9. Use short sentences. Hemingway was famous for a terse minimalist style of writing that dispensed with flowery adjectives and got straight to the point. In short, Hemingway wrote with simple genius. Perhaps his finest demonstration of short sentence prowess was when he was challenged to tell an entire story in only 6 words:
12. 3. Use vigorous English . It’s muscular, forceful. Vigorous English comes from passion, focus and intention. It’s the difference between putting in a good effort and TRYING to move a boulder… and actually sweating, grunting, straining your muscles to the point of exhaustion… and MOVING the freaking thing!
13. 4. Be positive, not negative. Since Hemingway wasn’t the cheeriest guy in the world, what does he mean by be positive? Basically, you should say what something is rather than what it isn’t.
14. This is what Michel Fortin calls using up words: By stating what something isn’t can be counterproductive since it is still directing the mind, albeit in the opposite way. • If I told you that dental work is painless for example, you’ll still focus on the word “pain” in “painless.” • Instead of saying “inexpensive,” say “economical,” • Instead of saying “this procedure is painless,” say “there’s little discomfort” or “it’s relatively comfortable,” • And instead of saying “this software is error-free” or “foolproof,” say “this software is consistent” or “stable.”
15. 5. Never have only 4 rules. “ I write one page of masterpiece to ninety-one pages of shit,” Hemingway confided to F. Scott Fitzgerald in 1934. “ I try to put the shit in the wastebasket.” http://www.copyblogger.com/ernest-hemingway-top-5-tips-for-writing-well/
17. A paragraph… (is constructed of a sentence or two that conveys ONE idea) 1
19. My dog is button and it is on a diet because two vets told me he was getting fat but we are both in denial. Run-on sentences: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/cgi-shl/quiz.pl/run-ons_add1.htm BEWARE!
50. Outlines are essential. Work from an outline OR outline your drafts.
51. Clever vocabulary words save space. Example: American public education is, ideally, egalitarian . I believe in an ideal world the school system in the United States that is designed for all citizens should be fair, democratic, and full of equal opportunities for students.
52. Edits are essential. About four versions, with time in between them, should work. … remember Hemingway’s s*it pile.
53. Knowledge of your audience is essential. To what degree do you inform them? What level of formality do you use? What do you need to say to achieve your communication task?
FUN FACT: Did you know scientists think long ago the word O.K. comes from the word &quot;Oll Korrect&quot;. Long ago people spelled it like that and shortened it to &quot;O.K.&quot; They never changed the spelling. If they did, today we would say &quot;A.C.&quot; And we have used it ever sense. The first time it was used was in 1839.
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