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Basics (and musts) of web
design: integration of plain
language, usability, and
information architecture
Miriam Vincent, Office of the Federal Register-
www.plainlanguage.gov
Lisbon | October 13, 2010
• Logically organized (information architecture)
• Easy to use (usability)
• Understandable (plain language)
The three requirements
for a useful website
Why do people come to
your site?
• They DON’T come to read
We know people don’t read on
the web
They scan.
Nielsen and Morkes, in a famous 1997 study, found that 79
percent of their test users always scanned any new page they
came across; only 16 percent read word-by-word.
A recent study of people reading long-form text on tablets finds
higher reading speeds than in the past, but they're still slower
than reading print.
http://www.useit.com/alertbox/ipad-kindle-reading.html
Some horrifying facts*
•Based on analysis of 45,237 page views, Nielsen found that
people read an average of 18% of what’s on a page.
•However, as the number of words on a page goes up, the
percentage read goes down.
•To get people to read half your words, you have to limit your page
to 110 words or fewer.
*http://www.useit.com/alertbox/percent-text-read.html
Why do people come to
your site?
• Customers come to your site to perform a task.
• They come because they expect to get self-service.
Organizing your content
Your customers need to be able to find what they need, but the
way you organize your information isn’t necessarily the way
they look for it.
• On-site survey
• If you deal with customers by mail, include a paper survey
in a regular mailing.
• Visit offices where users interact with your organization
directly. Talk to users, and the people who serve them.
• Do one-on-one interviews
• Do a focus group
You can read about these and other techniques at www.usability.gov
Who are your customers?
• What do they need to know?
• What is their level of knowledge?
• Are they experienced web users?
• What technology do they have?
And, most importantly,
• What do they want to do?
What are their needs?
Identify customers’ top tasks
People come to your website with a specific task in mind. If your
website doesn’t help them complete that task, they’ll leave.
Identify the mission—the purpose—of your website, to help you
clarify the #1 top task your website should help people
accomplish.
Logical organization
You’ve identified your customers’ top tasks, but you still have a lot
of material that some customers want.
How do you figure out how to organize your site?
If you thought even for a second that the answer might be “by
office” –WRONG!
The easiest method is an old-fashioned card sort.
Remember -
DON’T
•Write for your supervisor or co-workers
DO
•Write for your customers
•Make a list of who reads your content
•Decide why they read it and what information they need
•Address your customers’ top tasks
Writing your content
• Identify your audience
• Write to meet the needs of your audience
• Choose simple, everyday words
• Keep your sentences and paragraphs short
• Use active voice, headings and pronouns
• Use bulleted lists and tables
Print Writing
• Tells a story
• Is linear — has a beginning, middle, and end
• Is often consumed in a relaxed setting
• Written in complete sentences
Web Writing
• Easy to scan
• Quick, accessible source of info
• Minimal text
• User-friendly — Users may be stressed,
impatient, skeptical, or disoriented
• Interactive
Writing content
When you start thinking about content pages, keep these points in
mind:
• Think topics, not stories.
• Think about having a conversation with your customer.
Eliminate anything that’s not part of the conversation.
• A very few content pages might contain more extensive
information.
Remember
On average, visitors read about 18% of what’s on the page, and
the more words you have, the lower the percent they read.
So, use the inverted pyramid. Begin with the shortest and clearest
statement you can make about your topic.
Conclusions/Key Info
Background
Eliminate words
Some common sources of wordiness—
• Passive voice
• Redundancies
• Prepositional phrases
• Hidden verbs
• Unnecessary modifiers
• Failure to use pronouns
Omit Information
• Remember, your web content is a conversation with your
customer. If material doesn’t belong in the conversation, it
doesn’t belong on the web.
• Hopefully, you can research what customers really want.
• You aren’t Santa Claus. You can’t serve all customers. If you
serve your top 3 or 4 customer groups, you’re doing good.
What your customers
don’t care about
• When your office was formed
• Who is the head
• What the head said the day he was sworn in
• What the head looks like
• What your annual report from 3 years ago looked like
• How the Bureau is organized
• What you did for customers 5 years ago
• The text of a law that authorizes your office
Displaying your content
• Be consistent!
