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Analysis and Teaching of Reading Text
EDSE4046 Language, Literacy, Diversity
Paige Zavaglia
430098657
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Introduction to Text
Text: ‘The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe’, art/adaptation by Yien Yip.
Topic: Introduction to Gothic Literature
Target: Stage 5 – Year 9
Yip, Y. (2012). “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe. In R. Kick (Ed.), The Graphic Canon, Vol. 2: From
“Kubla Khan” to the Bronte Sisters to The Picture of Dorian Gray. New York: Seven Stories Press.
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Analysis of Text
As a cornerstone of the American Gothic, Edgar Allan Poe’s classic poem The Raven (1845)
has been continually read, anthologised, performed, filmed, illustrated, and of course, parodied
(Charles, 2014). Undoubtedly, this obsession with the work stems from its brilliance; as a rich text that
is filled with subtleties and allusions, The Raven offers scholars a window through which to engage
with the complexities of the literary genre. However, for students encountering the Gothic for the first
time, Poe’s obscure language and dense symbolism can seem alienating. It is for this reason that this
essay has chosen to analyse a more accessible appropriation of the text – one which offers students a
familiar gateway through which to engage with both the peculiarities of the genre and its literary heroes.
Structure of Text
Yien Yip’s interpretation of Edgar Allan Poe’s The Raven is a richly aesthetic, multimodal text suitable
for students engaging with the Gothic for the first time. As Yang explains, this suitability relates to the
“readability” of the text type; since graphic novels promote multiple modes of expression or
“dual pathways”, they facilitate various entry points for struggling learners to participate as literary
members (Hughes & Morrison, 2014, p. 117). Indeed, graphic novels like Yip’s The Raven have been
used widely in schools to “engage struggling readers and induct them into the language of the
classroom” (Yang, 2008, p. 186). This particular excerpt of Yip’s novel is thus highly useful when read
by students as a stand-alone text before they engage with the entirety of Poe’s poem. Evidently, when
used in this manner, the text becomes a bridge between the familiar and abstruse for EAL/D learners –
that is, between the largely accessible medium of the graphic comic and the often misunderstood
ambiguity of the English poetic language.
Cultural Background Knowledge
While indeed a highly relevant text for this topic, there are significant challenges that arise for EAL/D
and low literacy students, perhaps most significant of which is the complex symbolism of the raven that
stems from Poe’s work. Archaically understood to be a harbinger of death, in the text, the scavenger
bird hurls its body towards the troubled man, only to arrive “rapping, rapping at (his) chamber door.”
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In this single image, EAL/D learners face significant difficulty in attempting to comprehend
the cultural significance of the raven as a foreboding messenger of some terrifying revelation to come.
Yet, before this allusion can even be understood, students must grapple with the use of the verb
“rapping” in relation to a raven. From a cultural viewpoint, Poe uses this word strategically to allude to
the unnatural nature of the bird, while also establishing the forebodingly ominous ‘tapping’ beat.
Evidently, even within this one stanza, students are required to have a deep understanding of the very
“quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore” that frames the text. While teachers would undoubtedly
explain this to students, without a footing in the culture, these allusions are difficult to comprehend.
Language and Vocabulary
The language of this text is undoubtedly complex, and as such, can be difficult for EAL/D or low
literacy learners to decode. The positive feature in this regard is the text’s brevity, which allows teachers
to slowly progress through the text and make explicit key words and techniques. The primary technique
at play is that of rhyming, which is paramount in the text’s construction of deathly tones and foreboding
beats. However, due to a lack in phonological awareness which often develops ‘naturally’ from
experience with childhood rhymes, EAL/D learners can find the pairings of “dreary / weary” and
“napping / rapping” to be confusing, especially since they are often nominalised – for example, ‘there
came a tapping’ (Courcy et al., 2012, p. 4).
