1. The unsatisfactory service in the school library
MAIN POINT:First I would like to report about the unsatisfactory service in the school
library.
STAND : Apparently students need library as a resource of knowledge and information.
ELABORATION :
EXAMPLE :
SUGGESTION :
The high food prices in the school canteen
MAIN POINT : Next, I would like to report about the high food prices in the school canteen.
STAND : Students think that the price is not affordable for students, who found that most of
the food are quite expensive.
ELABORATION : Many students complained that the canteen take advantage.
EXAMPLE : For instance a bottle of mineral water is sold RM 1.30 , while its normal price is
RM 1.00
SUGGESTION :
The dirty conditions of the school toilets
MAIN POINT : I would also like to report about the dirty conditions of the school toilets.
STAND : I think the dirty toilets cause many problem to the students and teachers.
ELABORATION :
EXAMPLE:
SUGGESTION :
The request for a bus stop in front of the school
MAIN POINT : Then, we would like to request for a bus stop in front of the school.
STAND : The bus stop is very important to students and teachers.
ELABORATION : Provide safe and comfortable area for students while waiting for the bus.
EXAMPLE : ..especially when it is raining or when the whether is extremely hot.
SUGGESTION: