Version 11 is the final version of the document summarizing revisions made to improve an inside magazine page layout. The key changes include: moving subtitles and text boxes around for visual appeal and readability, adjusting colors for consistency and to make elements stand out, adding elements like a drop cap letter, pull quote, and question to engage readers, and changing fonts and colors to match the front cover and contents page for continuity across the magazine.

1. Versions of
Inside Page
Emee

2. Version 1
My first version is the same
as how I created at first
and didn’t make any
change.

3. Version 2
In the second
version I moved
the subtitle at the
top and moved it
along to the
picture.
I made the “A” to be like drop cap
at the start of my story so then it
stands out. I also moved the story
on the picture, and changed the
colour so that it’s visible.
I expanded the picture.

4. Version 3
I changed the colour of
the letter so that it goes
with the text box,
keeping its consistency.
I wrote the subtitle inside
the blue box so that it goes
with the letter “A”.
I changed the page number to white
so that it’s visible on the picture.

5. Version 4
I wrote hot news at the
top so then my
audience is aware of
the section they are in.

6. Version 5
I moved up the text box and
straightened it.

7. Version 6
In this version I center
texted my
paragraph so that it
gives a shape and
that my audience
will find it appealing
to read.

8. Version 7
In this version I
completely changed
the order of text boxes
and subtitles, etc.
I wrote a new
subtitle in big font
so that it’s eye
catching to my
targeted
audience.
I moved my article on the side of the page and
changed the colour of the letter “A” so that its
consistence to the subtitle, and also the story so that it
stands out from the background.
I put a quote on the picture so then it looks
like my friend quoted it. I used big yellow
quote sign for emphasis and to make it stand
out.
I wrote a question in
bold
So audience can get
the hint of what my
story is about and to
make them intrigued to
read further on.
I put a red box so I can add
anything extra.

9. Version 8
I put the
page number
in the blue
text box so it
stands out.
The date, name of the magazine
and the website.

10. Version 9
I changed the colour of the text box
and wrote a another short
paragraph with a new title.

11. Version 10
I put the date here
because it’s a double
spread and the website
and date can be spread
out.
Another page number
because it’s a double
page spread.
I changed the box
colour.

12. Version 11
In this version I changed
the fonts to the same
ones as my Front Cover
and Contents to keep its
consistance throughout
the whole magazine. I
also used the same
colour as my Front Cover
and Contents.