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THE END 
Author: Lucas Monteiro Guedes 
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura 
Illustrator: nidihi 
Publisher: www.storybird.com 
Date: II Semester - Summer 2014 
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário” 
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia
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  • 7. THE END Author: Lucas Monteiro Guedes Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura Illustrator: nidihi Publisher: www.storybird.com Date: II Semester - Summer 2014 A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário” CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia
  • 8. Page line Where it says... It should have said... How would you grade this story from 10 to 100? - Grade: ( ) Why? What did you think about this story? Did you like it? Why? SUGESTIONS TO IMPROVE THE STORY...