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Title, feedback (peer
evaluation) and strapline
By: jamuna vasanthakumaran
By: Jamuna vasanthakumaran
                                                                                          The “hip hop


                                   The Title
                                                                                          world” on the title
The title is called
                                                                                          makes sure what
HHW, which stands
                                                                                          the HHW stands
for the hip hop
                                                                                          for so the
world, this title was
                                                                                          audience are sure
chosen to link to the
                                                                                          about what the
genre and It would
                                                                                          title actually
be easier for the
                                                                                          means.
target audience to
                                                                                          Also the way that
realise the genre of
                                                                                          is another colour
the magazine.
                                                                                          make it stand out
                                                                                          and gives the idea
                                                                                          the colour links in
Photoshop has been                                                                        with my
used to create the
font of the title
For the HHW- I
used two different
colours black,
blended with grey
to give high quality
and shiny look to
the title which can
stand of from the
rest of the text and
also from the image
that I am going to                                   The chain is used instead of a line I though to
be using.               The technical skills is on   make the title more interesting and added the
                        average level of 3, that     chain instead of a plan line. This makes It
                        shows that it needs to       different from other and gives quality finish.
                        work on some technical
                        things on to my title        Moreover it also links with the idea of hip hop
                                                     type of magazine
The things that I did very
well on includes the way that
                                    The feedback (peer                                     Last of all I need to
                                                                                           make sure that the

                                    evaluation)
my title links in with the idea                                                            title have a high
of the genre that I am doing                                                               degree of finish,
as it shows briefly my                                                                     need some
magazine was made to be                                                                    improvement on
the hip hop genre.                                                                         this part of making
                                                                                           the main title for
This idea went very well as                                                                the music
my results from peer                                                                       magazine. As this
evolution and 9 people have                                                                is the main part of
given a mark of 3-5 shows                                                                  finishing the title I
that it really worked out of                                                               need to make sure
giving the audience what                                                                   that others for
type of genre.                                                                             example, need to
                                                                                           make sure it links
                                                                                           to genre, include
The technical skills is on                                                                 technical skills etc.
average level of 3, that                                                                   In order to
shows that it needs to                                                                     complete the whole
work on some technical                                                                     title.
things on to my title
                                                                                           As the results of
                                                                                           this show around 3
                                                                                           and 2, maybe a
                                                                                           little of
I think my title has some creativity works and lots
                                                                                           improvement to the
of imagination added in to the work, as the chain
                                                      I think I might needs some           magazine title will
shows that I have used my imagination to add
                                                      improvement to the way that          give a high degree
that to my title to make it stand out and also to
                                                      that the title uses the media        of finish.
make it different to others.
                                                      language as the result is about
                                                      4,3 and 2 so I think the it can be
This is also mostly rated about 4 and 3 but I also
                                                      improved and I should give a
think that some people think is good if I add more
                                                      appropriate media language to
to the title and improve on it too.
                                                      my title.
Strapline




    •   Think once, think twice, think hip hop
    •   It’s how hip hop is done…
    •   This is how we do it
    •   We don’t make hip hop, we just make it better
    •   You like hip hop, hip hop likes you

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Feedback on the title

  • 1. Title, feedback (peer evaluation) and strapline By: jamuna vasanthakumaran
  • 2. By: Jamuna vasanthakumaran The “hip hop The Title world” on the title The title is called makes sure what HHW, which stands the HHW stands for the hip hop for so the world, this title was audience are sure chosen to link to the about what the genre and It would title actually be easier for the means. target audience to Also the way that realise the genre of is another colour the magazine. make it stand out and gives the idea the colour links in Photoshop has been with my used to create the font of the title For the HHW- I used two different colours black, blended with grey to give high quality and shiny look to the title which can stand of from the rest of the text and also from the image that I am going to The chain is used instead of a line I though to be using. The technical skills is on make the title more interesting and added the average level of 3, that chain instead of a plan line. This makes It shows that it needs to different from other and gives quality finish. work on some technical things on to my title Moreover it also links with the idea of hip hop type of magazine
  • 3. The things that I did very well on includes the way that The feedback (peer Last of all I need to make sure that the evaluation) my title links in with the idea title have a high of the genre that I am doing degree of finish, as it shows briefly my need some magazine was made to be improvement on the hip hop genre. this part of making the main title for This idea went very well as the music my results from peer magazine. As this evolution and 9 people have is the main part of given a mark of 3-5 shows finishing the title I that it really worked out of need to make sure giving the audience what that others for type of genre. example, need to make sure it links to genre, include The technical skills is on technical skills etc. average level of 3, that In order to shows that it needs to complete the whole work on some technical title. things on to my title As the results of this show around 3 and 2, maybe a little of I think my title has some creativity works and lots improvement to the of imagination added in to the work, as the chain I think I might needs some magazine title will shows that I have used my imagination to add improvement to the way that give a high degree that to my title to make it stand out and also to that the title uses the media of finish. make it different to others. language as the result is about 4,3 and 2 so I think the it can be This is also mostly rated about 4 and 3 but I also improved and I should give a think that some people think is good if I add more appropriate media language to to the title and improve on it too. my title.
  • 4. Strapline • Think once, think twice, think hip hop • It’s how hip hop is done… • This is how we do it • We don’t make hip hop, we just make it better • You like hip hop, hip hop likes you