1. John Valor’s Journal:
A Patriot of the American
Revolution

2. March 5th 1770
The Boston Massacre
The sketch of the Boston Massacre
made by Paul Revere
A depiction of my family during my
childhood years

3. March 5th 1770
You cursed scoundrel Lobster Backs! Demon hearted Red Coats! You
should all die in the gallows for the Boston Massacre and for killing
my younger brother! To hell with you fools! He was only 15 years old!
You wrung your demonized bayonets through his heart without
mercy! You also fired upon my father, the commander who saved your
arses from the French and Indians in the 7 years war by giving you
food and ammo provisions! Without it, you’d have lost the war or
would have died of starvation or disease! He gave a letter to the
British Parliament yesterday notifying them this protest would require
no violence, yet those stupid British fired upon my father. Do you
have any thankfulness in your hearts at least to not fire upon the man
who saved your life! I’m now without a family! Why in the name of
God you dare fire upon unarmed citizens during a peaceful protest? It
would make sense if they were armed!

4. Paul Revere was asked to make of eyewitness sketch of the Boston
Massacre and to post it into the colonial press. It showed British firing
upon protesting colonists, all unarmed. It even showed the British
advancing into the crowd with foot forward, to shoot the life our of
even single innocent colonist soul. And most noticeably, they were
firing in line all together, smiling with pride. It was just a peaceful
protest you Red Coat idiots! We just wanted to complain that the
Stamp and Sugar and what do the British say in reply, “We were
defending ourselves. It was just a act of self-defense!” Wrong! What you
British did was you fricking line up, aim your rifles, and then your
commander lifts his sabre and orders “fire!” right in front of unarmed
British colonists?! You consider firing upon unarmed colonists while
smiling like a lunatic is right before God? You minds are like a snail,
sluggish and retarded! Like Revere said, you will be brought to a judge
who can’t be bribed… But what brought this horrid event into my life
along with my fellow Bostonian colonists? Well let me explain…

5. Ok, now to end with my rage matters… It all started with the Stamp act
and Sugar act. The Stamp act taxed us on paper, letters, and stamps, while
the Sugar act taxed us on anything sugar related. I heard it was for paying
the debt of the French-Indian war, which does makes sense since Britain is
in huge debt. But the thing is, believe or not, I would pay the tax if one
the taxes weren’t so high, especially if it weren’t only implied on us
colonists! This is truly taxation without representation! It would at least
make the slightest sense if they also taxed British living in the mainland
country and if we at least we had some representation if we wanted to be
taxed or not! No colonial delegations were asked to voice their opinions!
Are we your slaves? We colonists are also in debt! It’s common sense to
not make the taxes so high, and to tax only you colony! What is with those
“delegations” of Parliament? I, John Valor am not your property nor slave!
Tyrant is King George III! We will get our revenge… just wait and see…

6. July 4th 1776
The Declaration of Independence
The new paper version of the
Declaration of Independence drafted by
Thomas Jefferson
The first Continental Congress

7. July 4th 1776
After the public outrage of the Boston Massacre, the colonists, specifically Bostonians
were quite furious at the British and I bet they wanted to get some payback, which
indeed the colonists rightly deserved! During the middle of just any old regular day,
Samuel Adams started recruiting random Bostonians like me to some secret
organization that was designed as an act of retaliation against the British, to retrieve
the what was rightfully ours, it was the Sons of Liberty. We met one night at the
Boston Harbor, right in front of a couple British merchant ships carrying tea. Still
infuriated about the Sugar and Stamp act, also the recent Tea act, taxing us on tea,
we decided aggression was needed. Dressed up as a Mohawk Indian, I with my fellow
Sons of Liberty stormed the ships like a stampede of infuriated wildebeests with axe
and club in hand, and threw otherwise “trampled” all the British merchants guarding
them overboard. I with my fellow friends hacked open at ever single box containing
on that ship and chucked them all into the harbor waters without hesitation and we
gave a roar of triumph. Just a few minutes into the practice, the entire port was
emptied of its British contamination. Looks like this more “less peaceful” protest
finally got what we wanted. The Tea act, along with the Sugar and Stamp act, we’re
repealed and it was a huge celebration, but then the British retaliate… we celebrated
too soon.

8. Then came the Intolerable acts. Just as the name says, it was intolerable. Those idiots took
taxation without representation to a whole new level. They re-enabled all those taxes such as
the Sugar, Stamp, and Tea act, along with a brand new armada of unreasonable taxes and
forced us to pay them! Some people who refused to pay were even killed! So now, the British
parliament and King George III are now even murdering the colonists for not paying their so
called “reasonable” taxes!
Soon after, the Continental Congress has considered for independence! The Continental
Congress composed of delegations from different countries. In this case, delegates from all
colonies except Georgia met to address on how we colonists should address the problem we
had at hand. Many distinguished people such as Benjamin Franklin, Paul Revere, John
Hancock, Thomas Jefferson, John Adams, and many others came all together at the
Pennsylvania for the creation of the Declaration of Independence. However, the Congress was
divided. Some delegates didn’t want to vote for independence at all such as John Dickinson
along with a few southern colonist delegates voted against because they weren’t “directly
affected” by the Intolerable Acts. You idiots! Do you not care about the lives lost in the Boston
Massacre?! But finally on July 2nd 1776, votes were made, and the declaration was passed.
However, it wasn’t drafted yet.
Thomas Jefferson, usually quiet, but a very renowned writer drafted the Declaration of
Independence. The Declaration of Independence not only insisted on independence from
Britain, it also demanded for a new government. One clause of the declaration stated, “We
hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by
their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the
pursuit of Happiness.” The British monarchy system refused these rights, the rights that all
men deserve! All of man are born equal! And for that exact reason, the colonies shall be our
own rightful country and are not afraid to fight for that cause!

