question5part2

1. Question 5 - How did you
attract/address your audience?
Highlight how you made changes to
your rough cut in light of audience
feedback

2. In this part I will highlight how I made changes to my rough cut magazine in the light of
my target audience. I will compare my rough cut magazine with my final product,
annotating how I have changed/improved my rough-cut magazine.
Rough cut magazine

3. This is my rough-cut magazine compared to my final product (after using audience
feedback to make improvements).
The audience also gave
feedback on my sell
lines, they suggested that I
add another sell line to fill
in the empty space that was
left over from when I made
the main title slightly
smaller.
Secondly the audience
suggested that I make the
main title of my magazine
slightly smaller because
they felt that it took up to
much of the front cover. I
agreed with this feedback
and it also allowed me to
add another sell line onto
my front cover.
Firstly the audience suggested that the image should be
a medium close up rather than a wide shot of model. To Overall I think that from using my target
change my magazine from using the audience feedback audiences feedback it has improved my front
I re-took some photo’s and took some medium close up cover and it will be more appealing to my
photos of my model. I agree with the audience target audience.
feedback, I think this photo improves the overall front
cover and gives it more of a rock/indie feel.