In addition, the Western way of making meaning from poetry (that is, deconstruction followed by deep
analysis) is not a “naturally acquired skill” but a “learned behaviour”, and as such, EAL/D learners may
find the rhymes to be initially insignificant in the overall meaning of the poem (Heath, 1982, p. 49).
The second issue in the text is that of archaic language, which is used to both symbolise the timeless
and inevitable nature of death, while also alluding to the irony of its seemingly quick arrival. For EAL/D
learners, before this deeper understanding can even be reached, students will struggle with its
vocabulary; such words as ‘dreary’, ‘quaint’, ‘lore’, ‘’tis’ and ‘chamber’ must all be explained prior to
analysis.
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Visual Literacy
This text is fairly straightforward in its visual representation of the stanza, and indeed, is highly useful
in aiding students in comprehending Poe’s archaic language. For example, the ‘midnight dreary’ is
visually embodied in the stark darkness of the sky coupled with the ominous and overpowering moon.
This visual is strengthened by the colourless and seemingly-textured artistry of the walls and floors.
However, unsurprisingly, the text also takes poetic license with its portrayal of the billowing curtains
juxtaposed against the closed windows – representing the supernatural power underscoring the poem.
In order to understand this dichotomy of logic and fancy, however, students must be familiar with the
language of interpretation in poetic representations. For many EAL/D students, the irony of the closed
window – which fails to keep the supernatural at bay – will be lost without explicit and scaffolded
instruction.
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Teaching Strategies
In light of this analysis, it is evident that EAL/D and low-literacy learners need targeted, systematic,
and explicit instruction that is based on and informed by their language needs and prior learning
(Sim, 2006). Given an inclusive and supportive classroom, appropriate learning experiences and
assessment practices, and the high expectations of their teachers, these students can achieve at a similar
level to their English-speaking peers. In light of this, this paper will now turn to a description and
justification of the differentiated activities one might use in teaching this text in the classroom.
Pre-reading activity
The intention of this structured and scaffolded pre-reading activity is to introduce the idea of animalistic
symbolism to the class and then link this technique to its main premise in Yip’s The Raven. This activity
is thus focused on activating and building the appropriate schema necessary for understanding the
cultural allusions of the text.
A. Animal Match-Up
In this activity, students work in small groups (3-4 people) to compete against each other in a
Kahoot Quiz (see Appendix 1). The Quiz consists of 10 questions, with each question focused on
a different animal; the students are asked to match the animal with the word it is often associated
with (from a choice of four). In doing so, students unwittingly identify the animals’ symbolic
meaning and so connect this to their schematic knowledge of how symbolism as a technique
functions. In doing this through a creative and competitive activity, students are more likely to
engage with the questioning. The final animal in the quiz is, of course, the raven. Once completed,
the teacher awards the winning group with a small prize and begins to explain to the class the
notion that animals can often symbolise certain emotions or attributes. The teacher references
examples from the quiz to explain this notion. The teacher might also make links to their students’
prior knowledge, for example: if the teacher is aware the students have read or seen Narnia, they
may explain how Aslan as a lion symbolises bravery.
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Finally, the teacher links this new knowledge to The Raven, explaining that in ancient myths, the
bird was thought to be a messenger or symbol of death. The teacher can explain this by discussing
the internal colour symbolism (black feathers representing darkness) and characteristics (birds are
often used as messengers / ravens are scavenger birds). The task concludes with students drawing
the outline of a raven in their books and mind-mapping around this picture the attributes of a raven
that add to its symbolism.
Justification of Activity:
Many teachers of struggling learners avoid teaching analytically “because they feel the skills
required are too sophisticated for their students” and they would rather teach “a skills and drills
curriculum” (Olson et al., 2011). Undoubtedly, this mentality is not only unjust, but also untrue.
All students are capable of and entitled to an engagement with higher order thinking skills, if only
the pathways to such skills are properly decoded and scaffolded. In light of this, this activity has
been designed to be a creative, engaging, and accessible entry-point into Yip’s The Raven for
EAL/D and low-literacy learners.
