1. Lily Berrisford
A2 COURSEWORK
QUESTION 3

2. What have you learned from Audience
Feedback?

3. Audience Feedback
 I asked people in my class,
teachers and friends to
comment on my blog post
once I had uploaded them.
 This was to ensure I would
improve my work and get
different opinions overall.
 Here I found what I could
have done differently
which made a big impact
on my overall product.

4. Audience Feedback

5. Audience Feedback

6. Audience Feedback

8. Audience Feedback

9. Audience Feedback

10. What I could of improved..
 Change of pose FIRST EDIT SECOND EDIT THIRD EDIT
 Date
 Change of
colour
 Visible text
 No italics

11. Changes
 From the three products on the previous slide, I
clearly altered and changed the product according to
the audience.
 As I was getting feedback from other people, it
wasn’t my personal preference that was important. It
was what the audience wanted and what worked.
 I changed the pose to someone a lot more eye
catching and made the text easy to read.

12. Questionnaire
Out of 40 people; who watched soaps regulary?
Yes
No

13. Questionnaire
Which soap do you prefer to watch?
TOWIE
Made In Chelsea
Hollyoaks
Eastenders

14. Questionnaire
10
9
8
7
6
5
4 YES
3 NO
2
1
0
Did you enjoy Would you Do you feel it It is similar to
Mancunian watch it in the was realistic? other soaps?
Way? future?

15. OVERALL..
 On a whole the audience feedback received was
positive and matched what I was expecting to have as
an outcome.
 I am pleased with the feedback given as it has
improved my products massively.
 I took into account on what my target audience
wanted and matched this with the existing codes and
conventions of other products.