• Consistent design and color scheme (remember to take into
consideration low-vision readers and screen reader users)
• Consistent style for headings
• Consistent navigation
• Use lots of white-space
• Use lots of informative headings
• Take care with links
Links: Eye Track study results
The best links in the study: The worst links in the study:
 Used plain language  Used bland, generic words
 Were specific and clear  Used made-up words or
terms
 Used common words  Started with speech-
introduction language
 Started with the essence of
the message
 Were action-oriented
* http://www.useit.com/alertbox/nanocontent.html
• Logical organization
• Informative headings
• Pronouns
• Active voice
• Lists and tables
• Common words (no jargon)
USE
• Hidden verbs
• Abbreviations
• Long sentences
• Unnecessary words
• Information the user doesn’t want
Avoid
The requirements (recap)
Know and write for your audience
Make sure your audience can quickly and easily find and use the
information they want
Make sure your stool has three legs:
• Logical organization
• Easy to use
• Easy to understand
Miriam Vincent
Staff Attorney, Office of the Federal Register
www.plainlanguage.gov
mvincent@gpo.gov

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Basics (and musts) of web design: integration of plain language, usability and information architecture - Miriam Vincent

  • 1. Basics (and musts) of web design: integration of plain language, usability, and information architecture Miriam Vincent, Office of the Federal Register- www.plainlanguage.gov Lisbon | October 13, 2010
  • 2. • Logically organized (information architecture) • Easy to use (usability) • Understandable (plain language) The three requirements for a useful website
  • 3. Why do people come to your site? • They DON’T come to read
  • 4. We know people don’t read on the web They scan. Nielsen and Morkes, in a famous 1997 study, found that 79 percent of their test users always scanned any new page they came across; only 16 percent read word-by-word. A recent study of people reading long-form text on tablets finds higher reading speeds than in the past, but they're still slower than reading print. http://www.useit.com/alertbox/ipad-kindle-reading.html
  • 5.
  • 6. Some horrifying facts* •Based on analysis of 45,237 page views, Nielsen found that people read an average of 18% of what’s on a page. •However, as the number of words on a page goes up, the percentage read goes down. •To get people to read half your words, you have to limit your page to 110 words or fewer. *http://www.useit.com/alertbox/percent-text-read.html
  • 7. Why do people come to your site? • Customers come to your site to perform a task. • They come because they expect to get self-service.
  • 8. Organizing your content Your customers need to be able to find what they need, but the way you organize your information isn’t necessarily the way they look for it.
  • 9. • On-site survey • If you deal with customers by mail, include a paper survey in a regular mailing. • Visit offices where users interact with your organization directly. Talk to users, and the people who serve them. • Do one-on-one interviews • Do a focus group You can read about these and other techniques at www.usability.gov Who are your customers?
  • 10. • What do they need to know? • What is their level of knowledge? • Are they experienced web users? • What technology do they have? And, most importantly, • What do they want to do? What are their needs?
  • 11. Identify customers’ top tasks People come to your website with a specific task in mind. If your website doesn’t help them complete that task, they’ll leave. Identify the mission—the purpose—of your website, to help you clarify the #1 top task your website should help people accomplish.
  • 12. Logical organization You’ve identified your customers’ top tasks, but you still have a lot of material that some customers want. How do you figure out how to organize your site? If you thought even for a second that the answer might be “by office” –WRONG! The easiest method is an old-fashioned card sort.
  • 13. Remember - DON’T •Write for your supervisor or co-workers DO •Write for your customers •Make a list of who reads your content •Decide why they read it and what information they need •Address your customers’ top tasks
  • 14. Writing your content • Identify your audience • Write to meet the needs of your audience • Choose simple, everyday words • Keep your sentences and paragraphs short • Use active voice, headings and pronouns • Use bulleted lists and tables
  • 15. Print Writing • Tells a story • Is linear — has a beginning, middle, and end • Is often consumed in a relaxed setting • Written in complete sentences
  • 16. Web Writing • Easy to scan • Quick, accessible source of info • Minimal text • User-friendly — Users may be stressed, impatient, skeptical, or disoriented • Interactive
  • 17. Writing content When you start thinking about content pages, keep these points in mind: • Think topics, not stories. • Think about having a conversation with your customer. Eliminate anything that’s not part of the conversation. • A very few content pages might contain more extensive information.