Comprehension Activities
Having been introduced to the literary technique of animalistic symbolism and having identified various
examples of this technique, students are now equipped with the necessary schematic understanding of
symbolism to proceed with Yip’s text. Through these next two activities, students reinforce this
knowledge through a thorough decoding of the text and practice reading aloud to strengthen their
phonemic awareness. These activities thus seek to support students as they first read the text and later
respond to it.
B. Glossary-Assisted Choral Reading
After being first introduced to Yip’s The Raven by their teacher, students engage in a choral
reading activity, assisted by a glossary, to aid their comprehension of the text and strengthen
their speaking literacies. Students first receive a worksheet for the activity which contains both
the first stanza of the poem and a semi-empty glossary table (see Appendix 2). While many
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arrangements for choral reading are possible, this activity utilises echo reading, where the
teacher reads a line of the poem and the students, in unison, repeat it. After each line, the teacher
pauses to work on words that the students may now know. Each word is discussed, its meaning
hypothesised, similar words identified, and a collaborative definition is drafted. The line is then
read again, and repeated by the class, to symbolise acceptance of that line. At the end of the
stanza, students pause to reflect on and identify any words, phrases, or ideas that they are still
unsure of. This activity is concluded with a comprehensive class discussion that is focused on
students comparing their thoughts and reactions to the poem.
Justification of Activity:
As Courcy et al. identified, class-generated glossaries help “support the active learning of
vocabulary, and hence, improved reading comprehension” as they are compiled from a range
of student understandings (2012, p. 6). Such a technique, undoubtedly promotes linguistic
responsiveness in light of the needs of struggling language learners, as by explicitly decoding
words, students feel more capable in proceeding with higher order skills. When coupled with
choral reading, which promotes valuable oral reading practice, EAL/D learners can hear and
practice their English pronunciation of words, phrasing of words in a sentence, and intonation
patterns (Tompkins et al., 2014, p. 398).
C. ‘Rewriting The Raven’ through Pair Construction
In this activity, students begin to connect their preliminary understandings of the linguistics of
the text to Yip’s visual representation, so as to deepen their comprehension of the poem and lay
a strong foundation for future analysis of the genre. This activity begins by students grouping
themselves into pairs. In their pair, they each receive a worksheet which is heavily scaffolded
to aid in deconstructing Yip’s multimodal text (see Appendix 3). To begin the activity, the
teacher encourages students to revisit the worksheet from the previous activity, and utilise it to
uncover how Yip has used colour, symbolism, characterisation, and texture to embody the
poem. The pairs are aided by the italicised questions in identifying such complexities as irony
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and symbolism. Throughout the activity, the teacher walks around the classroom to assist
students where necessary; particularly those who are struggling to draw connections between
the stanza and the text’s other modalities. Once the brainstorm is completed, the students work
together to write their own short paragraph (5-6 sentences) that is inspired by the text and what
they have uncovered. In this piece of work, the students must write from the viewpoint of the
raven. Once the pairs have finished their short recreations, they join with another pair to
compare, contrast, and finally, combine their paragraphs. Upon completion of this, each group
exhibits their work to the class by collectively reading their paragraph aloud. In doing so, they
engage not only with the literacies of reading and writing, but also that of speaking, viewing,
and representing.
Justification of Activity:
This activity is heavily focused on the paired scaffolded deconstruction of a multimodal text,
followed by a tiered collaborative writing exercise. Evidently, collaborative learning is central
to this activity, and has been purposed structured as such so as to encourage peer learning
between diverse students; such a pedagogy has been proven to be extremely helpful for EAL/D
and low-literacy learners (Courcy, 2012). In addition, by first deconstructing then recreating a
text, students solidify their understanding of how that text conforms and challenges the genre.
In sharing their collaboratively-constructed text aloud, students again reinforce their speaking
literacies (Tompkins et al., 2014, p. 398).
