The document discusses the 6 traits of quality descriptive writing: ideas, organization, word choice, sentence fluency, voice, and conventions. It provides guidance on how to effectively employ each trait when writing descriptively, such as using vivid details, strong verbs, varied sentences, and an engaging voice. The goal of descriptive writing is to show experiences through imagery that engages the reader's senses rather than just telling about them.
2. The 6 Traits of Writing
A great piece of writing has all of these important
traits:
*Ideas
*Organization
*Word Choice
*Sentence Fluency
*Voice
*Conventions
3. Ideas & Content
“The ideas are the heart of the message, the content of the
piece…all the details that enrich and develop the theme.”
--Northwest Regional Educational Laboratory
4. Ideas & Content
A writer should:
~ Narrow the topic to something specific
~ Use a fresh, original perspective
~ When possible, write from experience
~ Use important, interesting details
(not just common knowledge)
5. Organization
“Organization is the internal structure of a piece of writing, the
thread of central meaning, the pattern.”
A writer should:
~ use an inviting lead that hooks the reader
~ use logical and effective order, structure, & sequence
~ use smooth transitions to emphasize main idea
~ place supporting details where they are most
appropriate
~ use a conclusion that gives the reader a sense of
resolution (clincher)
6. Word Choice
“Strong word choice clarifies and expands ideas…moves and
enlightens the reader.”
--Northwest Regional Educational Laboratory
“Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of
light on broken glass.”
--Anton Chekhov
7. Word Choice
A writer should:
~ Use words that create a mental picture for the
reader
~ Use powerful action verbs (vivid verbs)
~ Use specific nouns and adjectives
~ Use language that is natural and not overdone
~ Be concise (tighten sentences)
~ Use words correctly
~ Avoid repetition, slang, and clichés
8. Sentence Fluency
“Sentence fluency is the rhythm and flow of the
language.”
--Northwest Regional Educational Laboratory
“To me the greatest pleasure of writing is not what
it’s about, but the music the words make.”
--Truman Capote
9. Sentence Fluency
A writer should:
~Vary sentence beginning, structure, and length
~ Use complete sentences
~ Use transitions (internal & external) to promote
cadence
10. Voice
“It is the heart and soul of the writing, the magic, the wit, the
feeling, the life and breath.”
--Northwest Regional Educational Laboratory
A writer should:
~ Write honestly and from the heart
~ Interact with the reader
* without using YOU
~ Use language that brings the topic to life
~ Care about topic
~ Use expression to voice personality
12. Conventions
Some of you may not enjoy the editing process, but
without this step, the other 5 traits could be
overshadowed by errors that distract the reader.
This trait is essential to a polished composition.
A writer should:
~ Turn in a clean, edited, and polished final draft
~ Reinforce the organization with good
paragraphing
~ Use correct punctuation, spelling, and grammar
14. What is Descriptive Writing?
Descriptive writing paints a picture for the reader.
Let the reader share your experience through your
words. Show it! Don’t tell it!
Use imagery that appeal to the 5 senses:
Imagery: The use
Touch of vivid
Taste description to
create
Smell pictures, or
Sound images, in the
reader’s mind.
Sight
15. How do I Make it Great?
Be specific! Give specific details. Expand your
ideas!
Be original and creative! Don’t use clichés.
Stretch your imagination!
Use figurative language to make strong
comparisons
(similes, metaphors, personification).
Use sensory details that appeal to the 5 senses.
16. For Example:
Instead of this:
The hot, yellow sun went behind the mountain and
covered the valley in red.
Try this:
The sun cut itself on a sharp peak and bled into the
valley.—John Steinbeck
17. Pay Attention to Your Words!
Use strong, specific nouns
Premodify nouns with strong adjectives (big, bad
wolf, dazzling smile, antique gilded mirror)
Use vivid verbs!
18. Pre-modified
nouns
Generally exciting
vocabulary, mostly
relating to
riches, elegance and
sophistication
Exciting verb
choices; some
personification
19. Try it!
You will each be given a piece of chocolate. Enjoy
it, and then write your own description of it.
Adjective ideas: rich, decadent, divine, creamy
Verb ideas: draped, swathed, enveloped
20. Read Some Examples
“Dark shapes glide through the night sky on
silent wings, their sinister shadows outlined
against the light of a full moon. Swooping
down to the earth, they hover near houses and
deserted buildings, breaking the peace of the
night with their disturbing presence. Carriers
of disease, drinkers of blood, companions of
witches and demons, bats – the very word
brings a shiver of fear to most people.”
~ Sylvia A. Johnson, Bats
21. A Description of the Wind
“Anybody could see how cold it got. The wind already
had glass edges to it, stiffening muscles and
practically cutting through the stitches of our clothes.
When it blew, the chill stabbed our teeth like
icicles, and our voices jiggled every time we talked.”
From Parrot in the Oven: Mi Vida
by Victor Martinez
22. Your Assignment
Think of a strong memory. It may be an
embarrassing moment, an exciting moment, or
maybe a memorable moment. Write a descriptive
paragraph that details this memory. Write in 1st
person point of view and present tense as if you
are experiencing this memory again as you write
it.
23. Example
Salty tears stream down my cheeks as I listen to the
outraged cries of my new daughter. Everything
else in the room ceases to exist as my eyes focus
on the wiggling pink bundle in the doctor’s arms.
She stops crying as I timidly approach her, her
suddenly solemn eyes seeking to answer the
question of my identity. Blue eyes. Her eyes are
the kind of blue that happens when the deepest
ocean meets the endless sky. Those are my eyes, I
notice with astonishment….