  • 18. Remember On average, visitors read about 18% of what’s on the page, and the more words you have, the lower the percent they read. So, use the inverted pyramid. Begin with the shortest and clearest statement you can make about your topic. Conclusions/Key Info Background
  • 19. Eliminate words Some common sources of wordiness— • Passive voice • Redundancies • Prepositional phrases • Hidden verbs • Unnecessary modifiers • Failure to use pronouns
  • 20. Omit Information • Remember, your web content is a conversation with your customer. If material doesn’t belong in the conversation, it doesn’t belong on the web. • Hopefully, you can research what customers really want. • You aren’t Santa Claus. You can’t serve all customers. If you serve your top 3 or 4 customer groups, you’re doing good.
  • 21. What your customers don’t care about • When your office was formed • Who is the head • What the head said the day he was sworn in • What the head looks like • What your annual report from 3 years ago looked like • How the Bureau is organized • What you did for customers 5 years ago • The text of a law that authorizes your office
  • 22. Displaying your content • Be consistent! • Consistent design and color scheme (remember to take into consideration low-vision readers and screen reader users) • Consistent style for headings • Consistent navigation • Use lots of white-space • Use lots of informative headings • Take care with links
  • 23. Links: Eye Track study results The best links in the study: The worst links in the study:  Used plain language  Used bland, generic words  Were specific and clear  Used made-up words or terms  Used common words  Started with speech- introduction language  Started with the essence of the message  Were action-oriented * http://www.useit.com/alertbox/nanocontent.html
  • 24. • Logical organization • Informative headings • Pronouns • Active voice • Lists and tables • Common words (no jargon) USE
  • 25. • Hidden verbs • Abbreviations • Long sentences • Unnecessary words • Information the user doesn’t want Avoid
  • 26. The requirements (recap) Know and write for your audience Make sure your audience can quickly and easily find and use the information they want Make sure your stool has three legs: • Logical organization • Easy to use • Easy to understand
  • 27. Miriam Vincent Staff Attorney, Office of the Federal Register www.plainlanguage.gov mvincent@gpo.gov

Notas do Editor

  1. Users require three things when using a website – a logical structure so they know where to look for information, an easy-to-use interface to get them to that information, and easily-understandable information (information architecture, usability, and plain language). A website needs all these elements to be successful. This is just a brief overview of these three aspects to web, starting with information architecture. There are other sessions throughout this conference that will go into much greater detail on all three of these topics, if you want to learn more about them. But, I want to stress that you need all three prongs for a good, useful site. Think of a three-legged stool, depending on how the legs are balanced, it might be able to stand if it were missing one leg, but you probably wouldn’t want to sit on it. If it were missing two legs, forget about it. Finally, you’ll notice that the distinction among these three legs is not always clear. They all have the same goal – to make sure people can find what they need and use what they find – and they use many of the same principles. Some of the requirements for usability and plain language, for example, good navigation and good headings, can be met fairly easily if you already have a logical structure in place for your content. Also, all three aspects of good design need you to identify your audience.
  2. We’ll get into how people expect to use your site in a minute – for now, let’s concentrate on what they don’t do.
  3. Here’s the ubiquitous “F”
  4. Since people come to you site to DO something, usually by finding information they can use, you need to have a logical way to organize your information.
  5. Your customers need to be able to find what they need quickly and easily. If your site is well-organized, that should be easy. But how do you create a well-organized site?
  6. Again, make sure you know who you are writing for – remember, it’s much easier to write from scratch than to re-write! And, remember, there is a difference between print writing and web writing.
  7. Remember what I talked about earlier? That people don’t read on-line? And that they don’t read web pages with a lot of text? To get people to read half your words, you have to limit your page to 110 words or fewer. Here’s where you eliminate words, but not just words – check to see if what you put up is really necessary. For example, how many people really care about the “about us” page almost every website has? Is that something you really want to highlight and take up space on your site?
  8. People use design cues to help them navigate. If you use a different heading style on each page, your customers will be confused and get distracted from their mission – finding what they need. Keep your navigation in the same location on each page and in the same order. You don’t want people thinking about your design or thinking about why you did something, you want them to be able to use your site without thinking about it at all.
  9. Remember – use plain language when preparing links, just like when writing text.