9. Oct. 30 1777
Battle of Lexington-Saratoga
Where General Burgoyne surrendered
to our army.
My first day in the Continental Army…

10. Oct 30th 1777
So much life has been shed and lost during the year of 1776-1777. The Battle of Bunker and
Breeds Hill, Battle at Lexington and Concord, and now the Battle of Saratoga. I’ve been
promoted to lieutenant commander. My fellow colonists have been murdered, killed… those
blood covered Lobster Backs and Hessians, both of them, demons assigned from Hell! What a
coward King George is, he needs mercenaries from Germany to do his work!
Saratoga was our key victory, one after so many lost battles because before, everything wasn’t
going to plan. During Lexington, we Patriots were stock-pilling a trainload of weapons in
Concord. Soon after, spies received word that General Gage, a plans to attack with his full
army on the stockpile, and to “confiscate” all our weaponry. Revere, Dawes, and Prescott soon
went warning the militia of the assault. Gage sent patrols to stop them, but soon messenger
spread to messenger, all franticly hollering “THE BRITISH ARE COMING!” Revere was
intercepted by a patrol, however the rest of the messengers escaped. My minutemen marched
forward, being heavily outnumbered, retreated into the woods. After they got into Concord,
Colonel Barrett commanded our units cut them off once more reinforcement militia arrived.
The British knew of the plan and hurried back. Using guerrilla warfare, we ambushed day
and night, however General Percy came to their aid, broke our lines, and got the British
troops to safety with most of our stockpile…
Bunker Hill was just pure Hell. After setting up forts on Bunker and Breeds hill under the
command of Major General Putnam, that damned British warship HMS Lively spotted us and
fired its cannons giving our position. The rest of the British battleship armada cut off
reinforcements, and soon British and Hessians came charging forward towards our forts. We
put up a good fight, and the British earned theirself’s one thousand casualties. Either way, we
had to abandon the forts due to our lack of reinforcements and the fear of getting
surrounded.

11. Saratoga like I said was the key victory to the war, our first and most important
victory in months. I then was under command of General Schuyler. We heard
the British were trying to capture Fort Ticonderoga. Well, they did, however it
was Schuyler plan do give up to fort after the siege… so during the cover of night
we retreated. For that Schuyler was deported of command. Now under orders
from General Gates we retreated to the fort at Bemis heights. Burgoyne decided
to attack the fort with a very useless tactic. Marching his troops straightforward
into our fortifications? One dies another replaces the fallen solder’s place on the
front line? You're troops were flushed out like sand in a sieve! Poor, Morgan and
Learned and I all joined troops soon overpowered and outnumbered the Red
Coats. However, Arnold with no official command rushed forward into battle,
and broke the British line. Heroic, but reckless like playing chicken on train
tracks… The British then made a last-resort retreat. We surrounded them before
they got far though. Burgoyne finally surrendered.
There was a huge cost for our victory. Dozens of Patriot solders lied on the floor
in crimson red blood, dead… There was air so thick with death I could cut
thought it with my sabre! May their souls rest in peace…
We soon won French assistance. France lost to the British in the French-Indian
war to the British, therefore we had a common enemy! The enemy of my enemy
is my friend! But what held them back? They thought British were invincible.
Heck! Nothing is invincible!.. I must stop writing now, the final battle awaits…

12. Sep. 5th 1783
The Surrender of Yorktown/Treaty of
Paris
Where Treaty of Paris negotiations
took place
The British Surrender at Yorktown

13. September 5th 1783
Leave our country now or have your shells ripped off you Lobster Backs! The 13 colonies of Britain,
now the 13 States of America! I’m so lucky to have lived through war, now with a family, 2 children.
Around 7200 fellow Americans, graciously laid down their lives for the independence of our
people. I’ve finally heard news of the Treaty of Paris, the agreement between Britain and America
that the 13 colonies are now independent from Britain. We are now “officially independent” from
Britain! No more taxation-without-representation, death, Red Coats… Drawbacks are, Congress has
to make a new country. This isn’t going to be easy, but to first give a plotline summary of what
brought the war to this treaty.
24 hours after the Battle of Saratoga, the French finally came to our aid. Lafayette, along with
Rochambeau, both distinguished army commander came along with a couple of French military
units. They gave us food, ammo, and military training. Without their help, my minutemen would
have been killed by now due to the winter cold, starvation, or lack of training! I give them my
greatest thanks.
The Battle of Yorktown, the final battle. The fake scheme of the Patriots and French attacking
New York succeeded! We got more than have the British troops away from the British fort! Their
Southern Campaign plan is compromised! During the meeting on how to attack British held
Yorktown and we knew the British didn’t have endurance. So then, we decided to exploit their
weakness.

