1. A2 Construction Feedback
Construction
Comments
Marking Criteria
Holding a shot ready Excellence demonstrated most of the time
where appropriate
Framing a shot Wide variety of framing used and all appropriate to
task including a series of EXC, CU and MLS
Using a variety of shot Excellence demonstrated most of the time – wide
distances variety used all in context with either the impression
‘of a new found love’ or to allow audiences to pay
attention to small but very significant details i.e. the
cutting up of the photos.
Shooting material Excellence demonstrated most of the time – highly
appropriate to task set appropriate and consistent through-out
Selecting mise-en- Excellence demonstrated most of the time
scene including
colour, figure,
lighting, objects and
setting
Editing so that Excellence demonstrated most of the time – although
meaning is apparent after dialling the potential love interest for the first
to viewer time… maybe cutting to them in a gesture of meeting
for the first date would have secured the desired
meaning. However, the intention of her making
contact and them being together is clear.
Using varied shot Excellence demonstrated most of the time
transitions and other
effects selectively and
appropriately
Using sound with Excellence demonstrated most of the time
images and editing
appropriately for the
task set
Using titles Title at the beginning and end is missing
appropriately
Level 4 35 (A)