Feedback

1. FEEDBACK

2. FRONT COVER FIRST PAGE

3. FIRST ARTICLE

4. Role model illustration Role model quote graphic

5. Interview for
role model 1
History on role model
1

6. Instagram
accounts article-
not finished

7. Role model illustration Role model quote
graphic

8. Role model interview Role model history-
need to finish

9. Role model illustration Role model quote graphic

10. Poem
illustration

11. Role model illustration Role model quote graphic

12. Role model interview Role model history

13. Role model illustration Role model quote
graphic- to be done

14. Role model history- to
be done

15. Final pages
Not finished

16. FEEDBACK ONE
• What things need to be improved?
• I would say personally with your columned text, make sure they are all lined
up correctly side by side. This will make the layout seem more professional
and help the layout come together.
• What appeals to you the most in this fanzine?
• The first thing that caught my eye was the art work. I personally tried this
style of art work and failed. But for you to carry on and make it all
aesthetically pleasing comes off very well. Also I think your colour scheme
works really well.
• What do you like the most?
• I feel that your use of the clipping mask has really added in that variety into
your work. Gives your work more character.

17. FEEDBACK TWO
• What things need to be improved?
• Perhaps some of the font/texts need to be changed around when it comes
to spacing as some text on the pages look a little bulky.
• What appeals to you the most in this fanzine?
• I LOVE the illustrations, I feel it is a very individual way of showing imagery
and keeps my interest throughout. Very creative. I really liked the look of the
fonts on the front covers and around the illustrations, because they really
catch your eye yet aren’t to difficult to read, this is essential in creating a
professional looking magazine.
• What else would you like to see in this fanzine?
• The only thing I would add is perhaps more colours just to change up the
colour schemes a little more.
• Really good

18. FEEDBACK THREE
• What things need to be improved?
• Not much to be improved, but you could add some background colour
to some of the pages. And maybe make the text a little bit bigger.
• What appeals to you the most in this fanzine?
• The front appeals the most, it has a lot going on and I really like the art
style you’ve chosen.
• What do you like the most?
• The art style is defiantly my favourite part of the entire magazine, giving
celebrities a cartoony look is a brilliant idea. You’ve clearly put a lot of
effort into it.

19. FEEDBACK SUMMARY
• What do you agree with from your peer feedback?
• I agree mostly with the feedback which I have received. I like the way that the audience has
noticed the art work as this is something that I wanted to try really hard on for this product.
• What do you disagree with from your peer feedback?
• I have been deciding whether to add background colours to my work as I don’t know
whether it looks very plain and simple. I might add a few backgrounds throughout to make it
look less plain but whether it would match might be a problem which I might come across.
The layout of my articles popped up as something to be improved so I will look into this
when I print my work off.
• What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?
• I think I would look at the columns as now that it has been mentioned it has come to my
attention it makes more sense for me to look at this when its been printed off.