14. We snuck up upon the British fort at night while their troops were still recovering from
battle fatigue and were fast asleep. General Washington, head general of the Continental
army, today decided to join the battlefield. He ordered us to build trenches surrounding
the fort at a safe distance. These trenches proved very effective! When we had to reload,
we just needed to crouch down in the cover, unlike when we had to reload right in front
of our enemies’ faces, and to have no fear of getting shot during the process! The tactic
was named trench warfare. Soon after, Boom… Boom… Boom! French fired their 24
bore cannons at the Lobster Backs, shelling it till the fort was literally “shell shocked" in
fear. We dug trenches closer and closer and eventually at night we got so close to the fort
I could see the shrapnel lodged into the fort redoubt. We took the opportunity, and got
ready to fire, though Washington then gave the order, “Use your bayonets, only!”. I
understood. This attack must be in silence in order to not attract any attention from the
main fort. I snatched my bayonet, and attached it to my rifle muzzle. I charged in with my
fellow colonists and thrust my bayonet into every Red Coat in reach in the fort redoubt.
Lord Cornwallis, British General in charge of the Yorktown fort gave a retreat sign and
we pursed. The French Navy came to our assistance and cut off access to the sea for the
British. We soon surrounded them The entire British army surrender once and for all.
I must now attend the funeral of my fellow allies who lost their lives in this war, and to
award all those patriots who charged into the fort redoubts with just bayonets, the Purple
Heart. May all you fallen patriots be remembered as the best and true men of America. I
also later have to meet with fellow Continental Congress delegates on the making of the
new government of America, hope it all goes well.

15. March 4th, 1789
The US Constitution
A black and white painting of our
beloved leader, Father of America,
George Washington
A sketch of Shay’s rebellion from
the colonial newspaper, closing
down a courthouse, before gunfire
exchanged.

16. March 4th 1789
The Articles of Confederation, useless! What was John Dickinson thinking while he was creating this crap! Is he trying
to bring us into the ground? Only after six years since that Treaty of Paris America has a government system appreciated
by the people, the United States Constitution. I delegation of Boston from Congress shall give a short story of what
happened during these six dreaded years…
After the Treaty of Paris, the Continental Congress hosted a convention on creating the new government, which the
result was the Articles. The Articles were like an apple with a worm in it, looks good to eat until the unacceptable flaw
pops out. There was only one branch of government at the time, which was Congress. The Congress could make laws,
but had no power to enforce them in the states, therefore rendering it useless. All of its decisions depended on the
cooperation of the 13 states. Another worm to add to the apple is that the Congress couldn’t control tax. Every state
could make its own rules on taxes so taxes would vary state to state.
Tensions got high, and soon there was act of treason against the Articles of Confederation, Shays’ rebellion. Farmer
from Massachusetts, served in the Continental Army for our independence against Britain, a great friend, however I’ve
never seen him angry like this. He explained to me soon after by letter. He told that the Massachusetts government was
in extreme debt and needed money, and I couldn’t believe what they resorted too, the exact same thing the British did
to us, taxation without representation. Soon everyone, specifically farmers like him were in extreme debt from the
unreasonable amount of taxes, and soon like they did with the Sugar and Stamp acts, rebellion. Shays recruited around
3000 solders from the Continental Army, and stormed into the Courthouses, demanding their taxes be lifted or
shortened. I joined Shays by sending letters to Congress that the government has to be abolished and a new one should
be made in its place and by secretly giving Shays rifles and ammo just in case a fight would break out, and it did. The
rebels closed down a court, however, loyal Continental Army men fired upon them, just like what happened during the
Boston Massacre, however gunfire exchanged from both sides. An act of treason yes, but for a good cause! The
government finally decided to create a new government in the Article’s place, the rebellion was put down, and many
went to prison.

17. James Madison soon came up with a solution at Constitution
Convention. Combining all the advantages of many different governments
from past to present, he combined them all to create the perfect system of
government, the US Constitution. Now, there were three branches of
government: Judicial, Legislative, and Executive. The Judicial branch is
the Supreme Court consisting of judges who judges the laws, the
Legislative Branch consisting of representatives from the states makes laws
otherwise know as congress, and the Executive Branch, consisting of the
President and his Cabinet makes sure the laws are executed. Making sure
one branch of the three doesn’t have complete power over the other
branches, checks and balances were created. The President can veto laws
made by the Congress and appoint judges, however Congress can override
by two-thirds majority and can impeach the President. The Court judges
the law if it goes against the rights of the Constitution, however Congress
can impeach the Judges.
I now must attend George Washington’s presidential ceremony... Hope
I’ll have more journal entries to write soon after, hope the skirmish of
slavery doesn’t go bad… May God bless America!

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