1. Opening scene : Two mates sat on the steps
in college in an LS to set the scene then edits
to a mid shot of talking about a girl with their
phones out
2. James (in a over the
shoulder mid shot)
talking to Dan about
a girl he's just text on
the stairs in college .
James : woah woah woah big man give her a minute?
3. Dan (in ms shot) then
James takes his
phone out of his
hand(edits back to
James sat on the step
in MS)
Dan: what?
4. James in a mid shout
still sat against the
wall (gives Dan his
phone back)
James: give her a minute she will hardly have the
time to enjoy the tears yeahh
5. (looks at his phone in MS shot)
Dan: what tears
(James in MS shot trying to act
cool and comfort Dan)
James: Good tears as in tears in love tears
6. (looks at his phone in MS shot)
Dan: what tears
(James in MS shot trying to act
cool and comfort Dan)
James: Good tears as in tears in love tears
7. (smiles then looks back at phone
in Ms shot )
Dan: wish I’d never done it man
(James in MS starts laughing
at Dan’s doubt in texting )
James: aww why?
8. (Dan starts to regret sending the
text with a worried expression on
his face Ms shot )
Dan: because
James: you like her don’t you ?
9. (Dan starts to regret sending the
text with a worried expression on
his face Ms shot )
Dan: yeahh obviously
James: well you aint got some
else on the go have you
10. Dan: what? No No No no way mate
nahh (waves his to ensure his mate
theres no one else) OS mid shot
Dan: yeahh obviously
James: No no no gonna be
negative on me all day