1. Writing
Descriptions

2. • We have been working on extending ourselves
with our writing. This group of Dragonflies
looked at a picture and talked about what
they saw, how they felt and what they
wondered.

3. • Read the following descriptions get a picture
in your head and then see if it’s the same as
what you thought!
• A big thank you to Kerry for helping out.

4. Lucy H
It is a school bus. It looks like a trailer. This is
weird because a bike is carting a school bus.

5. Lachie
The carriage is filled with people and they’re late
for school. There is no one to give them a ride.
And the teacher would be wondering where
they are and the teacher would think they are
sick. The teacher has 13 children.

6. Zara
I can see a bike carrying a carriage. The bike has
3 wheels. And bags up on top of the carriage.
They are in India. They are near a shop. There
is a man out the front of the shop.

7. Milla
The school bus is yellow. It says BAL MANDIR
Public School. There is lots of people in the
carriage and there are 3 boys and there is 1
girl. On the yellow carriage on top of it is some
bags. But the bags wont fall off because it has
a bar on the side so they won’t fall off. It has
wheels on the bottom of it and there is 2
wheels at the back of it. There is a bike in front
of it.

8. Edward
• Today I see a school bus. It looks weird. There
is an ABCD shop. There is weird man walking.
He is being weird because HE IS ABOUT TO
GET RUNOVER! He is silly don’t you think?
There are drink bottles too!

9. Flynn
I feel nervous because I think it will break. They
look squashed. The place is India. I wonder
who will pedal the bike. It has three wheels.
They keep their bags on the roof.

10. Imogen
• It has a bike. It has a carriage. The look
squished. I feel happy.

11. Have you formed
an image in your
head?