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Practical Haiku
How a tiny, ancient form of poetry can make your life
better by making you more creative, a better writer,
happier, nicer to be around, more productive, sexier …
Everybody knows how to
write haiku, right?
5   Haiku are easy
7   But sometimes they don’t make sense
5   Refrigerator

          Rolf Nelson, threadless.com
Actually, it’s not
so simple
There’s a lot more to haiku than counting
syllables.


On a withered bough               on a bare branch
A crow alone is perching;         a crow lands
Autumn evening now.               autumn dusk
     Basho, tr. Kenneth Yasuda          Basho, tr. Jane Reichhold
But it’s a lot more
fun!

   sudden downpour –
   no one wins
   the wet-t-shirt contest

           David Giacalone
How haiku helps you live
better
Haiku helps you write more precisely


                       home addition–
                       the carpenter's math
                       penciled on drywall

                           Barry George
Photo: GregHickman




Haiku helps you
see
The message that precedes all others -- in art as
well as life -- is simple: pay attention
          Harlan Ellison
Haiku teaches patience…
Because you can’t always go out and make a haiku, you often have
to wait for one to come to you.
Haiku helps you appreciate the
small, wonderful things in life
Like cherry petals, ants, spoons, blades of grass, peeling paint, nuts
and bolts, dew, earlobes, discarded coins, scraps of paper, oil
rainbows in puddles, snowflakes, stray wisps of hair …


                                                                  Photo: Lily
The haiku way: How
you can make it
happen
1. Read haiku every day


             Daily Issa http://cat.xula.edu/issa/
             Mann Library, Cornell http://haiku.mannlib.cornell.edu/
             @dailyku
             tinywords.com
The haiku way
1.  Read haiku every day
2.  Write haiku every day
The haiku way
1.  Read haiku every day
2.  Write haiku every day
3.  Be alert to haiku moments


                   morning news
                   with the paper, I bring in
                   a cherry petal

                       Dylan Tweney
Haiku Basics: Immediacy

Right here, right now. Lookit this!




                                      Photo: Funkandjazz
Photo: intherough




Think small
   Mars landing --
   a tendril of red dust
   shifts from a footfall

           Alan Summers
Show, don’t tell
in the old stable
we made hot, passionate love
like wild horses do

   anonymous horrible poet


                               stolen kisses
                               barn swallows
                               twitter in the eaves

                                   Mike Farley
Contrast/
comparison
2 parts: short - long or long - short


                           the whoosh of steam
                           from the espresso machine –
                           frosty evening

                               Charles Trumbull
Use natural
language
If you can’t say it with a straight face, try again
in one breath the whole autumn

          Valeria Simonova-Cecon




“One breath
poetry”
  10-12 syllables is usually enough
Look at the world as a “what's
wrong with this picture?” puzzle
        mannequin faces
        a cosmetic counter woman
        offers a spritz

                Jeffrey Winke
                                   Photo: Lisa Brewster
Share your haiku with
others
ReadWritePoem.org
WorldHaikuReview.org
Haiku Poets of Northern California – hpnc.org

Or, just write haiku and send them to your friends, leave them
tucked in library books, on Muni, scrawled on the bathroom wall…
dylan@tweney.com

        @tinywords
        @dylan20




Happy haiku-ing
hum of the laptop
watching a lost world flicker to life

        Dylan Tweney

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Dylan Tweney on Practical Haiku

  • 1. by Dylan Tweney Practical Haiku How a tiny, ancient form of poetry can make your life better by making you more creative, a better writer, happier, nicer to be around, more productive, sexier …
  • 2. Everybody knows how to write haiku, right? 5 Haiku are easy 7 But sometimes they don’t make sense 5 Refrigerator Rolf Nelson, threadless.com
  • 3. Actually, it’s not so simple There’s a lot more to haiku than counting syllables. On a withered bough on a bare branch A crow alone is perching; a crow lands Autumn evening now. autumn dusk Basho, tr. Kenneth Yasuda Basho, tr. Jane Reichhold
  • 4. But it’s a lot more fun! sudden downpour – no one wins the wet-t-shirt contest David Giacalone
  • 5. How haiku helps you live better Haiku helps you write more precisely home addition– the carpenter's math penciled on drywall Barry George
  • 6. Photo: GregHickman Haiku helps you see The message that precedes all others -- in art as well as life -- is simple: pay attention Harlan Ellison
  • 7. Haiku teaches patience… Because you can’t always go out and make a haiku, you often have to wait for one to come to you.
  • 8. Haiku helps you appreciate the small, wonderful things in life Like cherry petals, ants, spoons, blades of grass, peeling paint, nuts and bolts, dew, earlobes, discarded coins, scraps of paper, oil rainbows in puddles, snowflakes, stray wisps of hair … Photo: Lily
  • 9. The haiku way: How you can make it happen 1. Read haiku every day Daily Issa http://cat.xula.edu/issa/ Mann Library, Cornell http://haiku.mannlib.cornell.edu/ @dailyku tinywords.com
  • 10. The haiku way 1.  Read haiku every day 2.  Write haiku every day
  • 11. The haiku way 1.  Read haiku every day 2.  Write haiku every day 3.  Be alert to haiku moments morning news with the paper, I bring in a cherry petal Dylan Tweney
  • 12. Haiku Basics: Immediacy Right here, right now. Lookit this! Photo: Funkandjazz
  • 13. Photo: intherough Think small Mars landing -- a tendril of red dust shifts from a footfall Alan Summers
  • 14. Show, don’t tell in the old stable we made hot, passionate love like wild horses do anonymous horrible poet stolen kisses barn swallows twitter in the eaves Mike Farley
  • 15. Contrast/ comparison 2 parts: short - long or long - short the whoosh of steam from the espresso machine – frosty evening Charles Trumbull
  • 16. Use natural language If you can’t say it with a straight face, try again
  • 17. in one breath the whole autumn Valeria Simonova-Cecon “One breath poetry” 10-12 syllables is usually enough
  • 18. Look at the world as a “what's wrong with this picture?” puzzle mannequin faces a cosmetic counter woman offers a spritz Jeffrey Winke Photo: Lisa Brewster
  • 19. Share your haiku with others ReadWritePoem.org WorldHaikuReview.org Haiku Poets of Northern California – hpnc.org Or, just write haiku and send them to your friends, leave them tucked in library books, on Muni, scrawled on the bathroom wall…
  • 20. dylan@tweney.com @tinywords @dylan20 Happy haiku-ing hum of the laptop watching a lost world flicker to life Dylan Tweney