English Editing Workshop: Making “Good” Better 

1. English Editing Workshop : Making “Good” Better 英文编辑的讲修会 : 使文章“好”上加好 November 2007 by Chad Walker ( 王可杰 ) 理文编辑总编辑

4. Practice Exercise! 练习 Check your knowledge of commonly confused and misused words

19. Be Concis e 简洁 B. Phrases 短语

20. Practice Exercise! 练习 ! When writing science, it’s important to be clear and use as few words as possible 科学写作：表达清晰，使用短句

24. C. Sentences 句子 Short is the Key 简短是关键

39. D. Punctuation 标点符号 Punctuation Has the Power to Completely Change the Meaning of a Sentence 标点可以完全改变句子意思

48. 2. Hyphens, en dash, em dash : Try not to overuse because they can slow down the reader 连字符，一字线，破折号 尽量少用

53. Practice Exercise 练习

60. II. Journal Specific Topics 关于期刊 Practical Activities for Journal Editors and Publishers 期刊编辑与出版商的实际操作

70. Edited Abstract Sample 1 编辑后的摘要 - 例 1

74. Edited Abstract Sample 2 编辑后的摘要 - 例 2

78. Edited Abstract Sample 3 编辑后的摘要 - 例 3

82. Edited Abstract Sample 4 编辑后的摘要 - 例 4

86. Edited Abstract Sample 5 编辑后的摘要 - 例 5

90. Edited Abstract Sample 6 编辑后的摘要 - 例 6

100. III. Using Computers and the Internet 利用电脑和互联网 The Internet has Completely Changed the Way We Edit and Publish Science 互联网彻底改变了科学编辑与出版模式

102. Track Changes Function 修订 Can be accessed from top Menu Bar or Icon (if showing)

104. Accept/Reject your Changes 接受 / 拒绝修订

108. THANK YOU! 谢谢！