Please revise the paper based on the comments from the professor: Comments and existing paper on attachment "Literature Review + Comments" Topic and 1st assignment on the other attachment. Initial paper instructions:  Written Assignment 2, Part I and Part II This assignment has two parts, a review of the literature you have explored for your final project and an annotated bibliography of the sources listed. Consult the following article for an explanation of what this involves: Developing the Literature Review Your draft of Chapter 2 should be structured according to the outline given below, which lists the different subheadings you need to include. Consult the explanations given for guidance regarding what information to include under each of these subheadings: Part I: Literature Review Write and submit a draft of Chapter 2, the Literature Review, including headings appropriate to the content. Take notes from the sources and organize them according to content themes. Introductory paragraph Begin with an introductory paragraph and place the informative thesis statement at the end of that first paragraph . The thesis statement is the major focus of the literature review chapter. All paragraphs relate in some way to that thesis statement. Body paragraphs Each body paragraph must begin with a topic sentence and end with a concluding sentence. See pp. 183-184 of the Writing the Winning Thesis or Dissertation textbook. Every paragraph must contain information you have read in sources. Do not use more than 10% quotes in the entire chapter. Every paragraph must have citations for all paraphrased information. Do not use any of your own opinions or experiences. This is purely information from researched sources. Concluding paragraph End with a concluding paragraph that begins with a restatement of your thesis sentence that you used in the introduction. Add nothing new to the conclusion. It is a summary of the body paragraphs. Note: Beware of inadvertent plagiarism. Do not use any wording or phrasing from the authors of your sources unless you place the words in quotation marks. Every idea MUST be cited, regardless of how you paraphrased the information. Please focus on the guidance provided by the OWL Web Site. You will be held responsible for the writing, as well as the content of this chapter. Review punctuation, especially semicolons. If you do not know how to use them, don’t! Review comma rules. Every comma has its own rule. Know why you are using them. Be sure to revise your work several times. Have someone else read your writing, as he or she will catch errors you missed. That is just common practice among writers. This is a scholarly work.  Part II: Annotated Bibliography Prepare an Annotated Bibliography of sources based on the references you used for Part I: Literature Review.  Use APA or MLA format to create the annotated bibliography. Note that all business, science, and social science disciplines must us ...

1. Please revise the paper based on the comments from the
professor:
Comments and existing paper on attachment "Literature Review
+ Comments"
Topic and 1st assignment on the other attachment.
Initial paper instructions:
Written Assignment 2, Part I and Part II
This assignment has two parts, a review of the literature you
have explored for your final project and an annotated
bibliography of the sources listed. Consult the following article
for an explanation of what this involves:
Developing the Literature Review
Your draft of Chapter 2 should be structured according to the
outline given below, which lists the different subheadings you
need to include. Consult the explanations given for guidance
regarding what information to include under each of these
subheadings:
Part I: Literature Review
Write and submit a draft of Chapter 2, the Literature Review,

2. including headings appropriate to the content. Take notes from
the sources and organize them according to content themes.
Introductory paragraph
Begin with an introductory paragraph and
place the informative thesis statement at the end of that first
paragraph
. The thesis statement is the major focus of the literature review
chapter. All paragraphs relate in some way to that thesis
statement.
Body paragraphs
Each body paragraph must begin with a topic sentence and end
with a concluding sentence. See pp. 183-184 of the
Writing the Winning Thesis or Dissertation
textbook. Every paragraph must contain information you have
read in sources. Do not use more than 10% quotes in the entire
chapter. Every paragraph must have citations for all paraphrased
information. Do not use any of your own opinions or
experiences. This is purely information from researched
sources.
Concluding paragraph
End with a concluding paragraph that begins with a restatement
of your thesis sentence that you used in the introduction. Add
nothing new to the conclusion. It is a summary of the body
paragraphs.
Note:

3. Beware of inadvertent plagiarism. Do not use any wording or
phrasing from the authors of your sources unless you place the
words in quotation marks. Every idea MUST be cited,
regardless of how you paraphrased the information. Please focus
on the guidance provided by the OWL Web Site. You will be
held responsible for the writing, as well as the content of this
chapter.
Review punctuation, especially semicolons. If you do not know
how to use them, don’t! Review comma rules. Every comma has
its own rule. Know why you are using them. Be sure to revise
your work several times. Have someone else read your writing,
as he or she will catch errors you missed. That is just common
practice among writers. This is a scholarly work.
Part II: Annotated Bibliography
Prepare an Annotated Bibliography of sources based on the
references you used for Part I: Literature Review.
Use APA or MLA format to create the annotated bibliography.
Note that all business, science, and social science disciplines
must use APA format; creative, literary, theater arts must use
MLA format. See the Purdue University Online Writing Lab
[OWL] Web site at
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/
for format information.
If using APA format, title this page
References
; if you are using MLA, title this page
Works Cited
.
Place your Annotated Bibliography at the end of Chapter 2 (at

4. this point). This will eventually become part of the References
(APA) or Works Cited (MLA) that will be placed at the end of
Chapter 5 of your capstone project.