In conclusion, these activities have been designed in such a way as to promote progressive and
scaffolded learning within a validating and collaborative learning environment. The activities build
upon one another and seek to encourage students to successfully develop the schematic and linguistic
knowledges that are necessary for success in this unit.
2033 words.
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References
Charles, R. (2014). Why we quoth ‘The Raven’ evermore: Edgar Allan Poe’s creepy poem has been
flying high for almost 170 years. Washington: The Washington Post.
Courcy, M., Dooley, K., Jackson, R., Miller, J. & Rushton, K. (2012). Teaching EAL/D learners in
Australian classrooms. Primary English Teaching Association Australia Paper 183. Sydney:
PETAA.
Heath, S. B. (1982). What no bedtime story means: Narrative skills at home and school. Language in
Society, 11(1), 49 – 76.
Hughes, J., & Morrison, L. (2014). The evolution of teaching with graphic novels. Jeunesse: Young
People, Texts, Cultures, 6(2), 116 – 124.
Olson, C.B., Land, R., Anselmi, T & AuBuchon, C. (2011). Teaching secondary English learners to
understand, analyse, and write interpretive essays about theme. Journal of Adolescent and
Adult Literacy, 54(4), 245 – 256.
Sim, A. (2006). An investigation of the literacy demands and support given to a Year 8 class. Australian
Journal of Language and Literacy, 29(3), 240 – 251.
Tompkins, G., Campbell, R., Green, D. & Smith, C. (2014). Literacy in the 21st
Century: A balanced
approach. Sydney: Pearson Education.
Yang, G. (2008). Graphic novels in the classroom. Language Arts, 85(3), 185 – 192.
Yip, Y. (2012). “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe. In R. Kick (Ed.), The Graphic Canon, Vol. 2: From
“Kubla Khan” to the Bronte Sisters to The Picture of Dorian Gray. New York: Seven Stories
Press.
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Kahoot Quiz
Kahoot is an online, interactive game site where teachers are able to create their own visually
dynamic ‘quick quizzes’. The site is extremely easy and efficient to use. In the classroom,
students open the site using a direct link, enter a game code and nickname. They are able to
choose answers using the four shapes and the quiz updates the point score after each question.
If you would like to see the quiz in action, please visit: https://play.kahoot.it/#/k/3f25d12b-2b97-
4041-b71b-e3e1c5106d08. You will need to open a player’s version of the Kahoot (at kahoot.it), enter
the game pin, and join the game in order to start playing. If you are unable to access the site, there
are detailed screenshots below:
APPENDIX 1
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‘The Raven’
Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of someone gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
‘’Tis some visitor,’ I muttered, ‘tapping at my chamber door -
Only this, and nothing more.’
Word Meaning Similar Words?
dreary
pondered
quaint
volume
lore
nodded
rapping
chamber
‘tis
APPENDIX 2
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Compare the Pair!
Using your deconstruction of the stanza from the previous lesson, identify FIVE ways in which
Yien Yip has embodied the poem in his image.
QUESTIONS?
APPENDIX 3
COLOUR
How does the
colour scheme
reflect the stanza?
TEXTURE
What does this
signify?
SYMBOLISM
What does the
Raven symbolize?
Why is the
window closed
and yet the
curtains billowed?
CHARTERISATION
What is the man thinking? Why?
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From the Raven’s Point of View:
Using your poem deconstruction AND brainstorm, in pairs, write an interpretation of the
opening of the poem. Your interpretation should be original - not a copy of the stanza – and
should be five to six sentences long! Take it slow and make the sentences as descriptive and
vivid as you can. In order to make it original, please write from the Raven’s point of view.
In order to do so, you can:
 Use personal pronouns (e.g. I, My, Mine)
 Use narrative form (e.g. adjectives, five senses)
 Write through the eyes of the Raven (e.g. what can the Raven see? Hear?)
