First draft of my script for a film opening

1. Project X
By
Scott Hallett
Based on an Original Screenplay

2. ACT I - OPENING
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INT./ EXT. DERELICT/DESTROYED HOUSE - EX-LIVING ROOM - DUSK
M.L.S
The MAIN ANTAGONIST is standing in dark denim jeans and a
long black trench coat. He has long black slick-back hair and
has a very short beard as he hasn't shaved. He also seems to
have a scar down his right cheekbone. He has somewhat
likeness to that of Russell Adler from Call Of Duty Cold War.
He is standing facing what would've been the corner of the
room however one of the walls is fallen, in the corner of the
room there is an old filing cabinet surrounded by rubble.
TRACKING SHOT (C.U. TO C.S.)
On top of the rubble is an old 80's video tape recorder on
the floor which looks like it was in bad condition before the
house came down. The camera moves from the camera to the MAIN
ANTAGONIST he then picks it up.
M.S.
We then see the MAIN ANTAGONIST examine the camera.
B.C.U.
The camera then only focuses on the camera, specifically a
dilapidated name tag named MAIN ANTAGONIST
M.S.
We then see the MAIN ANTAGONIST open the camera
MAIN PROTAGONIST P.O.V. (HANDHELD CAMERA)
We then see him flick through the different clips. Then he
begins to start playing them.
STRAIGHT CUT TO:
EXT. OUTDOOR GREEN SPACE
Camera opens on a pile of leaves, then the wind blows to the
right but only blows away the leaves revealing the names
shaped in leaves. The wind then blows more leaves from right
to left to cover the names.
STRAIGHT CUT TO:

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EXT. OUTDOOR URBAN SPACE
TRACKING SHOT (M.L.S. TO C.U.)
The camera opens on the boys playing conkers. One of the boys
knocks the other boys conker, in turn knocking it off. The
camera then follows the conkers as it flies over the ledge.
The camera then goes over to the ledge and looks over and
sees the conkers have fallen into the shape of names.
STRAIGHT CUT TO:
INT. ROOM WITH VINYL SHELVES
Have the camera walking past the shelves of vinyls. We then
hear the vinyls fall, but don't see it. The camera then turns
to see the vinyls all over the floor laid out in the names.
The camera then turns away and carries off.
STRAIGHT CUT TO:
EXT. RIVER
Have the camera moving beside the river with a handheld
camera then have the bottle come into shot down the river,
but unfocused in the camera, the camera then catches focus on
it and rushes towards it as it nestles in the corner of the
river bank with a letter of names inside.
STRAIGHT CUT:
INT. ROOM WITH TYPEWRITER ON A DESK/TABLE
Have the camera set just on the top of the typewriter, and
have someone behind the camera typer the names.
STRAIGHT CUT:
EXT. GARDEN TRAMPOLINE
Have the first shot of the snow-covered trampoline, then have
is slowly melt the names then fully melt.

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