4. Maybe another 200 cigarettes
Hot Tip #1: Show would have helped; coughing
would be better than some of this
don’t tell dialogue.
Pearl Harbor is a two-hour movie
squeezed into three hours, about
how on December 7, 1941, the
Japanese staged a surprise attack
on an American love triangle. Its
centerpiece is 40 minutes of
redundant special effects,
surrounded by a love story of
stunning banality. The film has
been directed without grace,
vision, or originality, and
although you may walk out
quoting lines of dialog, it will not
be because you admire them.
10. Hot Tip #4: Use specialized language
when necessary
Cinematographer
Developing shot
Pan Storyboard
Blocking
Mise-en-scene
Fade
Tilt
Crosscut
Jump Cut
11. In your movie reviews, find examples of
descriptions that evoke a positive or
negative connotation. Also, notice how plot
summary is handled.
Make a list of your two best descriptions
from the positive review and your two best
from the negative review.
Be ready to explain why you chose the
examples that you did.
12. Verbs
F R Positive Connotation
Negative Connotation
o e
Adverbs
o v Positive Description
Negative Description
d i
Adjectives
e Positive Description
Negative Description
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14. Example of positive lead:
Inception (PG-13, 148 minutes). An
astonishingly original and inventive
thriller starring Leonardo DiCaprio
as a men who infiltrates the minds
of others to steal secrets. Now he's
hired to implant one.
Roger Ebert
15. “Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen” is a
horrible experience of unbearable length,
briefly punctuated by three or four
amusing moments.
16. Come up with a compelling good (or bad)
lead for this short-short:
http://www.filmsshort.com/short-short-films/