PRE-WRITING THOUGHTS:
IN PAIRS:
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___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
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___________________________________________________________________________
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IN SMALL GROUPS:
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Stage 5 - Literacy Analysis of Poe's 'The Raven'

  • 1. 1 Analysis and Teaching of Reading Text EDSE4046 Language, Literacy, Diversity Paige Zavaglia 430098657
  • 2. 2 Introduction to Text Text: ‘The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe’, art/adaptation by Yien Yip. Topic: Introduction to Gothic Literature Target: Stage 5 – Year 9 Yip, Y. (2012). “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe. In R. Kick (Ed.), The Graphic Canon, Vol. 2: From “Kubla Khan” to the Bronte Sisters to The Picture of Dorian Gray. New York: Seven Stories Press.
  • 3. 3 Analysis of Text As a cornerstone of the American Gothic, Edgar Allan Poe’s classic poem The Raven (1845) has been continually read, anthologised, performed, filmed, illustrated, and of course, parodied (Charles, 2014). Undoubtedly, this obsession with the work stems from its brilliance; as a rich text that is filled with subtleties and allusions, The Raven offers scholars a window through which to engage with the complexities of the literary genre. However, for students encountering the Gothic for the first time, Poe’s obscure language and dense symbolism can seem alienating. It is for this reason that this essay has chosen to analyse a more accessible appropriation of the text – one which offers students a familiar gateway through which to engage with both the peculiarities of the genre and its literary heroes. Structure of Text Yien Yip’s interpretation of Edgar Allan Poe’s The Raven is a richly aesthetic, multimodal text suitable for students engaging with the Gothic for the first time. As Yang explains, this suitability relates to the “readability” of the text type; since graphic novels promote multiple modes of expression or “dual pathways”, they facilitate various entry points for struggling learners to participate as literary members (Hughes & Morrison, 2014, p. 117). Indeed, graphic novels like Yip’s The Raven have been used widely in schools to “engage struggling readers and induct them into the language of the classroom” (Yang, 2008, p. 186). This particular excerpt of Yip’s novel is thus highly useful when read by students as a stand-alone text before they engage with the entirety of Poe’s poem. Evidently, when used in this manner, the text becomes a bridge between the familiar and abstruse for EAL/D learners – that is, between the largely accessible medium of the graphic comic and the often misunderstood ambiguity of the English poetic language. Cultural Background Knowledge While indeed a highly relevant text for this topic, there are significant challenges that arise for EAL/D and low literacy students, perhaps most significant of which is the complex symbolism of the raven that stems from Poe’s work. Archaically understood to be a harbinger of death, in the text, the scavenger bird hurls its body towards the troubled man, only to arrive “rapping, rapping at (his) chamber door.”
  • 4. 4 In this single image, EAL/D learners face significant difficulty in attempting to comprehend the cultural significance of the raven as a foreboding messenger of some terrifying revelation to come. Yet, before this allusion can even be understood, students must grapple with the use of the verb “rapping” in relation to a raven. From a cultural viewpoint, Poe uses this word strategically to allude to the unnatural nature of the bird, while also establishing the forebodingly ominous ‘tapping’ beat. Evidently, even within this one stanza, students are required to have a deep understanding of the very “quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore” that frames the text. While teachers would undoubtedly explain this to students, without a footing in the culture, these allusions are difficult to comprehend. Language and Vocabulary The language of this text is undoubtedly complex, and as such, can be difficult for EAL/D or low literacy learners to decode. The positive feature in this regard is the text’s brevity, which allows teachers to slowly progress through the text and make explicit key words and techniques. The primary technique at play is that of rhyming, which is paramount in the text’s construction of deathly tones and foreboding beats. However, due to a lack in phonological awareness which often develops ‘naturally’ from experience with childhood rhymes, EAL/D learners can find the pairings of “dreary / weary” and “napping / rapping” to be confusing, especially since they are often nominalised – for example, ‘there came a tapping’ (Courcy et al., 2012, p. 4). In addition, the Western way of making meaning from poetry (that is, deconstruction followed by deep analysis) is not a “naturally acquired skill” but a “learned behaviour”, and as such, EAL/D learners may find the rhymes to be initially insignificant in the overall meaning of the poem (Heath, 1982, p. 49). The second issue in the text is that of archaic language, which is used to both symbolise the timeless and inevitable nature of death, while also alluding to the irony of its seemingly quick arrival. For EAL/D learners, before this deeper understanding can even be reached, students will struggle with its vocabulary; such words as ‘dreary’, ‘quaint’, ‘lore’, ‘’tis’ and ‘chamber’ must all be explained prior to analysis.
