english project

1. ESSAY ORGANIZER Submit by Email Print Form
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Your Name Halle Hinkle
Your Topic Why Misty May Treanor and Kerri Walsh are the greatest
beach volleyball team ever.
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Thesis Statement
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I believe that... Misty May Treanor and Kerri Walsh are the greatest women's beach volleyball team ever.
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Your Subtopics
Topic Topic Topic
College Careers AVP Olympics
1 2 3
Are your topics different?
Are your topics interesting?
By discussing these topics, will you be able to prove your thesis true?

2. Topic 1 College Careers
What is a good sentence to
Misty May and Kerri Walsh dominated on the indoor court long before they step
introduce this topic to your
foot on the sand.
reader?
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Support #1
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Support #2
Source
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Support #3
Source
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What is a good sentence to
transition into the next
paragraph? Transition word help
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Is the information arranged from less important to most important?
Does every sentence help support your topic?
Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis?
Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?

3. Topic 2
What is a good sentence to
introduce this topic to your
reader?
Is your language at a high-level?
Support #1
Source
Is your language at a high-level?
Support #2
Source
Is your language at a high-level?
Support #3
Source
Is your language at a high-level?
What is a good sentence to
transition into the next
paragraph? Transition word help
Is your language at a high-level?
QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST
Is the information arranged from less important to most important?
Does every sentence help support your topic?
Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis?
Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?

4. Topic 3
What is a good sentence to
introduce this topic to your
reader?
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Support #1
Source
Is your language at a high-level?
Support #2
Source
Is your language at a high-level?
Support #3
Source
Is your language at a high-level?
QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST
Is the information arranged from less important to most important?
Does every sentence help support your topic?
Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis?
Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?

5. Introduction Paragraph
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Ask yourself
How can I get my reader's attention?
Imagine your reader knows nothing about your topic. What background information could I give my reader about my
topic?
Why should the reader care to know this information?
What is it you are trying to prove?
Attention Getter
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What was your attention getter? A Question A Quick Story An Interesting Fact A Quote
A Shocking Statistic An Unusual Statement Other
Background Information
- Introduce your topic, but not
your thesis
- Provide insider details that
would help your reader better
understand your topic, but not
information you are discussing in
your support.
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Why should your reader care?
Complete this sentence..
It is important that you read
this essay because...
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Thesis Statement
(paste the one you already
wrote on page 1)
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Did you avoid referring to yourself or your reader directly?
Would you want to read your paper after reading your introduction?

6. Conclusion Paragraph
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A conclusion should...
Include a brief summary of the paper's main points. Evoke a vivid image
Suggest results or consequences Wrap it all up for your reader
Leave a lasting impression
Restate your thesis in
a fresh, new way
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Summarize /
Reflect / Give Final
thoughts on Topic 1
Is your language at a high-level? Did you summarize AND provide a final thought?
Summarize /
Reflect / Give Final
thoughts on Topic 2
Is your language at a high-level? Did you summarize AND provide a final thought?
Summarize /
Reflect / Give Final
thoughts on Topic 3
Is your language at a high-level? Did you summarize AND provide a final thought?
Final Thought
-Contains vivid language
-Compound or Complex sentence
-Leave a lasting impression
-Sums up your essay in one
incredible sentence
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QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST
Did you avoid referring to yourself or your reader directly?
Did you feel your conclusion leaves the reader satisfied and impressed?

7. BIBLIOGRAPHY
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-MLA Format
Citations
in
Alphabetical
Order
Paragraph Organization- Read to see where your sentences go in your essay.
Paragraph 1- Introduction Paragraph 3 - Body Paragraph 2 Paragraph 5 - Conclusion
- Attention Getter - Topic Introduction - Thesis Restatement
- Background Information - Support 1 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 1
- Why should we care sentence - Support 2 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 2
- Thesis Statement - Support 3 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 3
- Transition - Strong Final Thought
Paragraph 2 - Body Paragraph 1
Paragraph 4 - Body Paragraph 3 Final page - Bibliography
- Topic Introduction - On a new page
- Support 1 - Topic Introduction - Titled - Bibliography
- Support 2 - Support 1 - Use citations created from Easybib
- Support 3 - Support 2 - MLA Format
- Transition - Support 3 - Alphabetized
Before you submit checklist
Is your paper in Time New Roman font? Do you proofread at least 3 times?
Do you use 12 pt font? Has someone other than you read this paper?
Do you use double space? Did I put everything in my own words to avoid plagiarism?
Do I spell everything correctly? Have I done my best?
Did I check all punctuation and capitalization?
Did I rid my essay of unnecessary qualifiers like "Really" "Just" "Sort of" "Like" and "So"
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