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( 00” — 1:18” )十號颶風新聞報道
1. 課文中的「我」起床時聽了什麼消息?
2. 街道上行人的行人表現是怎樣?
3. 「我」聽完電台的新聞報告後,心情有什麼變
化?
搖搖欲墜
駭人
例:龍捲風來時,一時間飛砂走石,
昏天暗地,十分駭人。
「駭」指吃驚、害怕的意思;
「駭人」指形容驚人、令人害怕的事情。
(鼠)(穴,地洞)
例:當清潔工人把渠蓋掀起時,無數的蟑
螂於受驚下向四方八面 亂竄。
豈由此理,你竟敢在此大肆搗亂!
 「肆」為「聿」部,是指任意去做、放縱、不顧一
切的意思。
大肆咆哮、大肆抨
擊、
肆無忌憚、肆行無忌
「肆」還可以配
上什麼詞語?
同義詞:
人山人海、車水馬龍、
門庭若市、華蓋雲集、
插針不入
指人來人往,熱鬧紛紜的樣子。
第一、二段:
記述颱風襲港而停課,「我」感到十分高興。
第三段:描寫狂風暴雨、雷電交加下惡劣天
氣。
第四段:描寫因為颱風襲港的緣故,繁忙的街
道頓時變得冷冷清清。
第五段:記述「我」從新聞報告中獲悉颱風造成的災
害,為自己因颱風而高興的幼稚表現而慚愧。
透過颱風襲港一事,說明大自然所帶來
的災害是人類無法控制的。
主旨
 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9gMyS8szFBQ( 0:12” —1”05 ,2”31 )
(廚師前後行為的不
同)
前 後
把兩種不同的事物,或一個事物的兩個不同方面放
在一起加以比較。
突出
紅色花朵
白色花朵用來映襯紅
色花朵
映襯手法
甲:「你看,那家銀行門前排隊
領取招股書的人龍多麼長。」
乙:「香港人不會放過任何發財的
機會,實在太精明了!」
諷刺香港人過於唯利是圖。
 使用與本語意思相反的詞語,來表達本意。
 反語的作用:
產生幽默感與諷刺性,有時比正說更有力量
。
反語
1. 頑劣的風卻偏要跟他們開玩笑
2. 大雨也趁機來點小幽默
表達風雨的可怕
王小麗放學回家,笑容滿面地蹦蹦跳跳
去對媽媽說:「這次中文考試我考得好
差好差,差得不得了呀!」
從王小麗的表情與動作可見
她十分高興,決非考試成績
不好,她只是說反語,同媽
媽開玩笑。
還記得甚麼是撮寫嗎?
1. 將文章內容進行篩選,
2. 分辨文章中重要及不重要的內容
3. 選取重要的部分,刪去不重要的,或把分散
的意思綜合組織
4. 新語段去取代原來的文句。
小任務:假設你是新聞報道員,試根據課文颱
風襲港的內容撮寫成新聞稿,報道颱風襲港
的情況。
撮寫成新聞稿時要注意:
1. 刪減個人感受,要保持客觀。
2. 刪減修飾性語句,讓文句簡單流暢。
3. 把不相連的句子內容整合成句,並保留
原意。
試撮寫以下段落:
今天早上,我被窗外的聲音驚醒了。窗外的風吹得
十分猛烈,呼呼的聲音,好像千百隻老虎在廝打、吼
叫。大雨落下來了,就像巨大的瀑布從天而降。我感
到十分害怕,就像世界末日一
樣。我扭開了電視,原來天文台已發出八號東北烈風
信號。
刪去個人
感受
刪去修飾
語
把不相連的句子內容
整合成句
今天早上,我被窗外的聲音驚醒了。窗
外的風吹得十分猛烈,呼呼的聲音,好像
千百隻老虎在廝打、吼叫。大雨落下來
了,就像巨大的瀑布從天而降。我感到十
分害怕,就像世界末日一樣。我扭開了電
視,原來天文台已發出八號東北烈風信
號。
現在是特別新聞報道,香港天文台於今天早上六
時發出八號東北烈風信號,教統局宣佈今天所有
學校停課一天。
現在報道市面上的情況:我們可以看見外面的天
氣十分惡劣……
開
端
結尾:預料八號颱風信號仍然會維持一段時間,
市民應留在安全地方。新聞報道完畢。
內容是否完整,能否配合主題
聆聽同學的新聞報道,評評誰説得最好。
可考慮以下幾方面:
•是否採用客觀、清晰的新聞用語
•態度是否大方得體
•能否做到吐字清晰、發音準確
•能否做到説話聲量適中,語速適當

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