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Have you reorganized your essay into
the five steps of Monroe’s Motivated
Sequence ?
In the attention step, speakers call attention to the
situation. (The Problem)
For the need step, speakers describe the difficulty,
trouble, distress, crisis, emergency, or urgency. (Its
Seriousness)
In the satisfaction step, speakers tell listeners how to
satisfy the need they establish. (The Solution)
For visualization, speakers offer listeners a vision of
what life can be once their solution (offered in the
satisfaction step) is adopted. (The Promise)
The final stage is the action step when speakers offer
listeners a specific course of action to follow. (Call to
Action: Conclusion)
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Introduction to Speech Writing:
The Art of (Ethical)Persuasion
Three Crucial Motivational Appeals:
Ethos: Establishing
credibility; convincing
through your character, credentials, or
knowledge.
Pathos: Appealing
to emotions, values, and
beliefs.
Logos: Appealing
to reason or logic.
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Ethos (Greek for 'character') refers to the
trustworthiness or credibility of the writer or
speaker. Ethos is often conveyed through tone and
style of the message and through the way the writer
or speaker refers to differing views. It can also be
affected by the writer's reputation as it exists
independently from the message--his or her
expertise in the field, his or her previous record or
integrity, and so forth.
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Ethos
King
was born into a well-educated, successful
family, graduated from Morehouse College, and, as
the outstanding member of his senior class, from
Crozer Theological Seminary. He received his Ph.D.
in philosophy in 1955, and served as minister of the
Dexter Avenue Baptist Church from 1955 to 1968.
His Nobel Peace Prize was received one year after
this speech was given. He is dressed well and is
well-spoken. His demeanor produces trust.
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Pathos (Greek for 'suffering' or 'experience') is
often associated with emotional appeal. But a
better equivalent might be 'appeal to the
audience's sympathies and imagination.' An
appeal to pathos causes an audience not just to
respond emotionally but to identify with the
writer's point of view--to feel what the writer
feels.
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Pathos: King depends on his use of
language to draw emotion from his
listeners. Figures of speech predominate.
Antithesis, or the setting of one clause or other member of
a sentence against another to which it is opposed, is heavily
used. “It came as a joyous daybreak to end their long night
of captivity,” is the first of many examples of antithesis used
in the speech.
Simile is the comparison of two unlike things, connected
with the words “like” or “as” such as “justice rolls down like
waters and righteousness like a mighty stream.”
Metaphor is a compressed simile (the “like” or “as” is
eliminated) and they are abundant: “manacles of
segregation,” “symphony of brotherhood.”
10. Allusions, or references to literary, historical, and biblical
events, occur often. One obvious example is “Five score
years ago,” which refers to the Gettysburg Address.
Personification: the attribution of a personal nature or
character to inanimate objects or abstract notions: “It is
obvious today that America has defaulted on this
promissory note, insofar as her citizens of color are
concerned.”
Hyperbole: obvious and intentional exaggeration: "I have a
dream that one day every valley shall be exalted, and
every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough
places will be made plain, and the crooked places will
be made straight.”
11. Colloquialisms: a word, phrase, or expression characteristic of ordinary
or familiar conversation rather than formal speech or writing: For
example, King uses both "cooling off” and "blow off steam.”
Repetition: repeated word aimed at stimulating thought on a recurring
theme; used to create an 'auditory' stimulus: “freedom” and “dream”
are oft repeated by King.
Anaphora: a poetic device and a repetition device where the same
expression is repeated at the beginning of two or more lines, clauses,
or sentences: “One hundred years later”
Parallelism: occurs when a writer or speaker expresses ideas of equal
worth with the same grammatical form: “With this faith we will be
able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go
to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we
will be free one day.”
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Logos
(Greek for 'word') refers to the internal
consistency of the message--the clarity of the
claim, the logic of its reasons, and the
effectiveness of its supporting evidence. The
impact of logos on an audience is sometimes
called the argument's logical appeal.
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Logos
In
his “I Have a Dream” speech, King often uses his own
personal experience and observations of racism and injustice
to support his major arguments.
He also uses logos in his analogies. When he states,
“America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check
which has come back marked ‘insufficient funds.’” (King)
His analogy is using logic as a form of reasoning. He reasons
is that everyone understands money and that the listener is
able to relate to being handed a bad check.
14. + In Groups, look for examples of rhetorical
strategies in King’s Speech
Antithesis: the setting of one
clause against another to which it
is opposed.
