6. Sharp pencil
Title
Date
Capital Letters
Full stops
Describe the character
Describe the place
First, next, then, finally
And, but, so, while, because
✔
✔
✔
✔
✗
✔
✗
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Fun action words (bounded, sprang) ✔
Rhyming words (loud, proud, crowd) ✔
1. Draft
2. Assess
3. Edit
4. Mark
5. Complete
www.hipsburn.
northumberland.
eschools.co.uk
7. Introduction
4+ sentences
Proposition stated
Outline of narrative
Context of topic
Body of essay
3+ paragraphs
6+ facts per paragraph
Inter-relationships
Argument is relevant
Quote with source given
Conclusion
3+ sentences
Summation
Proof of proposition
Specific reference to assess/evaluate
History Marksheet by Frank Egan
www.aranmore.wa.edu.au
“I can actually
see how to
improve, it’s
obvious.”
9. Previewing can
double the rate of
pupil progress
(Hattie, 2012)
Preview clubs
Home-prep
Pre-course reading
Small group
preview
Preview
10. Homework – average effect size = 0.29
Hattie, 2009
ES = 0.01 ES = 0.54
Preview
0.90
11. a. Gains in national tests
b. Pupils supporting views
with reasons
c. Teachers using open-
ended questions (in
other subjects)
d. Number of questions
asked by pupils
e. Percentage of pupils
engaged throughout
f. Incidences of
supporting what others
have said
g. Incidences of
challenging what others
have said
h. Quality of the dialogue
Progress in
P4C
13. Group Feedback Pre-Post Gain Attitudes
A Comments
only
B Marks only
C Marks and
comments
30% gain
No gain
No gain
Positive
Top 25% +
Bottom 25% -
Top 25% +
Bottom 25% -
The impact of grades & comments
Ruth Butler (1997)
14. Assessing does not
mean threatening
(Clermont Université)
Performance
Mastery
Low Value
British Journal of Educational
Psychology, March 2013
Negative effect
on girls
Negative effect
on boys
High grades for
both
15. Do NOT look inside the box
Derren Brown: Trick or Treat
19. He’s making good progress
She is a delight to have in class and always
tries her best
If he tried harder, he could
really excel
A for effort
Always polite
and willing to
try
He has the
confidence to
say no
20. Achievement AND impact
Impact (progress)
Achievement
1. High A
Low P
2. High A
High P
3. Low A
Low P
4. Low A
High P
0.4