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With the obvious topic, you have nothing
new to say. You paragraph may be dull and
boring.
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3. Make your point in the topic sentence of
your comparison or contrast paragraph.
You should indicate to your reader if your
paragraph is comparing or contrasting.
EX: Dogs are wonderful pets, and they are
better than cats.
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4. Do not announce in the topic sentence.
EX. This paper is about…
I am going to talk about…
Let me tell you about how this is different
from that…
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5. Make sure your topic sentence has a focus.
It should indicate similarities and differences.
EX. FOCUSED
My new home is bigger, brighter, and more
comfortable than my old one.
EX. UNFOCUSED
My old house and my new house are different.
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6. In the topic sentence, cover both subjects to be
compared or contrasted.
Covers only one subject: The beach of Santa
Lucia was dirty and crowded.
Covers both subjects: The beach of Santa
Lucia was dirty and crowded, but the beach at
Fisher Bay was clean and private.
Discuss hints for writing a comparison or contrast paragraph.
Discuss subject-by-subject and point-by-point organization.Share examples of subject-by-subject and point-by-point organization.
Discuss transitions and share INFO Box Information.
Review steps to writing a comparison or contrast paragraph.
As a class, make a list of the differences between cell phones and traditional house phones. Discuss points of contrast and adding details to the points.
As a class, develop a topic sentence for a contrast paragraph about cell phones and traditional house phones.
Model drafting and revising a contrast paragraph about cell phones and traditional house phones.Review the checklist for revising the draft of a contrast paragraph.
Review proofreading a point-by-point and subject-by-subject pattern paragraph.Demonstrate proofreading the contrast paragraph on cell phones and traditional house phones.
Review Lines of Detail, Topics for Writing, and Topics for Critical Thinking and Writing sections.