Simile is the comparison of two
unlike things, connected with the
words “like” or “as.”
Metaphor is a compressed simile
(the “like” or “as” is eliminated).
Examples: Both general and
specific references that people
will understand.
Anaphora: a repetition device
where the same expression is
repeated at the beginning of
two or more lines, clauses, or
sentences.
Repetition: repeated word
aimed at stimulating thought
on a recurring theme.
Parallelism: a writer or
speaker expresses ideas of
equal worth with the same
grammatical form
Allusions:
references
to
literary, historical, and biblical
events
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Antithesis
“joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity”
[paragraph 2]
“the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a
vast ocean of material prosperity” [3]
“rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the
sunlit path of racial justice” [6]
“This sweltering summer of the Negro’s legitimate discontent
will not pass until there is an invigorating autumn of freedom
and equality.” [7]
“sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into
an oasis of freedom and justice.” [19]
Metaphor and simile
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Metaphor
“battered by the storms of
persecution”
“staggered by the winds of
police brutality."
"The whirlwinds of revolt”
“beautiful symphony of
brotherhood.”
“signing a promissory
note”
“bad check”
Simile
Examples
"No, no, we are not satisfied, and
we will not be satisfied until
'justice rolls down like waters, and
righteousness like a mighty
stream.'"
the Emancipation Proclamation
came “as a joyous daybreak”
18. + Specific Examples
Mississippi, New York
[paragraph 13]
Mississippi, Alabama, South
Carolina, Georgia, Louisiana [14]
Georgia [18]
Mississippi [19]
Alabama [22]
New Hampshire [32], New York
[33], Pennsylvania [34],
Colorado [35], California [36],
Georgia [37], Tennessee [38],
Mississippi [39]
General Examples
“slums
and ghettos of
our northern cities”
[paragraph 14]
“the
South” [25]
“From
every
mountainside” [40]
“from
every village and
every hamlet” [41]
Anaphora
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ANAPHORA
“One hundred years later…” [paragraph 3]
“Now is the time…” [paragraph 6]
“We must…” [paragraph 8]
“We can never (cannot) be satisfied…” [paragraph 13]
“Go back to…” [paragraph 14]
“I Have a Dream…” [paragraphs 16 through 24]
“With this faith, …” [paragraph 26]
“Let freedom ring (from) …” [paragraphs 27 through 41]
Repetition
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Repetition
freedom (20 times)
we (30 times), our (17 times), you (8 times)
nation (10 times), America (5 times), American
(4 times)
justice (8 times) and injustice (3 times)
dream (11 times)
Parallelism
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Parallelism
“Go
back to Mississippi, go back to
Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go
back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana.”
“from
every village and every hamlet,
from every state and every city”
“all
of God’s children,” no matter if they
are “black men and white men, Jews and
Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics”
Allusion
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ALLUSION
“Five score years ago…” [paragraph 2] refers to Lincoln’s famous Gettysburg
Address speech which began “Four score and seven years ago…” This
allusion is particularly poignant given that King was speaking in front of the
Lincoln Memorial.
“Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness” [and the rest of paragraph 4] is a
reference to the United States Declaration of Independence.
Numerous Biblical allusions provide the moral basis for King’s arguments: “It
came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.” [paragraph
2] alludes to Psalms 30:5 “For his anger is but for a moment; his favor is for a
lifetime. Weeping may linger for the night, but joy comes with the morning.“
“Let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of
bitterness and hatred.” [paragraph 8] evokes Jeremiah 2:13 “for my people
have committed two evils: they have forsaken me, the fountain of living water,
and dug out cisterns for themselves, cracked cisterns that can hold no water.“
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In-Class Writing
Work
to integrate these multiple
rhetorical strategies into your speech.
Antithesis
Metaphor/Simile
Examples
Anaphora
Repetition
Parallelism
Allusion
24. +
Speeches
Speeches begin class 22
and end class 23. Everyone
should be prepared to go
first. Everyone must show
up on both days to get full
credit for a speech. Failing
to show up on one day will
result in a full grade
penalty.
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Homework
Write,
revise, or refine your speech.
Use the list of strategies to generate several ideas for your
own speech.
Read:
Bring
SMG "Oral Presentations” 835
a final hard copy of your speech to class on Monday.
Remember,
you must attend class both speech days to get full
credit for your work.