A50

1. Revised planning for final draft
Tom, Will, Josh, Ollie

2. Things we changed
• Will ( the Victim ) shirt changed - from a bright multicoloured shirt to a more basic
white shirt
• Framing of flashbacks – in the 2nd draft we realised that the face especially the
eyes didn't match from the bus stop scene and the initiation of the flashback
which led to a continuity error and wasn't clear that it was a flashback
• Toilet scene – initially had Will being mocked by 2 students taking pictures but this
was changed to a more physical bullying by the main bully by being dragged into
the toilet and then walking out with blood over his face looking into the mirror
• Addition of more POV – we decided to add more camera angles especially POV of
Wills emotions and also at the kill scene to exploit the facial expressions of Will
and Josh
• Stabbing scene – initially we had Josh being slashed by Will but in the final draft
we had Josh being stabbed with the same knife but used another knife in addition
to be place underneath of the shirt which had the blade taken off so all that
remained was the handle attached to a belt. We strapped it around Josh's trunk so
once the initial stab has happened the shot cut to an over the shoulder where we
attached the belt so that it looked as real as possible. The shot would then cut to a
POV from the angle of the knife where the weapon would be resting against the
side of Josh's trunk without the belt for Will to Pull away.
• Camera shots - added more camera shots and angles such as panning when Josh
is running which us to set the scene