  • 5. 5 Visual Literacy This text is fairly straightforward in its visual representation of the stanza, and indeed, is highly useful in aiding students in comprehending Poe’s archaic language. For example, the ‘midnight dreary’ is visually embodied in the stark darkness of the sky coupled with the ominous and overpowering moon. This visual is strengthened by the colourless and seemingly-textured artistry of the walls and floors. However, unsurprisingly, the text also takes poetic license with its portrayal of the billowing curtains juxtaposed against the closed windows – representing the supernatural power underscoring the poem. In order to understand this dichotomy of logic and fancy, however, students must be familiar with the language of interpretation in poetic representations. For many EAL/D students, the irony of the closed window – which fails to keep the supernatural at bay – will be lost without explicit and scaffolded instruction.
  • 6. 6 Teaching Strategies In light of this analysis, it is evident that EAL/D and low-literacy learners need targeted, systematic, and explicit instruction that is based on and informed by their language needs and prior learning (Sim, 2006). Given an inclusive and supportive classroom, appropriate learning experiences and assessment practices, and the high expectations of their teachers, these students can achieve at a similar level to their English-speaking peers. In light of this, this paper will now turn to a description and justification of the differentiated activities one might use in teaching this text in the classroom. Pre-reading activity The intention of this structured and scaffolded pre-reading activity is to introduce the idea of animalistic symbolism to the class and then link this technique to its main premise in Yip’s The Raven. This activity is thus focused on activating and building the appropriate schema necessary for understanding the cultural allusions of the text. A. Animal Match-Up In this activity, students work in small groups (3-4 people) to compete against each other in a Kahoot Quiz (see Appendix 1). The Quiz consists of 10 questions, with each question focused on a different animal; the students are asked to match the animal with the word it is often associated with (from a choice of four). In doing so, students unwittingly identify the animals’ symbolic meaning and so connect this to their schematic knowledge of how symbolism as a technique functions. In doing this through a creative and competitive activity, students are more likely to engage with the questioning. The final animal in the quiz is, of course, the raven. Once completed, the teacher awards the winning group with a small prize and begins to explain to the class the notion that animals can often symbolise certain emotions or attributes. The teacher references examples from the quiz to explain this notion. The teacher might also make links to their students’ prior knowledge, for example: if the teacher is aware the students have read or seen Narnia, they may explain how Aslan as a lion symbolises bravery.
