An unique perspective of how the ideal world would be in my perspective.

10. So, let me tell you a
secret... You ,too, can
live in a perfect world.
What would your
perfect world be like?
What would be in it?
Who would be in it?
Where would it be?
When would it be?
Why would it be perct?
THE END

11. THE END
Author: Patrícia Rodrigues N. da S.
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura
Illustrator: Kelleymcmorris
Publisher: www.storybird.com
Date: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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