1. What have you learned from audience
feedback?

3. From this pie chart I found
What soap do you or are that most of my target
audience watched
you most likely to watch? Hollyoaks. This shows they
like to watch shows with
people around their age
Coronation Street
range in the soaps they
Hollyoaks watch. It makes me think
Eastenders that in our soap we should
Holby City use dramas they can relate
Casualty to and some would have
been in those situations
Emmerdale
themselves.

5. “ THERE’S AN APPROPRIATE
“
RANGE OF VARIED CAMERA SHOTS
USED
EDITS ARE SHORT AND SNAPPY
FOLLOWING THE CONVENTIONS OF
SOAP TRAILERS ”
” “ THE SONG CHOICE FITS WELL
WITH THE TRAILER
”
I showed my trailer to my media class
“ THE STORYLINES ARE CLEAR AND
who were all in my age range of my
target audience. These are quotes
from the feedback I got for my
trailer...
CONCISE
”

6. I put my trailer on my
coursework blog for people
to see. I had comments giving
me feedback and here is one
of the examples of the
comments I had.
The girl who gave me
feedback in this comment is a
student at Aquinas College
meaning she would be a part
of my target audience.

7. Here, the feedback I got was about my billboard which I took into
mind and changed my billboard. I agreed it made my characters
stand out more and make it look more effective. Here is the
before and after the audience feedback of my billboard.
BEFORE AFTER

8. I asked people of the age range in my target audience to answer
a brief survey for me to help me recognise what I could improve
on and what I did well on within my trailer and ancillary
products. I asked through a paper survey where I have scanned in
some of the feedback I got and asked some people over an
instant message.

9. This is my survey that I asked a friend of mine to answer on
a social network (Facebook) instant message.

13. This was the main
improvement I
picked up on as
when I was
watching my
trailer, I picked up
on this too.

14.  My trailer’s storylines fit the target audience.
 I understood the forms and conventions of
soap trailers.
 Editing was good but could have matched up
to the music a bit more.
 I showed Hal leaving after a clip showing
she’d already left which I should have
altered.
 My song choice portrayed my show’s story
lines well.