1. Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 The story’s title by the waters of babylon is a reference to a passage from the bible

2. Proofreading Warm-up Item 2 The narrators Father if im not mistaken is a preist.

3. Proofreading Warm-up Item 3 As they rided on the train the little boy didn’t do nothing but ask questions about all the feilds they past

4. Proofreading Warm-up Item 4 The aunt don’t tell storys very good but the bachelor does.

5. Proofreading Warm-up Item 5 There’s no flowers in the park the pigs have ate them all.

6. Proofreading Warm-up Item 6 The park does however have alot of other wonderful things ponds with fish trees with parrots and etc.

7. Proofreading Warm-up Item 7 Employing his creativeity and wit the man succedes in keeping the children quiet for ten minute.

8. Proofreading Warm-up Item 8 the pilot had no alternative, stowaways must face judgment

9. Proofreading Warm-up Item 9 the ship lurched slowed and suddenly it was accelerating again.

10. Proofreading Warm-up Item 10 in 1954, when “the cold equations” were published, no people had yet went into outer space.

11. Proofreading Warm-up Item 11 Him and me enjoy science fiction because its exciteing and imaginative.

12. Proofreading Warm-up Item 12 Frank McCourt his childhood in a slum in limerick ireland

13. Proofreading Warm-up Item 13 Writing an autobiography is one way to find out who you are, your feelings, and how life events has effected you.

14. Proofreading Warm-up Item 14 You can explore you’re passed, and discover what made you who you are today