navigation is written. Two are written in this paper. The 1st is how to use of the car navigation to the known destination when going. The 2nd is how to use of the car navigation to the destination not to know when going.
  • 2. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. The section and the index of the 2 corner paper agree with the contents of question 1. There is a 4 corner section in the 1st paper. In Car Navigation Basics's section, the basics of the car navigation to use a GPS, and so on, are written. By GPS Satellites's section. It is written about the mechanism in the GPS satellite. It is written when the position of the car can be specified from the position of the GPS satellite in Calculating Location's section. There is a 2 corner section in the 2nd paper which can depend when the car navigation can decide a route to the destination in Planning a Trip's section. In Select a Known Destination's section, the way of the use of the car navigation when going to the known destination went step by step and it was explained. Select Route by Point of Interest's section. It is. The way of searching a destination was described.
  • 3. 3. What details are included in the articles? In the 2nd paper, the section of Select a Known Destination separated into 9 steps and each was minutely written. For example, it is step1: step2 which reads an instruction: It puts the engine of the car. step3: step4 which puts the power of the car navigation: It enters using the remote control lock system. step5: You push a menu button and it is step6: You enter a destination using the remote control lock system and it is step7: You decide a route using the remote control lock system and it is step8: You do to the sound instruction and it is step9: When meeting a route, it was minutely written .
  • 4. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? It was difficult to find that it was written in Calculating Location's. it is because the explanation was technical. I didn't know all of the car navigation system. Therefore, it didn't understand a measurement method in the position well. I think, When you understand to be written by the paper,you need a little knowledge . It thinks that I should explain using the figure. Because it is more comprehensible than that explains only by the sentence. I think that I should write plainly because it is an explained sentence
  • 5. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? I think, 2 corner paper above is divided every section and saying easy to understand. Specifically, the 2nd paper was easy to understand. The 2 corner paper was the paper which does the explanation of the car navigation to the other person. The paper where the other person is explained must give an easy-to-understand description to the other person. For example, the 2nd paper was written every step and was easy to understand. Therefore, the form of the 2 corner paper was good.
  • 6. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? I think that there is not a mistake in the 2 corner paper above. It is because contents as the section were written. For example, in the section of Car Navigation Basics, the car navigation system is neatly written when it uses a GPS satellite. This was as it if examining in wikipedia. Also, it examined about the GPS satellite, too. The thing that this, too, is the same as the paper was written. I think that there is not a mistake in this paper from above thing.
  • 7. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? I think that there is not a mistake especially about the 2 corner paper above. However, I thinks that it should correct there because the part which it is difficult to understand a little met me. I think specifically when explained, it should use a figure. Because if figure is put, it becomes comprehensible. Specifically it was difficult to find that it was written in Calculating Location's. Therefore, I think that it become more comprehensible because figure is put in the thesis .
  • 8. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). As for the paper above, there was not a problem in the sentences specifically. However, there was a part which it is difficult to understand. Specifically it was difficult to find that it was written in Calculating Location's. Therefore, I want to put figure in this thesis. Specifically, it puts the figure which joined a 4 corner GPS satellite and a car by the line and the figure which linked a 4 corner GPS satellite each other by the line.
  • 9. 9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. There is following point in the video above. The first, we can schmeer cellphone used by GPS feature. The second, the GPS function attached to carrying is used. The third, it is possible to schmeer in the cell phone using the service of the provider. The fourth., it is possible to schmeer using the software. The fifth, it is convenient when losing a cell phone. The sixth, it is convenient in the cell phone when stolen. The seventh, the present location can be known. The ninth, it is possible to schmeer while the power plugs. The tenth, it is necessary to continue to update always. There are above ten points.
  • 10. 10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. There is following point in the video above. The first, It uses the software of iphone. The second, the map can be seen in iphone. The third, the destination can be specified by touching in the screen. The fourth, The destination can be specified by the sound. The fifth, The destination can be specified using the button. The sixth, 1/4 miles around can be displayed. The seventh, The information around can be seen in expanding. The eighth, A few errors have occurred. The ninth, to touch in the screen, it is possible to do a map in the zoom lens. The tenth, The neighborhood of the destination can be expanded. There are above ten points.