  • 7. 7 Finally, the teacher links this new knowledge to The Raven, explaining that in ancient myths, the bird was thought to be a messenger or symbol of death. The teacher can explain this by discussing the internal colour symbolism (black feathers representing darkness) and characteristics (birds are often used as messengers / ravens are scavenger birds). The task concludes with students drawing the outline of a raven in their books and mind-mapping around this picture the attributes of a raven that add to its symbolism. Justification of Activity: Many teachers of struggling learners avoid teaching analytically “because they feel the skills required are too sophisticated for their students” and they would rather teach “a skills and drills curriculum” (Olson et al., 2011). Undoubtedly, this mentality is not only unjust, but also untrue. All students are capable of and entitled to an engagement with higher order thinking skills, if only the pathways to such skills are properly decoded and scaffolded. In light of this, this activity has been designed to be a creative, engaging, and accessible entry-point into Yip’s The Raven for EAL/D and low-literacy learners. Comprehension Activities Having been introduced to the literary technique of animalistic symbolism and having identified various examples of this technique, students are now equipped with the necessary schematic understanding of symbolism to proceed with Yip’s text. Through these next two activities, students reinforce this knowledge through a thorough decoding of the text and practice reading aloud to strengthen their phonemic awareness. These activities thus seek to support students as they first read the text and later respond to it. B. Glossary-Assisted Choral Reading After being first introduced to Yip’s The Raven by their teacher, students engage in a choral reading activity, assisted by a glossary, to aid their comprehension of the text and strengthen their speaking literacies. Students first receive a worksheet for the activity which contains both the first stanza of the poem and a semi-empty glossary table (see Appendix 2). While many
  • 8. 8 arrangements for choral reading are possible, this activity utilises echo reading, where the teacher reads a line of the poem and the students, in unison, repeat it. After each line, the teacher pauses to work on words that the students may now know. Each word is discussed, its meaning hypothesised, similar words identified, and a collaborative definition is drafted. The line is then read again, and repeated by the class, to symbolise acceptance of that line. At the end of the stanza, students pause to reflect on and identify any words, phrases, or ideas that they are still unsure of. This activity is concluded with a comprehensive class discussion that is focused on students comparing their thoughts and reactions to the poem. Justification of Activity: As Courcy et al. identified, class-generated glossaries help “support the active learning of vocabulary, and hence, improved reading comprehension” as they are compiled from a range of student understandings (2012, p. 6). Such a technique, undoubtedly promotes linguistic responsiveness in light of the needs of struggling language learners, as by explicitly decoding words, students feel more capable in proceeding with higher order skills. When coupled with choral reading, which promotes valuable oral reading practice, EAL/D learners can hear and practice their English pronunciation of words, phrasing of words in a sentence, and intonation patterns (Tompkins et al., 2014, p. 398). C. ‘Rewriting The Raven’ through Pair Construction In this activity, students begin to connect their preliminary understandings of the linguistics of the text to Yip’s visual representation, so as to deepen their comprehension of the poem and lay a strong foundation for future analysis of the genre. This activity begins by students grouping themselves into pairs. In their pair, they each receive a worksheet which is heavily scaffolded to aid in deconstructing Yip’s multimodal text (see Appendix 3). To begin the activity, the teacher encourages students to revisit the worksheet from the previous activity, and utilise it to uncover how Yip has used colour, symbolism, characterisation, and texture to embody the poem. The pairs are aided by the italicised questions in identifying such complexities as irony
  • 9. 9 and symbolism. Throughout the activity, the teacher walks around the classroom to assist students where necessary; particularly those who are struggling to draw connections between the stanza and the text’s other modalities. Once the brainstorm is completed, the students work together to write their own short paragraph (5-6 sentences) that is inspired by the text and what they have uncovered. In this piece of work, the students must write from the viewpoint of the raven. Once the pairs have finished their short recreations, they join with another pair to compare, contrast, and finally, combine their paragraphs. Upon completion of this, each group exhibits their work to the class by collectively reading their paragraph aloud. In doing so, they engage not only with the literacies of reading and writing, but also that of speaking, viewing, and representing. Justification of Activity: This activity is heavily focused on the paired scaffolded deconstruction of a multimodal text, followed by a tiered collaborative writing exercise. Evidently, collaborative learning is central to this activity, and has been purposed structured as such so as to encourage peer learning between diverse students; such a pedagogy has been proven to be extremely helpful for EAL/D and low-literacy learners (Courcy, 2012). In addition, by first deconstructing then recreating a text, students solidify their understanding of how that text conforms and challenges the genre. In sharing their collaboratively-constructed text aloud, students again reinforce their speaking literacies (Tompkins et al., 2014, p. 398). In conclusion, these activities have been designed in such a way as to promote progressive and scaffolded learning within a validating and collaborative learning environment. The activities build upon one another and seek to encourage students to successfully develop the schematic and linguistic knowledges that are necessary for success in this unit. 2033 words.
