2.  Inthe first slides of this powerpoint, I have
showed how we have improved our trailer
according to the results and feedback we
have been given on our roughcut.

3.  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-
8uaY8i4hKI
 Here, I have annotated the vox-pop with how
we improved the trailer according to the
feedback in which we got.
 I also put in what the said during the vox-pop
as speech bubbles.

4.  http://www.surveymonkey.com/MySurvey_E
ditorFull.aspx?sm=0Cc8VN9zllH4zi0C%2b9qZA
4IPuisvQyvOyHRmhnomn9A%3d
 This is the link to the survey in which we
created to gather feedback on our trailer.
 So that we could use that to improve on it.

5.  Allof the people which responded to our
survey were 16-20, and just over half of
them were female and the rest male.
Ratings (1 being the How effective was the
worst, 4 being the trailer?
best) Very
effective
Rated 4
Ok
Rated 3
Rated 2 Not
Rated 1 effective

6. This was the responses to the question... How could it be improved?
Every single one of them said, sound.

8.  Most of the feedback which we got, was all
to do with sound, we changed the soundtrack
and used a band which I know.
 We also made the film and the voiceover
match up better and improved the quality of
the sound.

9.  On the next few slides are a few comments
on which people gave us after finishing our
final product.
 There are comments from facebook and also
I managed to get some comments from the
band members, who’s music we used.