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1. Dear John Smith,
This is Monica, I am applying for the position of English teacher at Long Island American School. I
am an American, who has been working in Shanghai as an English teacher for the last three years at EF. I
graduated from the XX University with a major in English focusing on 19th Century British Literature.
I enjoy teaching young children from the age of 10-15 because they are so energetic, fun and
enthusiastic. When I have my classes with them I feel very happy and joyful. I believe that my students
have improved their listening and speaking skills with me as their teacher.
Attach to this email is my resume, if my skills and experience are of interest to you feel free to
contact me at anytime. I would like to do a demo class and to have an interview as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Monica

2. Dear John Smith,
My name is Erica Lee. I would like to apply for the position of English teacher at Long Island
American School. I am an American from Los Angeles. I graduated from UCLA with a Bachelor of
Education. For the past four years, I’ve been working for Giraffle American Training School.
At the Giraffle American Training School, I taught English to children between the ages of 3 to
15.The kids I taught are fun to work with and they’re full of energy and life. With my training and
experience, I believe I can bring this energy and fun to the kids at your school too.
If you’re interested in hiring me, please let me know as soon as possible. I am available to do an
interview and demo class during the weekdays.
Thank you for your time and I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes
Erica Lee

3. Dear John Smith,
My name is Emily Wong, I would like to apply for the position of Full-time English Teacher.
I am from England and I have worked as an English teacher for 5 years. As a teacher at EF, my classes
consist of 5 to 10 students between the age of 5 to 15, I teach(help) my students to improve(build up)
their speaking, listening and reading skills so that they can become fluent in English. I taught my students
to read faster than they did before. Although I like my students, I wish to move on and try to teach in a
different school.
I am self-motivated, energetic and organized teacher. When I’m with my students, I am sensitive to their
needs and I can adjust my teaching style accordingly.