1. Feed Back Sheet
“This is our rough cut for the opening sequence of
a thriller movie. How do you think we could
improve it to make it more effective?”
Some tense sound would make it a lot
better, you would get a feel for the film
The whole thing could flow better
Your production logo could move to work
better with the Sony logo. With a sound
over the top of it.
A name of the film would be helpful
There is some jumpy cuts from each scene it
would look a lot better if these were to be
smooth
It is quite long for a opening sequence
Some scene’s last to long (talking on the
phone)
There is a slight change of lighting between
the scenes, which confused me a little