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[Shot 1: show David inputting information into cell [Shot 2: Show cellphone transmission to satellite and [Shot 3: show David leaving the office slightly dishev-
phone] then down to car] eled and rushing to his car with a book-bag, sunset
sky behind]
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David is 25 and has suffered from epilepsy all his life, Now that he has started driving around with Beth “David has had a long day at the office full of meet-
but since he was 10 he has been able to manage his he has even more piece of mind. He was able to
seizures with the help of medication. According to ings; he was up late the prior night working and only
state law, David can drive if he has been seizure-free tell Beth about his medical conditions and place a
for at least six months. closer watch and certain aspects of his behaviors. got 3 hours of sleep.”
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[Shot 4: David turns on the car and settles in for his
[Shot 5: Dashboard plays music] [Shot 6: David Driving Lots of traffic]
drive home]
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Beth says, “David, your blood pressure is slightly David says to the voice-activated system, “Turn on As David turns onto a road with heavy traffic, he
higher than normal, and your heartbeat appears to the Relax playlist. Turn on back massage.” notices his vision becoming blurry. He begins to feel
be 5 bpm faster than normal.” dizzy, as though he is going to pass out.
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[Shot 9: 911 taking a call....red and blue lights
[Shot 7: Car swerving down the road] [Shot 8: Beth in the dashboard]
around phone with voiceover]
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He begins to swerve in the lane. Beth says, “You do The dash displays a soft light signaling a medical Beth contacts David’s emergency contact, physician,
not have control of the vehicle. Your brain activity emergency. David has just enough time to pull over and 911 to alert them of the medical emergency.
is erratic. Pull the vehicle over.” to the shoulder before he suffers a mild seizure.
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[Shot 10: Emergency lights are flashing [Shot 12: A ‘looking back’ scene with David being
[Shot 11: ambulance speeding down the road]
on a dark street] interviewed up close to the camera]
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MUSIC: soft melancholy music plays An emergency vehicle appears on the scene “I never really thought Beth would actually
during this scene. in five minutes. save my life.”
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