  • 10. 10 References Charles, R. (2014). Why we quoth ‘The Raven’ evermore: Edgar Allan Poe’s creepy poem has been flying high for almost 170 years. Washington: The Washington Post. Courcy, M., Dooley, K., Jackson, R., Miller, J. & Rushton, K. (2012). Teaching EAL/D learners in Australian classrooms. Primary English Teaching Association Australia Paper 183. Sydney: PETAA. Heath, S. B. (1982). What no bedtime story means: Narrative skills at home and school. Language in Society, 11(1), 49 – 76. Hughes, J., & Morrison, L. (2014). The evolution of teaching with graphic novels. Jeunesse: Young People, Texts, Cultures, 6(2), 116 – 124. Olson, C.B., Land, R., Anselmi, T & AuBuchon, C. (2011). Teaching secondary English learners to understand, analyse, and write interpretive essays about theme. Journal of Adolescent and Adult Literacy, 54(4), 245 – 256. Sim, A. (2006). An investigation of the literacy demands and support given to a Year 8 class. Australian Journal of Language and Literacy, 29(3), 240 – 251. Tompkins, G., Campbell, R., Green, D. & Smith, C. (2014). Literacy in the 21st Century: A balanced approach. Sydney: Pearson Education. Yang, G. (2008). Graphic novels in the classroom. Language Arts, 85(3), 185 – 192. Yip, Y. (2012). “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe. In R. Kick (Ed.), The Graphic Canon, Vol. 2: From “Kubla Khan” to the Bronte Sisters to The Picture of Dorian Gray. New York: Seven Stories Press.
  • 11. 11 Kahoot Quiz Kahoot is an online, interactive game site where teachers are able to create their own visually dynamic ‘quick quizzes’. The site is extremely easy and efficient to use. In the classroom, students open the site using a direct link, enter a game code and nickname. They are able to choose answers using the four shapes and the quiz updates the point score after each question. If you would like to see the quiz in action, please visit: https://play.kahoot.it/#/k/3f25d12b-2b97- 4041-b71b-e3e1c5106d08. You will need to open a player’s version of the Kahoot (at kahoot.it), enter the game pin, and join the game in order to start playing. If you are unable to access the site, there are detailed screenshots below: APPENDIX 1
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  • 15. 15 ‘The Raven’ Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary, Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore, While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping, As of someone gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door. ‘’Tis some visitor,’ I muttered, ‘tapping at my chamber door - Only this, and nothing more.’ Word Meaning Similar Words? dreary pondered quaint volume lore nodded rapping chamber ‘tis APPENDIX 2
  • 16. 16 Compare the Pair! Using your deconstruction of the stanza from the previous lesson, identify FIVE ways in which Yien Yip has embodied the poem in his image. QUESTIONS? APPENDIX 3 COLOUR How does the colour scheme reflect the stanza? TEXTURE What does this signify? SYMBOLISM What does the Raven symbolize? Why is the window closed and yet the curtains billowed? CHARTERISATION What is the man thinking? Why?
  • 17. 17 From the Raven’s Point of View: Using your poem deconstruction AND brainstorm, in pairs, write an interpretation of the opening of the poem. Your interpretation should be original - not a copy of the stanza – and should be five to six sentences long! Take it slow and make the sentences as descriptive and vivid as you can. In order to make it original, please write from the Raven’s point of view. In order to do so, you can:  Use personal pronouns (e.g. I, My, Mine)  Use narrative form (e.g. adjectives, five senses)  Write through the eyes of the Raven (e.g. what can the Raven see? Hear?) PRE-WRITING THOUGHTS: IN PAIRS: ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________