1. I submitted the introduction and this is feedback I got back. Can
you help me fix this?
Luis,• Week 1: Introduction (250–300 words)You will research
and find an example of a firm that is going through
transformational change. The first part of the plan will be the
Introduction. Context for the introduction includes the
following:o How were the stakeholders affected?o What
initiated the change?o How well has it been received or
accepted, and why?Task Requirements: Luis, you did not choose
a company and you did not answer all of the questions.
15/25Demonstration & application of knowledge: What you
wrote was well written but also very general. Your opening
paragraph was essentially a copy and paste of the assignment
which does not provide me any details on your chosen
organization. This is a large part of this assignment and needs
to be included moving forward. 40/55Academic Writing &
Format: The title page used is not what I listed, please make
sure to use this moving forward. 15/20Score:Proficient: 90 -
100%Effective: 80 - 89%Developing: 60 - 79%Unsatisfactory: 0
- 59%